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Dear Bella,

Hope you are doing fine and enjoying the season. I am so happy that you asked me to babysit Anna for you. She is such an adorable child and I love spending time with her. I would be happy to babysit her for you but due to my exam at the university the next Monday, I am afraid I cannot spare time on Saturday. However, I will be free the next week and would be happy to look after her if you want.

I will be horribly busy studying this whole week and during the weekends as I have an important exam next Monday. My term final result will depend on this exam and I have to dedicate my time to prepare for it. I hope you understand that I cannot spare time before my exam even after I wish I could. However, I will be free the next weekend and would like to babysit for you in case you go out then.

As I remember, I charged you 20 dollars an hour last time and the charge would be the same this time as well. In case you need my service for more than 8 hours a day, you should inform me beforehand.

With lots of love.

Yours truly,

Emma

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quynh_02

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Dear Ms. Emma, Thank you for letting me know why you cannot come to babysit for me as you promised on this Saturday. Actually, I understand and sympathize with you. I know that learning is always the first priority and if I were you, I would do the same. This Saturday, I am not at work so I can look after my daughter. You do not need to worry much. Next Saturday, you can come to babysit Anna for me. Actually, I need an experienced and reliable baby minder to babysit my daughter. And I believe that you can do it. Regarding the babysitting Anna, my daughter, I would like to request you to do some things as follows. My daughter is 39 months old. She is very naughty and impatient. Furthermore, Anna often asks for unreasonable things, so you should not let my child do anything she wants. Anna, my daughter will feed fifth times a day including 3 main meals and 2 light meals. I have cooked and written the names on the each box and put them in the refrigerator. Before feeding my daughter, you must put the food in the microwave to warm up the food and then you feed it to my daughter. Remember, you are not allowed to feed my daughter cold food, it will be difficult for her to digest. Moreover, you should keep her away from junk foods, and you absolutely must not feed a candy to my daughter. Besides, I would like to tell you that I currently try to encourage my daughter to use chopsticks instead of spoon and I want you teach my daughter how to feed herself without using spoon. In the afternoon, you can take Anna to the children park near my house for a walk to help her familiarize herself with other babies here. You should wear a warm coat, a hat and a mask for my daughter before taking her out. Anna often goes to bed at 10:00 pm, so before going to bed, you make a warm glass of milk to her, take her go to the toilet and help her brush her teeth. It would be great if you sing some rhymes for her to fall asleep. She especially likes the songs such as Five Little Ducks, Twinkle,Twinkle, Little Star and Sweet Dreams. As for the payment, I absolutely agree with your charge. I highly appreciate your specific skill in looking after children and whole-hearted attitude about taking care of my little kid. Thus, I will give you a tip of $40 if you take good care of Anna. If there are any emergencies, you should call me right away via 0905689876. Finally, I hope you donot forget what I have written that in great detail in this letter. I wish you the best for your examination, and I look forward to seeing you next week. Warm regards, Bella
Gửi lúc: 23:52:06 ngày 14-07-2020
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2020-07-18 16:54:32

Dear Ms. Emma,

Thank you for letting me know why you cannot come to babysit for me as you promised on this Saturday. Actually, I understand and sympathize with you. I know that learning is always the first priority and if I were you, I would do the same.

This Saturday, I am not at work so I can look after my daughter. You do not need to worry much. Next Saturday, you can come to babysit Anna for me. Actually, I need an experienced and reliable baby minder to babysit my daughter. And I believe that you can do it. Regarding to the babysitting Anna, my daughter, I would like to request you to do some things as follows.

My daughter is 39 months old. She is very naughty and impatient. Furthermore, Anna often asks for unreasonable things, so you should not let my child do anything she wants. Anna, my daughter will feed fifth times a day including 3 main meals and 2 light meals. I have cooked and written the names on the each box and put them in the refrigerator. Before feeding my daughter, you must put the food in the microwave to warm up the food and then you feed it to my daughter. Remember, you are not allowed to feed my daughter cold food, it will be difficult for her to digest. Moreover, you should keep her away from junk foods, and you absolutely must not feed a candy to my daughter. Besides, I would like to tell you that I currently try to encourage my daughter to use chopsticks instead of spoon and I want you teach my daughter how to feed herself without using spoon.

