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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to make the necessary arrangements for our stay at your hotel on 22nd and 23rd November. I will travel with my parents, wife and 7 years old son. I am hoping that you would be able to provide us with suitable accommodation and assist us to enjoy our trip.

We will arrive on 22nd November and check out from your hotel on 24th November before 12.00 pm. We are expecting two double size bedrooms with attached bathrooms, hot water and air cooler facilities. We would prefer rooms with sea view and room service. I would really appreciate if the rooms are on the same floor.

I am also interested to know about recreational activities in the vicinity. Despite my parent’s age, they are very lively and would love to go to the theatre, beach and amusement parks, if available. I would also like to know about the market, where we can buy traditional items and souvenirs.

Please notify me of the cost that will incur on our trip at your earliest with the facilities you can offer. I am expecting a comprehensive reply from your side about the details of activities and other information I requested.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Fahad Sultan

Direction: As if you are the manager of the seaside hotel, read the letter and give a suitable response.


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precious02
Gửi lúc: 2021-03-09 22:54:13
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quynh_02

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Dear Mr. Fahad Sultan, I am so glad to know that you have chosen our hotel for your family and your parents to stay for two days from 22 to 23 November. In fact, I would like to give you some information about our hotel. Our hotel is one of the top hotels in over the world. It is a modern complex with nightclubs, theaters and souvenir shops. In fact, our hotel consists of 18 floors and 80 rooms (50 single -rooms, 30 double-rooms) all rooms have attached a bedroom, a private bathroom, a hot water and an air cooler facilities. Besides, because of our hotel near the sea, all of our rooms have balconies and seaside view. Therefore, I would like to confirm that on November 22nd and 23rd, our hotel has rooms available and I warmly welcome your parents and your family to our hotel. As your requests, I would like to give you some information about activities during your family and your parents stay here. The time when your parents and your family stay here will have a baking contest with this people who live in the vicinity. The organizer will give your parents the materials. Your parents only have 30 minutes to do it. The winner of the team will receive a reward of 1,000 dollars. Thus, your parents can take part in the contest and understand more about the local culture as well as your parents will have a lot of fun. There is a big theatre on the 3th floor of our hotel, your family and your parents can go there to watch music or musicals. On the second floor, we have a souvenir shop, your your parents can go there or they can walk around 100 meters far from our hotel to find lots of the traditional markets where the goods are cheaper and more diverse. Normally, the travelers like to stop at the second floor where hundreds of souvenirs are sold, most of them are symbols for the traditional culture of our hotel. The amusement parks are not too far from our hotel, so your parents can go there by walk or by bus. The beach is behind our hotel, it only takes your parents 10 minutes walk to arrive. The beach here is clear and blue and the weather is sunny and cool. Thus, your parents can come here to relax. Finally, I send you a price list with many details of our hotel's services as well as room rates. The total cost will depend on how many service you get. If you need more information, please feel free to contact me at number1800.1568. I hope that we will have opportunity to serve your parents and your family. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards, Jessica Jeremy
Gửi lúc: 23:57:02 ngày 09-03-2021
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2021-03-10 20:40:19

Dear Mr. Fahad Sultan,

I am so glad to know that you have chosen our hotel for your family and your parents to stay for two days from 22 to 23 24 November. In fact, I would like to give you some information about our hotel. Our hotel is one of the top hotels in over the world. It is a modern complex with nightclubs, theaters and souvenir shops. In fact, our hotel consists of 18 floors and 80 rooms (50 single -rooms, 30 double-rooms) all rooms which (dùng mệnh đề quan hệ) have attached a bedroom, a private bathroom, a hot water and an air cooler facilities. Besides, because of our hotel near the sea bạn dùng cụm từ này không phù hợp, giống như mệnh đề nhưng thiếu tobe thôi, all of our rooms have balconies and seaside view. bạn miêu tả về khách sạn của bạn, xong lại chốt lại kết quả therefore (có phòng vào ngày 22,23) là chưa được thuyết phục. Bạn nên để phần thông tin này phản hồi các câu hỏi về dịch vụ ở đoạn sau thì hợp lý hơn Therefore, I would like to confirm that on November 22nd and 23rd, our hotel has rooms available and I warmly welcome your parents and your family to our hotel.

