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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems.
What are these problems for young people living in cities?
What are possible solutions for these problems?


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ĐĂNG PHẢN HỒI CỦA BẠN CHO BÀI HỌC NÀY
CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

LEDUCANHMINHYEU

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Each year, major cities are growing. That should have a lot of factories, houses, towers e.t.c. That could have a lot of poops, piss, C02 e.t.c. Trees can be cut down each year, which can be up to 1 Billion. The animals are down bad because of hunting and killing. Young people could be lung cancer because there aren't so many trees left to eat C02 to the pain of breath. Each year, thousands of people died and got buried underground making polluting the ground. Cars, motorbikes, planes, trains, vans e.t.c. making people get lead disease by them. So, guys, we need to protect the earth- The houses for all of us before it's too late!
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Time : 2022-08-15 11:04:03

Each year, major cities are growing fast . That should have There are a lot of factories, houses, towers e.t.c built. That could have a lot of poops, piss, C02 e.t.c. Trees can be are cut down each every year, which can be up to 1 Billion. The animals are down bad because of lots of animal species are becoming extinct due to  hunting and killing. Young people could be suffer from lung cancer because there aren't so many trees left to eat C02 to the pain of breath. Each year, thousands of people died and got buried underground making polluting the ground the soil polluted. Cars, motorbikes, planes, trains, vans e.t.c. making people get lead disease by them release exhaust fumes which can cause sickness. So, guys, we need to protect the earth- The houses for all of us before it's too late!

Bạn cần nêu lên những vấn đề/rắc rối mà người trẻ sống ở thành phố phải đối mặt, chứ không phải những rắc rối chung chung. Bạn cố gắng hơn ở những bài sau nhé.

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phamleminh2009

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There are a lot of problems for young people living in cities. The first problems is the use of alcohol, drugs. According to many stidies, the number of children using alcohol has increased signficantly in the past ten years. Alcohol can slow central nevours system function because it is a pain reliever. Drinking alcohol during adolescence can adversely affect cognitive, emotional, movement, vision and hearing changes. The iilegal use of narcotics in general and synthetic drugs in particular tends to increase and rejuvenate, too. Mainly focusing on teenagers and students. The second one is early puberty. In recent years, the World Healthy Organization (WHO) statistics on the age of puberty of girls are happening 2-3 years, while boys are also 1-2 years earlier. The third is materialism - attaching too much importance to material things. Insteas of material rewards such as money, electronic devices. Parents should give their children spritual gifts or words of encouragement. Obeysity is also a big problem. In Vietnam, the rate of obese and overweight children has increased alarmingly over the past ten years, especially in big cities. The rate of overweight and obese children in urban areas has reached 26.8%, whichmean that four out of ten urban students are overweight or obese. Final, it is become more insensitive. The current life of many families is quite complete. The children are cared for too much , pampered. There are fathers and mothers who take care of children from pieces of food, sleep, costumes to compose books, prepare birthday gifts, invitations, ... for their old enough children. Loving and caring for children is a sacred happiness. However, pampering and protecting children so much will inadvertently make children lose all independence. They gradually form the habit of depending on their parents, doing everything according to their parents' wishes. Parents should not pamper their children too much, but should teach them to love work, help with housework and care for others from an early age. Parents need to educate their children that their rights must come with obligations, and at the same time, parents must never make themselves "osin" of their children.If the parent is not an "emotionless adult", then your child is certainly not an "emotionless child".
Gửi lúc: 10:31:17 ngày 31-05-2022
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Time : 2022-08-15 11:22:27

There are a lot of problems for young people living in cities (nên có câu dẫn trước khi đi thẳng vào vấn đề). The first problems is the use of alcohol, drugs. According to many stidies studies, the number of children using alcohol has increased signficantly in the past ten years. Alcohol can slow functions of central nevours  nervous system function because it is a pain reliever. Drinking alcohol during adolescence can adversely affect cognitive, emotional emotions, movement, vision and hearing changes. The iilegal use of narcotics in general and synthetic drugs in particular tends to increase and rejuvenate, too. Mainly focusing on mainly by teenagers and students. The second one is early puberty. In recent years, according to the World Healthy Organization (WHO) statistics on the age of puberty of girls are happening 2-3 years, while boys are also 1-2 years earlier girls and boys are starting puberty at a younger age (chưa nêu ra được nguyên nhân, liên quan gì đến vấn đề người trẻ phải đối mặt khi sống ở thành phố). The third is materialism - attaching too much importance to material things. Instead of material rewards such as money, electronic devices. , parents should give their children spritual gifts or words of encouragement. Obeysity Obesity is also a big problem. In Vietnam, the rate of obese and overweight children has increased alarmingly over the past ten years, especially in big cities. The rate of overweight and obese children in urban areas has reached 26.8%, which mean that four out of ten urban students are overweight or obese (nên nêu rõ nguyên nhân vì sao giới trẻ ở thành phố gặp tình trạng này). Finally, it is youngsters are becoming more insensitive. The current life of many families is quite complete(tối nghĩa). The children are cared for and  pampered too much , pampered. There are fathers and mothers who take care of their old enough children from pieces of food, sleep, costumes to compose books, prepare birthday gifts, invitations, ... for their old enough children from little things such as food, sleep, clothes....
Loving and caring for children is a sacred happiness. However, pampering and protecting children so much will inadvertently make children lose all independence. They gradually form the habit of depending on their parents, doing everything according to their parents' wishes. Parents should not pamper their children too much, but should teach them to love work, help with housework and care for others from an early age. Parents need to educate their children that their rights must come with obligations, and at the same time, parents must never make themselves "osin" of their children.If the parent is not an "emotionless adult", then your child is certainly not an "emotionless child". (đoạn cuối lạc đề).