In the afternoon, you can take Anna to the children park near my house for a walk to help her familiarize herself with other babies here. You should wear a warm coat, a hat and a mask for my daughter before taking her out.

Anna often goes to bed at 10:00 pm, so before going to bed, you make a warm glass of milk to her, take her go to the toilet and help her brush her teeth. It would be great if you sing some rhymes for her to fall asleep. She especially likes the songs such as Five Little Ducks, Twinkle,Twinkle, Little Star and Sweet Dreams.
bạn phản hồi thư từ chối trông trẻ chứ không phải đi tìm người trông trẻ, do đó không phải miêu tả chi tiết về đứa trẻ cũng như yêu cầu đối với việc trông trẻ

As for the payment, I absolutely agree with your charge. I highly appreciate your specific skill in looking after children and whole-hearted attitude about taking care of my little kid. Thus, I will give you a tip of $40 if you take good care of Anna. If there are any emergencies, you should call me right away via 0905689876.

Finally, I hope you donot forget what I have written that in great detail in this letter. I wish you the best result for your examination, and I look forward to seeing you next week.

Warm regards,
Bella

 

Bạn viết bài cần chú ý các ý và các chi tiết cần thiết cho bài viết, tránh viết thừa ý nhé.

quyenthe2007

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Dear Emma I Know you very busy and i will give u many time , you can study anymore to prepare for next exam in the university . If u can't look after Anna , I can agree , You will come to visit and look after Anna in more days if you Exam finished , What about the money? I will give you 20 dollars in one hour too , if i need you eight hours in one day , i will say with you Good luck with the exam With very More Loves Your Friend Bella
Gửi lúc: 20:14:49 ngày 14-07-2020
Điểm: 1/10
Time : 2020-07-17 20:46:03

Dear Emma,

I Know you thiếu tobe very busy and i viết hoa đại từ nhân xưng I will give u viết đầy đủ, không viết tắt many time không dùng many với danh từ không đếm được, you can study anymore to prepare for
next exam in the university . If u can't
look after Anna , I can agree , You will come to visit and look after Anna in more days if you Exam finished , What about the money? diễn đạt lại để làm rõ ý

I will give you 20 dollars in one hour too , if i need
you eight hours in one day , i will say with you


Good luck with the exam

With very More Loves


Your Friend

Yours truly,

Bella

Hãy chú ý luyện viết nhiều hơn nhé. Bạn cần viết thư tới Emma với cương vị là Bella để phản hồi thư từ chối trông Anna cho cô ấy vào cuối tuần này như sau:

Opening: Dear Emma,

Body:

- Cám ơn thư của Emma thông báo về việc cô ấy không thể nhận trông Anna cho bạn

- Cám ơn tình cảm yêu quý mà cô ấy dành cho Anna

- Thông cảm với nguyên nhân cô ấy từ chối: cô ấy phải chuẩn bị cho kì thi cuối kì

- Chia sẻ với những vất vả khi phải chuẩn bị cho kì thi của cô ấy và chúc cô ấy thi tốt

- Phản hồi đề nghị trông Anna vào tuần sau khi cô ấy thi xong:

+ Nếu bạn cần, bạn sẽ phản hồi lại

+ Giá tiền trông theo giờ: có thay đổi hay không

- Chúc cô ấy đạt kết quả cao trong kì thi tới 1 lần nữa

Closing: Best wishes,

Signature: Bella

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precious02

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Dear Emma, It is a pity that you cannot babysit for me this weekend. To be honest, it is so difficult for me to find a caring babysitter like you to look after my little daughter while I leave home. In fact, our relatives are so far away from me so it is really inconvenient to invite them to look after my child for just one day. Thus, I will try my best to find another person as soon as possible to babysit for me during the time you are busy. Hence, I would like you to come and babysit my child next week. According to what you wrote in the previous letter, I totally agree with the price you proposed in your letter. The important thing here is that you have to look after Anna very carefully. And here are my requirements The first thing I require that Anna must get up at 7 and go to bed at 9pm. Next, Anna will feed 3 meals a day. Food for my daughter, I will prepare and put it inside refrigerator, you just need to cook and feed the baby. Remember, Anna is allergic to onions and green onions, so be careful when you cook and feed my little daughter. The last thing please do not let her alone, always keep an eye on her, and remember don't leave her watching TV more than 3 hours per day. After the main meal, she needs to drink a glass of milk. Thenn, you brush her teeth and make the sign of the cross before going to bed. You should sing a song to lull Anna. You remember to put her teddy beside her. If not, Anna will not sleep and she will cry. My phone number is 090 3324 6357. Please call me if you need anything. Finally, I hope you will help me look after Anna well. If anything is not understood, please don't hesitate to call me. I wish you luck and success in your recent examination. I look forward to seeing you next Saturday. Kind regards, Bella
Gửi lúc: 19:44:39 ngày 14-07-2020
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2020-07-18 16:50:11

Dear Emma,

It is a pity that you cannot babysit Anna for me this weekend. To be honest, it is so difficult for me to find a caring babysitter like you to look after my little daughter while I leave home. In fact, our relatives are so far away from me so it is really inconvenient to invite them to look after my child for just one day. Thus, I will try my best to find another person as soon as possible to babysit for me during the time you are busy. Hence, I would like you to come and babysit my child next week.

According to what you wrote in the previous letter, I totally agree with the price you proposed in your letter. The important thing here is that you have to look after Anna very carefully. And here are my requirements

The first thing I require that Anna must get up at 7 and go to bed at 9pm. Next, Anna will feed thể bị động 3 meals a day. Food for my daughter, I will prepare and put it inside refrigerator, you just need to cook and feed the baby. Remember, Anna is allergic to onions and green onions, so be careful when you cook and feed my little daughter. The last thing Lastly, (dùng từ nối với mệnh đề chứ không dùng cụm danh từ, nếu muốn dùng cụm danh từ bạn cần dùng mệnh đề danh ngữ như sau: the last thing is that ...) please do not let her alone, always keep an eye on her, and remember don't not to leave let her watching watch TV more than 3 hours per day.

After the main meal, she needs to drink a glass of milk. Thenn chính tả, you brush her teeth and make the sign of the cross before going to bed. You should sing a song to lull Anna. You remember to put her teddy beside her. If not, Anna will not sleep and she will cry. My phone number is 090 3324 6357. Please call me if you need anything.

Finally, I hope you will help me look after Anna well. If anything is not understood clear, please don't hesitate to call me. I wish you luck and success in your recent examination. I look forward to seeing you next Saturday.

Kind regards,
Bella

 

Bạn cần phản hồi rõ ràng hơn đến nguyên nhân cô ấy từ chối trông trẻ cho bạn vào cuối tuần và bỏ nội dung các yêu cầu cụ thể để tránh thừa ý. Bởi thư đề bài là thư từ chối nhé.

Phuongdung20

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Ngày tham gia: 14-06-2018

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Bella thân mến Hy vọng bạn đang làm tốt và tận hưởng mùa. Tôi rất vui khi bạn yêu cầu tôi trông trẻ Anna cho bạn. Cô ấy là một đứa trẻ đáng yêu và tôi thích dành thời gian với cô ấy. Tôi sẽ rất vui khi được trông nom cô ấy cho bạn nhưng do kỳ thi của tôi ở trường đại học vào thứ hai tới, tôi sợ rằng tôi không thể dành thời gian vào thứ bảy. Tuy nhiên, tôi sẽ được tự do vào tuần tới và sẽ rất vui khi được chăm sóc cô ấy nếu bạn muốn. Tôi sẽ bận rộn khủng khiếp khi học cả tuần này và trong những ngày cuối tuần vì tôi có một kỳ thi quan trọng vào thứ Hai tới. Kết quả cuối cùng của học kỳ của tôi sẽ phụ thuộc vào kỳ thi này và tôi phải dành thời gian của mình để chuẩn bị cho nó. Tôi hy vọng bạn hiểu rằng tôi không thể dành thời gian trước kỳ thi của mình ngay cả sau khi tôi ước mình có thể. Tuy nhiên, tôi sẽ được miễn phí vào cuối tuần tới và muốn giữ trẻ cho bạn trong trường hợp bạn đi ra ngoài sau đó. Theo tôi nhớ, tôi đã tính cho bạn 20 đô la một giờ lần trước và lần này cũng sẽ tính phí như vậy. Trong trường hợp bạn cần dịch vụ của tôi hơn 8 giờ mỗi ngày, bạn nên thông báo trước cho tôi. Với rất nhiều tình yêu. Bạn thật sự Emma Hướng: Như thể bạn là Bella, hãy đọc thư và đưa ra câu trả lời phù hợp.
Gửi lúc: 15:40:40 ngày 14-07-2020
Điểm: 0/10
Time : 2020-07-17 20:22:08