As your requests, I would like to give you some information about activities during your family and your parents' sở hữu cách stay here. The time when your parents and your family stay here will have a baking contest bạn diễn đạt chủ ngữ và động từ word by word, thời gian không thể có cái gì được, bạn có thể diễn đạt during your stay in our hotel, there will be ...thì hợp lý hơn with this không dùng this với danh từ số nhiều people who live in the vicinity. The organizer will give your parents the materials. Your parents only have 30 minutes to do it. The winner of the team will receive a reward of 1,000 dollars. Thus, your parents can take part in the contest and understand more about the local culture as well as and your parents will have a lot of fun.

There is a big theatre on the 3th floor of our hotel, your family and your parents your family đã bao gồm cả your parents rồi can go there to watch music or musicals sử dụng động từ chưa phù hợp. On the second floor, we have a souvenir shop, your your parents can go there or they can walk around 100 meters far from our hotel to find lots of the traditional markets where the goods are cheaper and more diverse. Normally, the travelers like to stop at go to the second floor where hundreds of souvenirs are sold, most of them which (đại từ quan hệ) are symbols for the traditional culture of our hotel khách du lịch muốn mua đồ lưu niệm của địa phương nói chung chứ không phải khách đi du lịch để chọn biểu tượng văn hóa của khách sạn được.

The amusement parks are not too far from our hotel, so your parents can go there by walk on foot or by bus. The beach is behind our hotel, so (từ nối) it only takes your parents 10 minutes to walk to arrive. The beach here is clear and blue and the weather is sunny and cool. Thus, your parents can come here to relax.

Finally, I send you a price list with many details of our hotel's services as well as room rates. The total cost will depend on how many services you get. If you need more information, please feel free to contact me at number1800.1568. I hope that we will have opportunity to serve your parents and your family. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Kind regards,
Jessica Jeremy

Bạn phản hồi rõ ràng và đầy đủ nội dung, song có đôi chỗ do tham ý nên bạn viết chưa được tốt lắm. Hơn  nữa, có 1 số lỗi ngữ pháp bạn nên lưu ý nhé. Cố gắng hơn nhé.

Điểm: 7.5

precious02

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Dear Mr. Fahad Sultan, I am really glad to hear that your parents and your family plan to travel to our hotel to stay for three days from November 22nd to 24th. Our hotel is always ready to welcome you to us. We believe that we will make you satisfied because providing the best services and bringing the best impressions to your parents and your family are our honor. Hence, as a manager of the hotel, I would like to provide you some information about entertaining places and interesting activities of our hotel. Our hotel is a popular tourist destination, in November, the weather is very nice, so your parents and your family can go sightseeing and enjoy fresh air to stay there. Furthermore, in the early days of November, our hotel organizes a "Loving and warm family meal" contest which cooks traditional foods. If your parents love this contest, they can join the contest to find fun and get to know the people who take part in it. Indeed, our hotel is located in the seaside with a beautiful and long beach. If your parents come here at dawn, they can see a deep blue sky in the front of them, the waves crashing gently around the sandbank. In the evening, your parents can walk or go to the beach if they want. Near our hotel, there are a lot of markets which are good for shopping. Your parents can pick a few items as gifts for their loved ones. In addition, there is a big theater about 200 kilometers from our hotel. If your parents want to relax, they can come there by bus or subway. Besides, there are amusement parks near our hotel, it will take your parents about 9 minutes by the bus route number 105 or route number 45 to come there. Regarding your question, following our scheduled list of booking rooms, as of on the 22rd and 24th of November, we will have five empty rooms which were built and equipped identically. Each room has an area of 36 square meters. There is a water heater, an air cooler, two double bedrooms and a private bathroom inside the room. Therefore, I will offer rooms for wide ranges of selection. The price for a single- room is 179 USD per day. The price for one-double room is 259USD per day. An extra charge of 39 USD per day will be added if you want to have the balcony with seaside view and whole your family on the same floor. Only breakfasts will be served free of charges. Wi-fi fees and laundry service charges will be paid on the check-out. Therefore, if you are satisfied with the price above reasonable, please make a reservation of 10% in advance according to my account number enclosed to this mail, I will reserve the room for you. I hope the above information is necessary for you. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me for the clarification. I am looking forward to welcoming your parents and your family. Best regards, Linda Grace The manager of the hotel
Gửi lúc: 22:54:13 ngày 09-03-2021
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2021-03-10 20:54:29

