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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.


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ĐĂNG PHẢN HỒI CỦA BẠN CHO BÀI HỌC NÀY
CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

lethithanhhang.aofaede

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Ngày tham gia: 23-05-2018

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Ages are always the topic of interest. Many people suppose that the old have an vital impact on our societies whereas others insist that youngsters play a more important role. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and give my own opinion. It is undeniable that the old generation has a big influence in all aspects of lives. The old who have a lot of great experience are willing to share or pass their precious knowledge to their offsprings. They teach the next generation not only the skills, but also the way to behave politely. Besides, they support the young by giving them appropriate advice or showing them the right way to do things. Without the aid of older people, it is hard for us to create the wonderful and modern world as it is now. Furthermore, people will all be older in the future but the importance of them will not change. Therefore, the old are commonly considered as wise individuals in our societies. On the other hand, it is said that the role of the young people can be underestimated because of numerous rationales. To commence with, youngsters are the people who will be in charge of building and developing in the future. They are more and more intelligent and learn everything quickly. Moreover, they are open-minded so that they can share their ideas openly and accept others' thoughts easily. Another reason is that the young are more healthy and they will be the main force of labor in countries. Therefore, having brilliant and strong young residents is the main purpose of any nation. In conclusion, in my opinion every citizen has a specific influence on their country regardless of their ages or genders and all want to bring positive things to our earth. It is difficult to debate who is more important or less, therefore instead of wasting time comparing these views, we had better focus on improving ourselves to contribute more for our countries.
Gửi lúc: 23:59:02 ngày 24-05-2022
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Time : 2022-06-07 22:21:24

 

Ages are always the topic of interest. Many people suppose that the old have an vital impact on our societies whereas others insist that youngsters play a more important role. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and give my own opinion.

It is undeniable that the old generation has a big influence in all aspects of lives. The old who have a lot of great experience are willing to share or pass their precious knowledge to their offsprings. They teach the next generation not only the skills, but also the way to behave politely. Besides, they support the young by giving them appropriate advice or showing them the right way to do things. Without the aid of older people, it is hard for us to create the wonderful and modern world as it is now. Furthermore, people will all be older in the future but the importance of them will not change. Therefore, the old are commonly considered as wise individuals in our societies.

On the other hand, it is said that the role of the young people cannot be underestimated because of numerous rationales. To commence with, youngsters are the people who will be in charge of building and developing the nation in the future. They are more and more intelligent and learn everything quickly. Moreover, they are open-minded so that they can share their ideas openly and accept others' thoughts easily. Another reason is that the young are more healthier and they will be the main force of labor in countries. Therefore, having brilliant and strong young residents is the main purpose of any nation.

In conclusion, in my opinion every citizen has a specific influence on their country regardless of their ages or genders and all want to bring positive things to our earth. It is difficult to debate who is more important or less; therefore, instead of wasting time comparing these views, we had better focus on improving ourselves to contribute more for to our countries.

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nguyenmk

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In particular traditions,senior citizens are given more importance.Conversely,in some ,cultures youngsters are given more priority in comparison with the older community.As far as my views are concerned.I personally believe that the old generation public must be valued more.However,I would like to explicate both the points in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,there are myriad factors influencing my point of view.The first and foremost is the belief of an individual to value the older section of culture.To explain it,it is the customs and tradition of the company which makes them give respect to their elder community.For ,instance in a country like India,older citizens are given more value because they consider it as their moral duty.In spite of having more state of youngsters particular cultures give more preference to older civilization. On the flip side, another section of the nation gives more value to the youth despite giving more importance to the youngster.Firstly,some individuals give the opinion that youngsters are an asset to the country.Furthermore,the economy of the country is dependent upon the younger section of the world.For ,example a survey was conducted by the BBC which shows that the youngsters have the potential to convert a developing country into a developed nation.Not only the growing economies should value their youth but also it is the responsibility of humanity to provide guidance and support to the youngsters for the development of the nation. In conclusion,I would like to say that different people think differently.In this particular case also, as a whole,we cannot support or go against either of the sides completely,but I think that the older populace of the society must be given more importance.
Gửi lúc: 21:27:46 ngày 24-05-2022
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Time : 2022-06-07 21:51:00

 

In particular traditions, senior citizens are given more importance. Conversely, in some cultures youngsters are given more priority in comparison with the older community.As far as my views are concerned, I personally believe that the old generation public must be valued more.However,I would like to explicate both the points in the upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with,there are is a myriad of factors influencing my point of view.The first and foremost is the belief of an individual to value the older section of culture???.To explain it,it is the customs and tradition of the a company which makes them to give respect to their elder community.For instance, in a country like India,older citizens are given more value because they consider it as their moral duty.In spite of having more state of youngsters??? particular cultures give more preference to older generation civilization.

