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Note: You need to write a response to an e-mail that you will read. What your response needs to include is in the directions so make sure you also read the directions carefully.

 
Dear Charles,

You must be pretty excited to have your first book published within such a short time after finishing writing it. It is indeed such a great achievement of yours, and I surely would like to congratulate you on the occasion of such an amazing success. I also would like to thank you for sending me a copy of this book right away with your special signature on it.

Anyway, I have already read your book, and I must tell you that I am truly impressed with your novel writing skills and abilities. I knew that you were passionate about writing stories, but I just didn’t think that you would be able to write a novel with such ease and effect. The narrator (the main character) of your novel was very engaging while the other characters around it were as natural and lively as they could get. The caption of the book under the picture of a beautiful and playful rabbit is very illustrative, and the plot has just about enough twists and turns to engage the readers from start to end. All in all, it is a great book.

I am sure this is the first book of a series of marvelous writings that we will see in the future.

Warm wishes,

Adam Fuller

Direction: As if you are Charles, read the letter and give a suitable response.


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precious02
Gửi lúc: 2020-06-23 23:36:52
Điểm: 7
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quynh_02
Gửi lúc: 2020-06-23 21:46:23
Điểm: 6
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lanchi030905a6ff
Gửi lúc: 2020-06-23 21:49:16
Điểm: 5
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chuthihao1705
Gửi lúc: 2020-06-23 14:56:02
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Tham161
Gửi lúc: 2020-06-23 05:35:14
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ĐĂNG PHẢN HỒI CỦA BẠN CHO BÀI HỌC NÀY
CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

precious02

Tiếng Anh cơ bản sơ cấp

Ngày tham gia: 28-09-2014

Bài viết: 777

• Sổ học bạ: 477
• Điểm thành tích: 367
• Điểm học bạ: 477
Dear Adam Fuller, I am very happy when reading your letter. Besides, I thank you for your warm wishes you sent. Your congratulations wishes warmed my heart and made me so happy. Thank you very much for your encouragement. Actually, I myself cannot believe that my book was published in such a short time. I am really excited and I would like to share my happiness to you. Furthermore, I knew that when you were a student, you were very good at literature and you always had very good comments so I wanted to send the book to you so that you could give a more objective view of my first works. Honestly, thank you so much for giving me a lot of compliments for my first works. Indeed, your congratulation is the best motivation for me to write good works for book lovers andyou. Once again, thank you so much for your wishes and compliments. By the way, I would like to invite you to the party which will be held at my house on this Sunday to share this happy moment and I will be filled with more joy if you would come. Write me soon and tell me all your news, and wish you enjoyable days! Best, Charles
Gửi lúc: 23:36:52 ngày 23-06-2020
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2020-06-24 13:46:36

Dear Adam Fuller,

I am very happy when reading your letter. Besides, I thank you for your warm wishes you sent. Your congratulations and wishes warmed my heart and made me so happy. Thank you very much for your encouragement.

Actually, I myself cannot believe that my book was published in such a short time. I am really excited and I would like to share my happiness to you. Furthermore, I knew that when you were a student, you were very good at literature and you always had very good comments, so I wanted to send the book to you so that you could give a không nên dùng a khi dùng more more objective views of my first works.

Honestly, thank you so much for giving me a lot of compliments for my first works. Indeed, your congratulation is the best motivation for me to write good works for book lovers andyou.

Once again, thank you so much for your wishes and compliments. By the way, I would like to invite you to the party which will be held at my house on this Sunday to share this happy moment and I will be filled with more joy if you would come. Write me soon and tell me all your news, and wish you enjoyable days!

Best,
Charles

Cách viết, cách triển khai ý trong bài viết của bạn khá tốt, song bạn cần bổ sung các chỉ tiết phản hồi sau để hoàn thiện bài viết hơn nhé:

- Chia sẻ về quá trình viết sách của bạn về: (trên cơ sở nhận xét ở thư đề bài)