Dear Mr. Fahad Sultan,

I am really glad to hear that your parents and your family's sở hữu cách, đã dùng family bao gồm tất cả mọi người rồi nên không cần your parents nữa plan to travel to choose our hotel to stay for three days from November 22nd to 24th. Our hotel is always ready to welcome you to us. We believe that we will make you satisfied because providing the best services and bringing the best impressions to your parents and your family are our honor. Hence, as a manager of the hotel, I would like to provide you some information about entertaining places and interesting activities of our hotel.

Our hotel is a popular tourist destination, in November, the weather is very nice 2 ý này không tương quan nhau, bạn liệt kê như vậy không được hợp lý, so your parents and your family can go sightseeing and enjoy fresh air to stay there. Furthermore, in on (dùng với ngày) the early days of November, our hotel organizes tương lai đơn vì hành động chưa diễn ra a "Loving and warm family meal" contest in which participants cooks traditional foods. If your parents love this contest, they can join the contest to find fun and get to know the people who take part in it.

Indeed, our hotel is located in near (không thể ở trên bờ biển được) the seaside with a beautiful and long beach. If your parents come here at dawn, they can see a deep blue sky in the front of them, the waves crashing gently around the sandbank. In the evening, your parents can walk or go to the beach if they want. Near our hotel, there are a lot of markets which are good for shopping. Your parents can pick a few items as gifts for their loved ones.

In addition, there is a big theater about 200 kilometers from our hotel. If your parents want to relax, they can come there by bus or subway. Besides, there are amusement parks near our hotel, it will take your parents about 9 minutes by the bus route number 105 or route number 45 to come there.

(Regarding your question, following our scheduled list of booking rooms, as of on the 22rd and 24th of November, we will have five empty rooms which were built and equipped identically. Each room has an area of 36 square meters. There is a water heater, an air cooler, two double bedrooms and a private bathroom inside the room. Therefore, I will offer rooms for wide ranges of selection. The price for a single- room is 179 USD per day. The price for one-double room is 259USD per day. An extra charge of 39 USD per day will be added if you want to have the balcony with seaside view and whole your family on the same floor. Only breakfasts will be served free of charges. Wi-fi fees and laundry service charges will be paid on the check-out. Therefore, if you are satisfied with the price above reasonable, please make a reservation of 10% in advance according to my account number enclosed to this mail, I will reserve the room for you).Bạn phải phản hồi nội dung này trước hết vì khách sạn của bạn còn phòng thì mới giới thiệu các dịch vụ cũng như hoạt động trải nghiệm khi đến chứ

I hope the above information is necessary for you. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me for the clarification. I am looking forward to welcoming your parents and your family.

Best regards,
Linda Grace
The manager of the hotel

Bạn triển khai ý phản hồi khá hay, song cách bạn sắp xếp nội dung phản hồi không phù hợp dẫn đến bài viết của bạn không được đánh giá cao. Hãy chú ý khắc phục nhé.

Điểm: 6.5

nguyenanhvietpl

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to make the necessary arrangements for our stay at your hotel on 22nd and 23rd November. I will travel with my parents, wife and 7 years old son. I am hoping that you would be able to provide us with suitable accommodation and assist us to enjoy our trip. We will arrive on 22nd November and check out from your hotel on 24th November before 12.00 pm. We are expecting two double size bedrooms with attached bathrooms, hot water and air cooler facilities. We would prefer rooms with sea view and room service. I would really appreciate if the rooms are on the same floor. I am also interested to know about recreational activities in the vicinity. Despite my parent’s age, they are very lively and would love to go to the theatre, beach and amusement parks, if available. I would also like to know about the market, where we can buy traditional items and souvenirs. Please notify me of the cost that will incur on our trip at your earliest with the facilities you can offer. I am expecting a comprehensive reply from your side about the details of activities and other information I requested.
Gửi lúc: 20:44:41 ngày 09-03-2021
Điểm: 0/10
Time : 2021-03-10 20:15:23