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giangkhanhhoanglh

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10./mk ,.p;l09
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Em hãy gửi bài đầy đủ gồm ba phần mở bài, thân bài, kết bài nhé.

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To look for a better future, a growing proportion of young people are relocating to major metropolitan areas. This essay will look at some of the issues that come with living in an urban area and the solutions governments may take to improve the quality of life for all urban residents. Traffic congestion is one of the most serious issues that city people face. Increased travel time affects not just worry and tiredness, but also work and study productivity either. Young people often spend half an hour a day just going to work an hour sitting in traffic on their way back home. This impacts the quality of life for all urban residents. Traffic congestion is also environment-harmful because of the emissions from many vehicles. Furthermore, when many people migrate to big cities, this might cause overpopulation and scarcity of accommodations, which forces them to live in a confined environment with no access to safe water or sanitation. There are several solutions to tackle these issues. First, it is very significant for the government to improve public transport and make it young-friendly. Pollution from old bus diesel engines is a danger to health, and the smell and noise are offensive. Electric buses, with quiet motors, will be commonplace within a decade, which is an advantage for cities. Another solution that the government should take to reduce the population is to create jobs in the countryside. Most young emigrate to urban areas for high-pay jobs in to hope that will lead them to a better future which can promptly raise the population and cause a threatening environment. To conclude, young people in many nations are badly impacted by population explosion and environmental destruction, making it incredibly difficult to obtain housing and stay healthy. The government might easily tackle these problems by providing schemes and remedies.
Gửi lúc: 21:51:22 ngày 30-05-2022
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2022-08-15 10:06:55

To look for have a better future, a growing proportion of young people are relocating to major metropolitan areas. This essay will look at some of the issues that youngsters have to come with living in an urban area and the solutions governments may take to improve the quality of life for all urban residents.
Traffic congestion is one of the most serious issues that city people face. Increased travel time affects causes not just worry and tiredness, but also affects work and study productivity either. Young people often spend half an hour lots of time a day just going to work, an hour sitting in traffic on their way back home. This impacts the quality of life for all urban residents. Traffic congestion is also environment-harmful because of the emissions from many vehicles. Furthermore, when many people migrate to big cities, this might cause overpopulation and scarcity of accommodations, which forces them to live in a confined environment with no/lack access to safe water or sanitation.
There are several solutions to tackle these issues. First, it is very significant for the government to improve public transport and make it young-friendly(??). Pollution from old bus diesel engines is a danger to health, and the smell and noise are offensive. Electric buses, with quiet motors, will be commonplace within a decade, which is an advantage for cities. Another solution that the government should take to reduce the population is to by creating more jobs in the countryside. Most young emigrate to urban areas for high-paying jobs in to with hope that will lead them to they will have a better future which can promptly raise the population and cause a threatening environment.
To conclude, young people in many nations are badly impacted by population explosion and environmental destruction, making it incredibly difficult to obtain housing and stay healthy. The government might easily tackle these problems by providing schemes and remedies.

Bài có lập luận rõ ràng, thuyết phục. Bạn tham khảo các lỗi đã sửa nhé.

tuanthinh2018

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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems.The problems for young people living in cities are polluted: The first problem is the phenomenon of environmental pollution: air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution, dust pollution, ...The second problem is high cost for living in apartments, condominiums, hotels for people.The solution needed to overcome environmental pollution is: a fine if someone dares to throw garbage, discharge waste indiscriminately into the environment without the permission of the neighborhood that person lives in. The solution to the high cost of living in the city is: find yourself a suitable and high-paying job and also need to know how to spend wisely to avoid spending wastefully on unnecessary things. Therefore, each of us must have a sense of keeping the environment green-clean-beautiful and looking for a good job. I am a student myself, my job is to know how to protect the environment, to propagate to everyone to understand that 1 person for many people. My work is over here
Gửi lúc: 17:25:49 ngày 30-05-2022
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Time : 2022-08-12 16:11:47

As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems (tránh viết lại câu đề bài).One of the problems for young people living in cities are polluted: is pollution. The first problem is the phenomenon of environmental pollution: air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution, dust pollution, ...The second problem is high cost for living in apartments, condominiums, hotels for people of living, unaffordable housing.The solution needed to overcome to environmental pollution is: a fine if someone dares to  that the authorities  issue regulations on fining people who throw garbage, discharge waste indiscriminately into the environment without the permission of the neighborhood that person lives in. The solution to the high cost of living in the city is: find yourself a suitable and high-paying job (đây không phải việc ai cũng làm được) and also need to know how to spend wisely to avoid spending wastefully on unnecessary things. Therefore, each of us must have a sense of keeping the environment green-clean-beautiful and looking for a good job. I am a student myself, my job is to know how to protect the environment, to propagate to everyone to understand that 1 person for many people(tối nghĩa). My work is over here.

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