On the flip side, another section of the nation gives more value to the youth despite giving more importance to the youngster.Firstly,some individuals give the opinion that youngsters are an asset to the country.Furthermore,the economy of the country is dependent upon the younger section of the world.For example, a survey was conducted by the BBC which shows that the youngsters have the potential to convert a developing country into a developed nation.Not only should the growing economies should value their youth but also it is the responsibility of humanity to provide guidance and support to the youngsters for the development of the nation.

In conclusion,I would like to say that different people think differently.In this particular case also, as a whole,we cannot support or go against either of the sides completely,but I think that the older populace of the society elderly must be given more importance.

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HaruzamaKobayashi

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Time : 2022-06-01 17:32:42

Em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

 

phuonghuyenbui99

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While elderly person is considered important in some places, other cultures believe that youth is much more valued. I will discuss both of these views in my essay below. On the one hand, it is true that old age is highly appreciated in several areas. In some countries, by being old, people believe that this person will have more experience and knowledge than the younger people. In addition, their sayings and instructions are also respected. To be more specific, Japan is a country that shows great respect to the old people. In a family, the opinions normally are decided by the most powerful and oldest person in the family. All kids and children are taught to show respect and listen to the old. At work, old age has more experience and they will know how to deal with various situations. On the other hand, some countries consider young people more important. First, it is supposed that the young are more energetic and active than the old people. During work, they will have more creative and brilliant ideas. They are also willing and ready to challenge themselves. They are not afraid of making mistakes and pick up themselves again to retry. In conclusion, I believe that it should be balanced respect between an old and a young person. An old person will have more experience and a young person will have more energy and be active.
Gửi lúc: 18:04:53 ngày 24-05-2022
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Time : 2022-06-07 17:57:04

 

While the elderly person is are considered important in some places, other cultures believe that youth is much more valued. I will discuss both of these views in my essay below.

On the one hand, it is true that old age is highly appreciated in several areas. In some countries, by being old, people believe that this person will have more experience and knowledge than the younger people. In addition, their sayings and instructions are also respected. To be more specific, Japan is a country that shows great respect to the old people. In a family, the opinions are normally are decided by the most powerful and oldest person in the family. All kids and children are taught to show respect and listen to the old. At work, old age has more experience and they will know how to deal with various situations.

On the other hand, some countries consider young people more important. First, it is supposed that the young are more energetic and active than the old people. During work, they will have more creative and brilliant ideas. They are also willing and ready to challenge themselves. They are not afraid of making mistakes and pick up themselves again to retry.

In conclusion, I believe that it we should be balanced respect between an old and a young person. An old person will have more experience and a young person will have more energy and be active.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

Thaodn2020

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It would be argued by some that the older is precious. In my opinion, however, I believe young generation should play more crucial role. On the one hand, there are several reasons why some believe that old-age is considerable. The first reason is weather the older plays higher percentage of population means the invironmental condition and social safety net would be more improved. Secondly, old age also helps younger to concentrate on precious ancient values, spread the indigenous nation's culture and lead them to the right track not only spritual but also physical affairs. On the other hand, I would agure that the youth likes an open book should be reached the greatest consideration in some cultures. Firstly, young people take less harden on social health system or stuff like old-age pension because they are strong in physical and contribute into labour intensive industries. Secondly, the youth also has more open-minded to escape from obsolete formulations, unsound customs, vicious circles of out-of-date working procedure. Younger people could be able to gain fascinating insight into different international fields that hardly reached by the old one. In conclusion, eventhough in some cultures, people pplay their consideration on the old, I still agree that the younger should better atrract our intention.
Gửi lúc: 11:07:30 ngày 24-05-2022
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Time : 2022-06-07 17:53:20

 

It would be argued by some that the older is precious. In my opinion, however, I believe young generation should play more crucial role.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why some believe that old-age is considerable. The first reason is weather the older plays higher percentage of population means the invironmental condition and social safety net would be more improved. Secondly, old age also helps younger to concentrate on precious ancient values, spread the indigenous nation's culture and lead them to the right track not only spritual but also physical affairs.

On the other hand, I would agure that the youth likes an open book should be reached the greatest consideration in some cultures. Firstly, young people take less harden on social health system or stuff like old-age pension because they are strong in physical and contribute into labour intensive industries. Secondly, the youth also has more open-minded to escape from obsolete formulations, unsound customs, vicious circles of out-of-date working procedure. Younger people could be able to gain fascinating insight into different international fields that hardly reached by the old one.

In conclusion, eventhough in some cultures, people pplay their consideration on the old, I still agree that the younger should better atrract our intention.

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