Bạn cần viết thư tới Fahad Sultan với cương vị là 1 quản lý khách sạn ở bờ biển để phản hồi thư đặt phòng và đề nghị giúp đỡ để tận hưởng chuyến du lịch về các thông tin cũng như dịch vụ vui chơi, giải trí và mua sắm ở gần khách sạn như sau:

Opening: Dear Fahad Sultan,

Body:

- Cám ơn vì đã quan tâm và chọn khách sạn của bạn để nghỉ ngơi cho chuyến du lịch của gia đìnhFahad Sultan

- Kiểm tra lại và xác nhận còn phòng đáp ứng yêu cầu của Fahad Sultan:

+ Ngày: 22/11-24/11

+ Phòng đôi: còn phòng, có phòng tắm, có nước ấm, có điều hòa, có view nhìn ra biển và có dịch vụ phòng

+ Có 2 phòng cùng tầng: xác nhận có hoặc không

- Chi phí phòng (bạn có thể cung cấp thông tin trước)

- Cung cấp thông tin về dịch vụ vui chơi, giải trí và địa điểm mua sắm đồ lưu niệm

- Mong sớm gặp và cung cấp dịch vụ tốt nhất cho gia đình Fahad Sultan

Closing: Yours Sincerely,

Signature: chữ kí



foxagency

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Dear Fahad Sultanm, It was a pleasure to receive your inquiries about our rooms and other information. First of all, I want to thank you for choosing Beach Hotel for your trip. Beach Hotel is proud to be one of the best hotels in this area so we are confident that we could provide you with the best rooms and services that will make your stay happy and comfortable. According to your letter, you have asked about two double size bedrooms with attached bathrooms, hot water, air cooler facilities and room service. I am happy to inform you that all of our rooms could meet your demands. I understand that you would prefer rooms with sea view that are on the same floor. But unfortunately, we only have two rooms with sea view are available on the fifth and seventh floor. You also can choose two rooms on the fifth floor but only one room has ocean view. The price of the room with ocean view including service is 75$ per day and the one without ocean view is 60$ per day. I am happy to hear that your parents are very lively and would like to participate some recreational activities. There is a really big amusement park with various games and shows near our hotel that lots of tourists and local people like visiting. You and your family can visit it from 8 a.m to 7 p.m. Besides , you can go to the beach anytime to enjoy the fresh atmosphere, look at the sea, eat seafood, talk with friendly locals and if you want you can help locals with fishing. There is a big local market about 4 km from our hotel where you can find traditional items and souvenirs. I think you and your family will like the colorful and unique goods there very much. Please inform us the rooms you want to stay so that we can book your rooms as soon as possible. If you have any other questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to wellcome you here in Beach Hotel. Yours faithfully,
Gửi lúc: 15:52:10 ngày 09-03-2021
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2021-03-09 20:35:02

Dear Fahad Sultanm,
It was is (dùng hiện tại đơn) a pleasure to receive your inquiries about our rooms and other information. First of all, I want to thank you for choosing Beach Hotel for your trip. Beach Hotel is proud to be one of the best hotels in this area so we are confident that we could can (khả năng ở hiện tại) provide you with the best rooms and services that will make your stay happy and comfortable.
According to your letter, you have asked about two double size bedrooms with attached bathrooms, hot water, air cooler facilities and room service chuyển về làm mệnh đề quan hệ sau danh từ demands ở câu sau. I am happy to inform you that all of our rooms could can meet your demands that .... I understand that you would prefer rooms with sea view that are on the same floor. But unfortunately, we only have two rooms with sea view which (dùng mệnh đề quan hệ) are available on the fifth and seventh floor. You also can choose two rooms on the fifth floor but only one room has ocean view. The price of the room with ocean view including service is 75$ per day and the one without ocean view is 60$ per day.
I am happy to hear that your parents are very lively and would like to participate some recreational activities. There is a really big amusement park with various games and shows near our hotel that lots of tourists and local people like visiting. You and your family can visit it from 8 a.m to 7 p.m. Besides , you can go to the beach anytime to enjoy the fresh atmosphere, look at the sea, eat seafood, talk with friendly locals and if you want you can help locals with fishing help sb do sth. thiếu từ nối chuyển ý There is a big local market about 4 km from our hotel where you can find traditional items and souvenirs. I think you and your family will like the colorful and unique goods there very much.
Please inform us the rooms you want to stay so that we can book your rooms  whether you book these rooms we mention above or not as soon as possible. If you have any other questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to wellcome Ving sau look forward to you here in Beach Hotel.
Yours faithfully,

Chữ kí?

