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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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Thupuka29031993

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Ngày tham gia: 04-08-2017

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Nowadays, many people belive that both wife and husband have a responsible for making money. Personally, I disagree with these ideas and will outline my reasons in the essay below. On the one hand, i would like to point out that it can be difficult for one person to put all the responsibility for earning money, especially in this world's economic crisis. Moreover, due to the pandemic the living cost goes up, many families have to survire through it with thee same income. For example, the whole family cannot meet their basic needs such as food and accommodation if the breadwinner lost the job. The risk of falling into poverty is higher than both spouses go to work. On the other hand, there are some drawbacks about this issue. Fist, most of today's children are likely to stay with their grandparents instead of getting taken care by their parents. Besides, children lack parenting may have morre mental problems than those having full of childcare from mother and father. In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks but the advantages outweight the disadvantages. I completely agree that both spouses need to work for the strong financial condition. In addition, they need to make sure about the good health of their children.
Gửi lúc: 23:46:03 ngày 14-06-2022

nguyencongminh1212

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Ngày tham gia: 23-06-2021

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Men have learnt a lot from past experience, this can be evident by the attempt to balance the roles between men and women after marriage. I advocately see this as a positive sign of development, as reasons listed below. Those who disagree with the idea that both partners have to earn the lives for their home often stand on natural beings. While men are often seen as the stronger, they have also been receiving pressure from society to take all the responsibility. A common sample from this is a usual Japanese family. After marriage, the woman is expected to stay at home and do the housework when the man goes out and makes money to maintain daily life. This may be heard fair enough to some but in my point of view, every gender deserves the right to live and work equally. Therefore, all spouses have to show their will in earning living for their own families. The situation can variable sometimes, like when the man has to study higher for professional, the woman can also take the role of breadwinner. But this conclusion has to be supported by two sides instead of self-exclaimed. Family is created by love, so it is the responsibility of every participant to nurture it. Overall, I strongly believe that family life must be taken care by both sides, the situation can change and affect their final decision, but the agreement must always be made.
Gửi lúc: 17:17:13 ngày 14-06-2022

thailien2008

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Ngày tham gia: 31-08-2017

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It can be said that the starting factor to create a family is marriage. From the marriage relationship create other relationships. In particular, marriage is a fundamental factor creating the stability of the family. In order to maintain a stable marriage, each person as a wife and husband not only preserves and lights the fire of love, shares joys and sorrows, but also has responsibilities and obligations to each other and to life itself. that they both created. Such obligations and responsibilities are expressed by husband and wife taking care of each other, sharing responsibility in raising children, doing housework and making financial contributions. In today's life, everyone seems to have their own job and career. Many people, because of the nature, work pressure and pursuit goals, neglect or forget to take care of their spouse and children. When I look back on success, I realize that I have lost a part of the true value of life. Everyone should consider their children as their career, then surely we will know how to arrange work and spend time with our children. Parents always need to know how to nurture and take care of their children's material and spiritual life; take care of, create conditions for learning, develop morals and intelligence, protect interests, and be a good example for children.
Gửi lúc: 15:45:19 ngày 14-06-2022
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vinhtradung

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Ngày tham gia: 19-10-2020

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Currently, society is developing day by day, it is also being upgraded and developed to a new height. If we talk about the ancient society, we will immediately think of a society that is not really fair, this is clearly shown in the folk song that still has the phrase "respect men and despise women". But that is just the view of the old days, now deleted, men and women are equal. Therefore, the responsibility of both husband and wife is equal. There are some opinions that: ''In today's married life, some people think that the responsibility of making a living of both husband and wife is the responsibility of making a living of the family.' Let's analyze and clarify the issue. above topic. ''Not like the old days'', for a couple when they get married, they go home. The wife will do the housework such as: washing clothes, cleaning the house, washing dishes, cooking... As for the husband, in charge of making money, they will go out into the society to do it. job, and take the number of estates given to the wife so that she can provide for her family, and there is also a small rule that ''the wife will have to depend on and obey her husband no matter where he is. under what circumstances''. But today's modern life is different, ''equal rights of husband and wife are the same''. For women in the past, they only did small things in the house, but now they have the right to do big things and they can work to earn money like many other men. As for the men of the past, they just needed to work and live without having to do any small housework, but now they can both work outside and also do housework. to help his wife. Everything is equal even if they have children, both husband and wife will give their children equal love, they have to take care of their children, nurture, love, return, protect. ... for their little baby. And there is another special thing that in a family, there will inevitably be times of friction and conflict, but the most important thing is that no matter what, a man remembers the position he is and does not. If you can beat your wife, it's really critical. In short, "the husband and wife's responsibility to earn a living for their family is equal", so that family can always protect happiness. And I completely 'agree' with the above opinion.
Gửi lúc: 11:05:57 ngày 14-06-2022
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beautyserena

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Ngày tham gia: 10-02-2017

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It is sometimes contended that the wife and husband play the equal role in the family nowadays. As a result, both of them have to take the accountability for earning a living. I do totally agree with the given statement, which will be explained in the following paragraphs. Firstly, almost women in the history work at home and depend on their husbands’s finance. The men have to go out and overwork himself to earn enough money for his whole family. Consequently, women that day were considered to be the burden of the family. Especially in some extended family, it seemed to be an issue for the husband since he ought to be responsible for not only his wife and offspring but also his parents and grandparents. Obviously, the work of the family was not splited equally to the spouses and sometimes, it might lead to marital disatisfaction. Over the time, until now, several families still remain these detrimental customs and prevent the society from the development. Secondly, gender discrimination today become more and more conflict and not easy to solve. The inequality in gender appears not only at school or the office but also at the family, when the chores are not divided the same to both spouses. Men go to work outside and women work inside the home might create misunderstand in work zones between the husband and his wife and usually cause some arguments. These days, several wives have a tendency to become working mother and it is encouraged by gorvenments around the world. When both men and women go to work, they will earn more money to pay for household expenditures or their children’s tuition and it also reduce worldwide gender inequality’s ratios. Last but not least, earning a living by both spouses might make the family life happier and create better enviroment for nurturing their offspring. In a nutshell, I am convinced that gorvenment and national organizations need to have more strategies to persuade both spouses in marriges today go to work to earn money for their family’s demand.
Gửi lúc: 22:14:27 ngày 13-06-2022
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