Bạn cần viết thư tới Emma với cương vị là Bella để phản hồi thư từ chối trông Anna cho cô ấy vào cuối tuần này như sau:

Opening: Dear Emma,

Body:

- Cám ơn thư của Emma thông báo về việc cô ấy không thể nhận trông Anna cho bạn

- Cám ơn tình cảm yêu quý mà cô ấy dành cho Anna

- Thông cảm với nguyên nhân cô ấy từ chối: cô ấy phải chuẩn bị cho kì thi cuối kì

- Chia sẻ với những vất vả khi phải chuẩn bị cho kì thi của cô ấy và chúc cô ấy thi tốt

- Phản hồi đề nghị trông Anna vào tuần sau khi cô ấy thi xong:

+ Nếu bạn cần, bạn sẽ phản hồi lại

+ Giá tiền trông theo giờ: có thay đổi hay không

- Chúc cô ấy đạt kết quả cao trong kì thi tới 1 lần nữa

Closing: Best wishes,

Signature: Bella

Hansara

chuthihao1705

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Ngày tham gia: 04-05-2020

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Dear Emma, I am very glad to receive your letter. first of all, I want to thank you so much for helping me to babysit my son last time. You are the girl who is very careful and thoughtful. I am totally safe when I give my baby for you. Last month, I had to go to my business for three days and my son suffered from fever. You took over my charge as a good mom for my baby. Regarding your letter, you are going to have important exam and you want have to time for a week to prepare for it. You are still a student and your major responsibility is study and I agree with you when you spend your time for it. I believe you who is very work hard and intelligent will have a good result. At the end of this month when you will have finished your exam, I am going to have meeting in Ho Chi Minh city so I want you babysit my son for two days in row. And I also accept your fee as you refer 20 dollars would be same last time. In this case, you help me for the time is two days in row, the extra fee will be add more 10 dollars for each hours. The food and bottle milk for my baby I am going to prepare in advance for you. If you have any problems, I can call directly for my or my husband. Best wishes, Bella
Gửi lúc: 15:22:55 ngày 14-07-2020
Điểm: 3/10
Time : 2020-07-18 16:42:44

Dear Emma,
I am very glad to receive your letter. viết hoa đầu câu first of all, I want to thank you so much for helping me to babysit my son last time. You are the girl who is very careful and thoughtful. I am totally safe dùng từ không đúng nghĩa when I give my baby for you. Last month, I had to go to my business for three days and my son suffered from fever. You took over my charge as a good mom for my baby. không đúng nội dung
Regarding to your letter, you are going to have important exam and you want to have to time for a week to prepare for it. You are still a student and your major responsibility is study and I agree with you when you spend your time for it. I believe you who is very work hard and intelligent will have a good result. cần chúc cô ấy thi tốt
At the end of this month when you will have finished dùng hiện tại đơn ở mệnh đề trạng ngữ chỉ thời gian your exam, I am going to have a meeting in Ho Chi Minh city so I want you to babysit my son for two days in row. And I also accept your fee as you refer 20 dollars would be same last time diễn đạt lại để làm rõ ý. In this case, you help me for the time is two days in row, the extra fee will be add more 10 dollars for each hours.? I am going to prepare The food and bottle milk for my baby I am going to prepare in advance for you. If you have any problems, I dùng dai ngôi nhân xưng can call directly for my or my husband.
Best wishes,
Bella

 

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