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Hey Tim,

I’m going to be on vacation next month and I wanted to see if you could take care of my dog while I’m away.

As you know, I’ve been thinking about vacationing in Jamaica for a long time. Well, last week I finally took the plunge and decided to book a 2-week trip. I wish I could have booked a longer stay, but that is all the time I could get off work.

I would be so thankful if you watched Toto while I was away. He’s a very calm dog and doesn’t require much maintenance. All you will need to do is feed him twice a day and take him on a walk each evening, and there’s plenty of dog food in the house.

If you can do this favor for me, I will be happy to take you and your girlfriend out to El Gaucho because I know you love steak. I will even book a VIP room where many famous people have dined. Let me know if you can help me out with this.

Best regards,

Joe

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quynh_02

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Dear Joe, I am very happy to hear that you will be on vacation in Jamaica next month. Going to Jamaica is your big dream and now it comes true. I am so glad! In the letter, you have me to take care of your lovely puppy. To be honest, I want to sayto you that we are close friends so I am ready to help you. As you know, I am an animal lover especially for dogs, so I will take care of it as my own pet. I will feed him twice a day and take him for a walk every evening outside. Therefore, you can set your mind at rest. You do not need to worry about anything. I am sure that I will look after it carefully because I also love it like you. Thank you for remembering my hobby, I will tell my girlfriend Jessica that you will treat me and Jessica with a steak at the El Gaucho where many famous people come to eat it. I am sure that she will not miss this chance. Jamaica is a very attractive place with many nice beaches. I hope you will have a good memorable time in there. Enjoy your vacation and do not worry too much! Wish you an interesting vacation. Best, Tim
Gửi lúc: 23:59:18 ngày 06-04-2021
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2021-04-08 20:56:37

Dear Joe,

I am very happy to hear that you will be on vacation in Jamaica next month. Going to Jamaica is your big dream and now it comes true, which makes me so happy (dùng mệnh đề với từ nối which để thay thế cho mệnh đề đứng trước chỉ ước mơ thành hiện thức khiến bạn cảm thấy vui) . I am so glad! In the letter, you have me to take care dùng cấu trúc have sb do sth of your lovely puppy. To be honest, I want to say to you that we are close friends so I am ready to help you.

As you know, I am an animal lover, especially for dogs, so I will take care of it as my own pet. I will feed him twice a day and take him for on a walk every evening outside. Therefore, you can set your mind at rest. You do not need to worry about anything. I am sure that I will look after it carefully because I also love it like you.

Thank you for remembering my hobby, thiếu từ nối chuyển ý I will tell my girlfriend Jessica that you will treat me and Jessica with a steak invite us to have steak at the El Gaucho where many famous people come to eat it. I am sure that she will not miss this chance.

Jamaica is a very attractive place with many nice beaches. I hope you will have a good memorable time in there. Enjoy your vacation and do not worry too much! Wish you an interesting vacation.

Best,
Tim

Bạn viết bài phản hồi khá rõ ràng và đầy đủ nội dung, song cách diễn đạt của bạn cần được chú ý nhiều hơn, đặc biệt là 1 số cấu trúc câu nhé.

Điểm: 7.5

congnguyen0408

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Dear Joe, Firstly, I'm glad to receive this letter from you. And of course, it's my pleasure to take care of your dog for 2 weeks. Because I'm also free these days. Our company has done a very big project successfully so my boss give us a long holiday for relaxing. I've played with Toto before and he's very cute and easy-going dog. Not only he doesn't bark or bite me but also plays with me happily and in a friendly way. Don't worry about that. And you will be on vacation next month so I'll will come to your house a day before to let him stay in my house. Besides, I have to ask for more information about the dog such as: What food is suitable for him?, Does he have an allergy to something?,..... Finally, thank you so much for invite me and my girlfriend to enjoy dinner in El Gaucho, my favourite restaurant. I'm looking forward it Have a great trip. Best wishes, Tim
Gửi lúc: 23:06:32 ngày 06-04-2021
Điểm: 4/10
Time : 2021-04-08 20:45:43