Bạn viết bài tương đối ổn các nội dung phản hồi. Tuy nhiên, có đôi chỗ bạn diễn đạt chưa được rõ ràng lắm. Hãy lưu ý nhận xét trên để khắc phục nhé.

Bạn cần viết thư tới Fahad Sultan với cương vị là 1 quản lý khách sạn ở bờ biển để phản hồi thư đặt phòng và đề nghị giúp đỡ để tận hưởng chuyến du lịch về các thông tin cũng như dịch vụ vui chơi, giải trí và mua sắm ở gần khách sạn như sau:

Opening: Dear Fahad Sultan,

Body:

- Cám ơn vì đã quan tâm và chọn khách sạn của bạn để nghỉ ngơi cho chuyến du lịch của gia đìnhFahad Sultan

- Kiểm tra lại và xác nhận còn phòng đáp ứng yêu cầu của Fahad Sultan:

+ Ngày: 22/11-24/11

+ Phòng đôi: còn phòng, có phòng tắm, có nước ấm, có điều hòa, có view nhìn ra biển và có dịch vụ phòng

+ Có 2 phòng cùng tầng: xác nhận có hoặc không

- Chi phí phòng (bạn có thể cung cấp thông tin trước)

- Cung cấp thông tin về dịch vụ vui chơi, giải trí và địa điểm mua sắm đồ lưu niệm

- Mong sớm gặp và cung cấp dịch vụ tốt nhất cho gia đình Fahad Sultan

Closing: Yours Sincerely,

Signature: chữ kí

tuDZ2019

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your hotel on 22nd and 23rd November. I will travel with my parents, wife and 7 years old son. I am hoping that you would be able to provide us with suitable accommodation and assist us to enjoy our trip. We will arrive on 22nd November and check out from your hotel on 24th November before 12.00 pm. We are expecting two double size bedrooms with attached bathrooms, hot water and air cooler facilities. We would prefer rooms with sea view and room service. I would really appreciate if the rooms are on the same floor. I am also interested to know about recreational activities in the vicinity. Despite my parent’s age, they are very lively and would love to go to the theatre, beach and amusement parks, if available. I would also like to know about the market, where we can buy traditional items and souvenirs. Please notify me of the cost that will incur on our trip at your earliest with the facilities you can offer. I am expecting a comprehensive reply from your side about the details of activities and other information I requested. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Fahad Sultan Direction: As if you are the manager
Gửi lúc: 11:32:38 ngày 09-03-2021
Điểm: 0/10
Time : 2021-03-09 19:45:22

Bạn cần viết thư tới Fahad Sultan với cương vị là 1 quản lý khách sạn ở bờ biển để phản hồi thư đặt phòng và đề nghị giúp đỡ để tận hưởng chuyến du lịch về các thông tin cũng như dịch vụ vui chơi, giải trí và mua sắm ở gần khách sạn như sau:

Opening: Dear Fahad Sultan,

Body:

- Cám ơn vì đã quan tâm và chọn khách sạn của bạn để nghỉ ngơi cho chuyến du lịch của gia đìnhFahad Sultan

- Kiểm tra lại và xác nhận còn phòng đáp ứng yêu cầu của Fahad Sultan:

+ Ngày: 22/11-24/11

+ Phòng đôi: còn phòng, có phòng tắm, có nước ấm, có điều hòa, có view nhìn ra biển và có dịch vụ phòng

+ Có 2 phòng cùng tầng: xác nhận có hoặc không

- Chi phí phòng (bạn có thể cung cấp thông tin trước)

- Cung cấp thông tin về dịch vụ vui chơi, giải trí và địa điểm mua sắm đồ lưu niệm

- Mong sớm gặp và cung cấp dịch vụ tốt nhất cho gia đình Fahad Sultan

Closing: Yours Sincerely,

Signature: chữ kí

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