+ Nhân vật

+ Cốt truyện, nội dung

+ Tranh ảnh minh họa

lanchi030905a6ff

Tiếng Anh cơ bản sơ cấp

Ngày tham gia: 17-04-2020

Bài viết: 7

• Sổ học bạ: 14
• Điểm thành tích: 3
• Điểm học bạ: 14
Dear Adam, It pleases me to hear that you enjoyed my book, and even spent your time writing such a lovely response letter. I hope it is and will be your delight of the day. To be honest, I had considerable hardships at the start of the novel. I didn't know what to write about or who. However, there was this spectacular reality trip that Lana introduced to me just a week before I started working on the novel. I'd learned a lot through it: partnership, solidarity, resilience, and diligence. I find the course very helpful and meaningful. Thus, if you and your daughter have any spare time, do think over signing up for it. I will send you the website later on. About my novel, I am glad to see someone has scrutinized it as clearly as you did. You're a great literary critic whom I have always looked up to. Once again, it's my honor to have you as a reader, and it's a sight for sore eyes to read your compliments on my work. Thank you for your care and love! I look forward to hearing more from you. With best regards, Charles.
Gửi lúc: 21:49:16 ngày 23-06-2020
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2020-06-24 13:42:52

Dear Adam,
It pleases me dùng cấu trúc I am pleased to hear that you enjoyed my book, and even spent your time writing such a lovely response letter. I hope it is and will be chỉ dùng 1 thì thôi your delight of the day.
To be honest, I had considerable hardships at the start of the novel. I didn't know what to write about or who was involved. However, there was this a spectacular reality trip that Lana introduced to me just a week before I started working on the novel. I'd learned a lot through it: partnership, solidarity, resilience, and diligence. I find the course very helpful and meaningful. Thus, if you and your daughter have any spare time, do think over signing up for it. I will send you the website later on.lan man, nên tập trungg vào ý tưởng viết sách của bạn
About my novel, I am glad to see someone has scrutinized it as clearly as you did. You're a great literary critic whom I have always looked up to lan man. Once again, it's my honor to have you as a reader, and it's a sight for sore eyes to read your compliments on my work.
Thank you for your care and love! I look forward to hearing more from you.

With best regards,

Charles.

Bạn viết bài cơ bản phản hồi được nội dung đề bài. Tuy nhiên, lại có ý bạn viết hơi lan man. Bạn hãy chú ý khắc phục nhé.

LanChi

quynh_02

Tiếng Anh cơ bản sơ cấp

Ngày tham gia: 08-12-2015

Bài viết: 1028

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• Điểm học bạ: 408
Dear Adam Fuller, I am very glad to receive your letter. Thanks for sharing my happiness. In fact, I am very happy when the book was first published to readers. In other words, this is the first time the book is published so I cannot avoid ann eager feeling and I was really overjoyed. To be honest, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read the book which I sent you. Besides, you gave a positive review about my first works. Indeed, thanks to your compliments, I have more motivation to write more good works. Once again, thank you so much for your congratulation. At the end of this week, I will hold a small party to invite some our relatives and friends. Thus, I would like to invite you to come to my house to share the happiness with me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Charles
Gửi lúc: 21:46:23 ngày 23-06-2020
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2020-06-24 13:37:46

Dear Adam Fuller,

I am very glad to receive your letter. Thanks for sharing my happiness. In fact, I am very happy when the my book was first published to readers. In other words, this is the first time the book is published so I cannot avoid ann eager feeling and I was really overjoyed.ý này bạn diễn đạt khá khó hiểu, bạn chỉ cần thể hiện ở từ happy ở ý trước là được rồi

To be honest, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read the book which I sent you. Besides, you gave a positive review about my first works. Indeed, thanks to your compliments, I have more motivation to write more good works.

Once again, thank you so much for your congratulation. At the end of this week, I will hold a small party to invite some our relatives and friends. Thus, I would like to invite you to come to my house to share the happiness with me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. ý tưởng hay

Yours,
Charles

Nhìn chung, bạn phản hồi khá rõ ràng nội dung khen ngợi cuốn sách đầu tay của bạn và chia sẻ những cảm xúc của bạn khi sách của bạn được xuất bản. Tuy nhiên, bạn cần cụ thể hơn chi tiết của vấn đề đó như sau:

- Chia sẻ về quá trình viết sách của bạn về: (trên cơ sở nhận xét ở thư đề bài)

+ Nhân vật

+ Cốt truyện, nội dung

+ Tranh ảnh minh họa

Điểm: 6.5

ththuylee

Tiếng Anh cơ bản sơ cấp

Ngày tham gia: 14-05-2020

Bài viết: 17

• Sổ học bạ: 64
• Điểm thành tích: 6
• Điểm học bạ: 64
Dear Adam Fuller, I am pretty excited to hearing my first book will be published in the future. I really subcrise and I think it is my honor when you give me a chance published my book. Because this is my first book, it is not really perfect and have something to adjust. I hope that my book will be engage not only you but also all readers. Now, I am writing the second book. It will be complete in next month. I think this book will more engage you than the first one. Warm wishes, Charles
Gửi lúc: 19:53:57 ngày 23-06-2020
Điểm: 2/10
Time : 2020-06-24 13:30:43