Dear Joe,
Firstly, I'm glad to receive this letter from you. And of course, it's my pleasure to take care of your dog for 2 weeks. Because I'm also free these days câu fragment, mới có mệnh đề chỉ nguyên nhân không có mệnh đề chỉ kết quả. Our company has done a very big project successfully so my boss give us a long holiday for relaxing. mâu thuẫn ý trước
I've played with Toto before and he's very cute and easy-going dog. Not only he doesn't bark or bite me đảo ngữ khi dùng not only ở đầu câu but also plays with me happily and in a friendly way. Don't worry about that. And you will be on vacation next month so I'll will come to your house a day before to let him stay in my house. Besides, I have to ask for more information about the dog such as: What food is suitable for him?, Does he have an allergy to something?,..... dùng cụm danh từ khi liệt kê
Finally, thank you so much for invite Ving sau giới từ me and my girlfriend to enjoy dinner in El Gaucho, my favourite restaurant. I'm looking forward it.
Have a great trip.
Best wishes,
Tim

Bạn viết bài chưa thực sự rõ ràng, có sự mâu thuẫn nội dung. Bạn nên chú ý cách diễn đạt nhé.

precious02

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Dear Joe, I am very glad to receive your letter. It is so great to know that you are going on a trip in Jamaica next month. As you know, Jamaica is the most beautiful country that I would love to see. As you mentioned the previous letter, you will get me to take care of your dog. However, I am afraid that I cannot look after your dog because I have just got a new task from my senior. This is a good chance for me to prove my ability to my director. If I do well, I will get the promotion. Therefore, I have to finish the project at the next month, and the deadline is coming. Thus, I will ask my younger sister to look after your dog so that you can go on vacation in Jamaica next month if you want. Do you remember Teresa? Teresa is my younger sister. Last year, you attended her birthday party. She has just finished the National High School exam. She is currently waiting for the results. She seems quite free now. Before that, when she was a pupil at Harmon Middle School, she learned about the extracurricular program on how to raise dogs and cats. She has a basic knowledge about dogs and cats. She knows how to recognize health problems in animals. Hence, I am sure that my younger sister will take care of your dog well after you come back home. Thus, I wonder if you could tell me exactly when your trip would depart and return in order that my younger sister can arrange her schedule to look after your dog. Once again, please accept my sincerest apologies as I could not help you. Besides, I hope that you will have a wonderful trip in Jamaica and do not forget to take a lot of photos during that vacation. Yours, Tim
Gửi lúc: 22:51:32 ngày 06-04-2021
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2021-04-08 20:40:07

Dear Joe,

I am very glad to receive your letter. It is so great to know that you are going on a trip in Jamaica next month. As you know, Jamaica is the most beautiful country that I would love to see. As you mentioned in the previous letter, you will get me to take care of your dog. However, I am afraid that I cannot look after your dog because I have just got a new task from my senior. This is a good chance for me to prove my ability to my director. If I do well, I will get the promotion. Therefore, I have to finish the project at the end of the next month, and the deadline is coming. Thus, I will can ask my younger sister, Teresa to look after your dog so that you can go on vacation in Jamaica next month if you want.

Do you remember Teresa? Teresa is my younger sister. Last year, you attended her birthday party. She has just finished the National High School exam. She is currently waiting for the results. nên thêm ý để nối với ý đoạn trên: bạn có thể yên tâm vì ...(các nguyên nhân ở sau)She seems quite free now. Before that, when she was a pupil at Harmon Middle School, she learned about the extracurricular program on how to raise dogs and cats. She has a basic knowledge about dogs and cats. She knows how to recognize health problems in animals. Hence, I am sure that my younger sister will take care of your dog well after until you come back home. Thus, I wonder if you could tell me exactly when your trip would depart ai đó khởi hành chứ không phải chuyến đi khởi hành and return in order that my younger sister can arrange her schedule to look after your dog.

Once again, please accept my sincerest apologies as I could not help you. Besides, I hope that you will have a wonderful trip in Jamaica and do not forget to take a lot of photos during that vacation.

Yours,
Tim

Nhìn chung, bạn có ý tưởng khi từ chối lời đề nghị giúp đỡ, song giữa các ý và đoạn bạn thiếu sự liên kết và còn 1 số lỗi diễn đạt bạn nên lưu ý khắc phục nhé.

vietanh_nguyen46

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Hi Joe, I know you are business man and very busy for your job. You have a right decision for long time vacation. You should take little time to rest and refresh your power before handing in your new job 2 next weeks but I am really sorry for my refuse. As you know I am really busy in this time. My project has also be in last step before handing over my customer. I would take care your Toto, if I was free time nowadays. You know that I really love dog especially your Toto who is lovely dog. He is very nice. One or more than one meal per day it would be not a problem if I had free time. Beside my hardworking time, two next weeks I and my girlfriend are going to have an engage party in my farmhouse so that we have to take time to prepare it carefully. I am really sorry because I can't help you in this time. Sincerely Tim
Gửi lúc: 22:34:42 ngày 06-04-2021
Điểm: 2/10
Time : 2021-04-08 20:31:52

Hi Joe,

I know you are business man and very busy for your job. You have a right decision for long time vacation. You should take little time to rest and refresh your power before handing in your new job 2 next weeks but I am really sorry for my refuse. As you know I am really busy in this time. My project has also be in last step before handing over my customer. lan man nội dung

I would take care of your Toto, if I was had free time nowadays cần khẳng định có giúp chăm sóc chó hay không chứ không phải đưa ra điều kiện nữa. You know that I really love dog especially your Toto who which (đại từ quan hệ thay thế cho danh từ chỉ vật) is a lovely dog. He is very nice. One or more than one meal per day it would be not a problem if I had free time?. Beside my hardworking time, two next weeks I and my girlfriend are going to have an engage party in my farmhouse so that we have to take time to prepare it carefully.diễn đạt để làm rõ ý

I am really sorry because I can't help you in this time.

Sincerely, dùng văn phong formal như Best wishes, Love,
Tim

Bạn viết bài lan man nội dung, diễn đạt ý rất rối. Hãy lưu ý luyện viết nhiều hơn nhé.

Bạn cần viết thư tới Joe với cương vị là Tim để phản hồi thư nhờ chăm sóc con chó khi anh ấy đi nghỉ ở Jamaica như sau:

- Thể hiện thái độ vui mừng khi biết Joe sắp đi nghỉ ở Jamaica 2 tuần vì đó là mong ước của anh ấy

- Cám ơn anh ấy đã tin tưởng nhờ bạn chăm sóc chó khi anh ấy đi vắng

- Chia sẻ với mối quan tâm của anh ấy đối với việc chăm sóc con cho khi anh ấy đi vắng: chấp nhận giúp đỡ anh ấy, khẳng định có thể cho chó ăn 2 lần 1 ngày, cho cho đi dạo buổi tối

- Cám ơn anh ấy vì đã quan tâm đến sở thích ăn thịt bò của bạn và cám ơn lời mời bạn và bạn gái đến nhà hàng El Gaucho ăn tối

- Vui vẻ chấp nhận lời mời đó và hẹn ngày đi ăn

- Chúc cho chuyến đi nghỉ của anh ấy vui vẻ

 

hamy789

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Hi Joe, I am going to help you to take care of your dog. It's my pleasure and I'll follow your advice to take care of
Gửi lúc: 21:52:42 ngày 06-04-2021
Điểm: 0/10
Time : 2021-04-07 11:39:20

Bạn cần viết thư tới Joe với cương vị là Tim để phản hồi thư nhờ chăm sóc con chó khi anh ấy đi nghỉ ở Jamaica như sau:

Opening: Dear Joe,

Body:

- Thể hiện thái độ vui mừng khi biết Joe sắp đi nghỉ ở Jamaica 2 tuần vì đó là mong ước của anh ấy

- Cám ơn anh ấy đã tin tưởng nhờ bạn chăm sóc chó khi anh ấy đi vắng

- Chia sẻ với mối quan tâm của anh ấy đối với việc chăm sóc con cho khi anh ấy đi vắng: chấp nhận giúp đỡ anh ấy, khẳng định có thể cho chó ăn 2 lần 1 ngày, cho cho đi dạo buổi tối

- Cám ơn anh ấy vì đã quan tâm đến sở thích ăn thịt bò của bạn và cám ơn lời mời bạn và bạn gái đến nhà hàng El Gaucho ăn tối

- Vui vẻ chấp nhận lời mời đó và hẹn ngày đi ăn

- Chúc cho chuyến đi nghỉ của anh ấy vui vẻ

Closing: Best wishes,

Signature: Tim

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