Dear Adam Fuller,
I am pretty excited to hearing dùng động từ nguyên thể sau to my first book will be published in the future sai thông tin, cuốn sách này đã được xuất bản. I really subcrise and I think it is my honor when you give me a chance published my book không đúng nội dung. Because this is my first book, it is not really perfect and have something to adjust. I hope that my book will be engage not only you but also all readers. Now, I am writing the second book. It will be complete in next month. I think this book will more engage you than the first one.lan man nội dung
Warm wishes,

Charles

Bạn viết bài không chính xác nội dung phản hồi. Bạn cần viết thư tới Adam Fuller với cương vị là Charles để phản hồi về thư khen ngợi cuốn sách đầu tay của bạn cũng như thư cảm ơn cuốn sách mà bạn đã tăng anh ấy như sau:

- Cám ơn thư khen ngợi cuốn sách đầu tay của bạn

- Chia sẻ về cảm xúc của bạn khi có cuốn sách đầu tay được xuất bản, đồng thời được phản hồi tích cực từ độc giả như vậy: khó có thể diễn tả hết sự vui mừng, có động lực để viết tiếp

- Chia sẻ về quá trình viết sách của bạn về: (trên cơ sở nhận xét ở thư đề bài)

+ Nhân vật

+ Cốt truyện, nội dung

+ Tranh ảnh minh họa

- Phản hồi lời cám ơn bạn đã tặng sách cho Adam Fuller: bạn muốn anh ấy đọc sách đầu tiên của bạn với cương vị là 1 người bạn

- Cám ơn 1 lần nữa về những nhận xét tích cực và động viên bạn để có thể xuất bản những cuốn sách hay

nguyenanhthuytien

Tiếng Anh cơ bản sơ cấp

Ngày tham gia: 04-06-2020

Bài viết: 7

• Sổ học bạ: 53
• Điểm thành tích: 0
• Điểm học bạ: 53
Dear Adam Fuller, I have received your letter. Thank you for your compliments to my novel. I was ecstatic to hear from you. I know it is just the beginning of a long journey. I will make more and more effort for my passion. And on that journey, I really need you to give me more honest feedbacks and suggestions. I am very happy and fortunate to have you to accompany and motivate me on the upcoming journey. I feel thankful to you and wish you the best. Yours Sincerely, Charles
Gửi lúc: 15:58:37 ngày 23-06-2020
Điểm: 3/10
Time : 2020-06-24 13:28:30

Dear Adam Fuller,

I have received dùng quá khứ đơn đối với hành động xảy ra và hoàn tất trong quá khứ your letter. Thank you for your compliments to on my novel. I was ecstatic to hear from you. I know it is just the beginning of a long journey ý chưa rõ ràng. I will make more and more effort for my passion. And on that journey, I really need you to give me more honest feedbacks and suggestions. I am very happy and fortunate to have you to accompany and motivate me on the upcoming journey ý chung chung. I feel thankful to you and wish you the best.

Yours Sincerely, dùng văn phong giao tiếp

Charles

Bạn viết bài chưa rõ ràng các ý, chưa giải quyết được vấn đề thư phản hồi. Hơn nữa, bạn dùng văn phong của thư informal chưa chính xác. Bạn cần viết thư tới Adam Fuller với cương vị là Charles để phản hồi về thư khen ngợi cuốn sách đầu tay của bạn cũng như thư cảm ơn cuốn sách mà bạn đã tăng anh ấy như sau:

- Cám ơn thư khen ngợi cuốn sách đầu tay của bạn

- Chia sẻ về cảm xúc của bạn khi có cuốn sách đầu tay được xuất bản, đồng thời được phản hồi tích cực từ độc giả như vậy: khó có thể diễn tả hết sự vui mừng, có động lực để viết tiếp

- Chia sẻ về quá trình viết sách của bạn về: (trên cơ sở nhận xét ở thư đề bài)

+ Nhân vật

+ Cốt truyện, nội dung

+ Tranh ảnh minh họa

- Phản hồi lời cám ơn bạn đã tặng sách cho Adam Fuller: bạn muốn anh ấy đọc sách đầu tiên của bạn với cương vị là 1 người bạn

- Cám ơn 1 lần nữa về những nhận xét tích cực và động viên bạn để có thể xuất bản những cuốn sách hay

Rosy Nguyen
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