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Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more on education for adults in need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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Some suggest that the state government should spend more money on education for the young, while others claim that the elderly should be a primary target for learning. I absolutely agree with the first reason since youth play an important role in the growth of nations and have several opportunities to explore a variety of different disciplines. Then, in the next lines, I would expound on these justifications. To begin with, the destiny of countries is entirely influenced by the current generation of juveniles. They would also be a leadership in their respective fields. As a result, authorities should used to their human resources by providing a variety of relevant programs to encourage people to become experts in their particular fields. During this period, they will get a variety of valuable experiences that will help them improve their nations' human resources.This finding demonstrates the importance of education in a region's development. To take another example, in today's cutting-edge period, youngsters have a plethora of fresh opportunities to improve themselves. Furthermore, improved technology equips world cultures to adapt to sudden changes, causing groups who can not fit into this circumstance to lag behind. Adolescents can also examine current information to enrich their individual talents so that they can meet the significant problems that will face them in the coming years with their abilities. As a result, their homelands will have a bright future. For example, the smallest can study more about data science and how to use artificial intelligence, which is expected to eventually replace humans in some industries. To summarize, the general public has differing views on how to educate the adult and young. However, I completely support teenagers who are given more funding to study rather than older people since they will grow in a variety of ways and be able to overcome technological barriers.
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Some suggest that the state government should spend more money on education for the young, while others claim that the elderly should be a primary target for learning. I absolutely agree with the first reason opinion since youth play an important role in the growth of nations and have several opportunities to explore a variety of different disciplines. Then, in the next lines, I would expound on these justifications.

To begin with, the destiny of countries is entirely influenced by the current generation of juveniles. They would also be a leadership in their respective fields. As a result, authorities should used to their human resources??? by providing a variety of relevant programs to encourage people to become experts in their particular fields. During this period, they will get a variety of valuable experiences that will help them improve their nations' human resources. This finding demonstrates the importance of education in a region's development.

To take another example, in today's cutting-edge period, youngsters have a plethora of fresh opportunities to improve themselves. Furthermore, improved technology equips world cultures to adapt to sudden changes, causing groups who cannot fit into this circumstance to lag behind. Adolescents can also examine current information to enrich their individual talents so that they can meet the solve significant problems that will face them in the coming years with their abilities. As a result, their homelands will have a bright future. For example, the smallest can study more about data science and how to use artificial intelligence, which is expected to eventually replace humans in some industries.

To summarize, the general public has different views on how to educate the adults and youngsters. However, I completely support the idea that teenagers who are should be given more funding to study rather than older people since they will grow in a variety of ways and be able to overcome technological barriers.

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What would you do with a country with a high adult illiteracy rate if you were a policy maker? Is your country democratic and civilized? if so, all citizens must have equal access to education no matter their age and social position. if you are someone who has wondered about the same questions above. I'm sure you will completely vote for the idea that lacked education adults should get more government support for education. To begin with, we must determine that the education of minors is a priority for a country because the youth are at the core of the workforce. The future of a country lies in young people who are in their most important mental and physical state to cultivate knowledge, learn skills and accumulate experience. Besides, we also need to consolidate other workforce like adults who need more education for several reasons below: First, they want to get a better job or start their own business to have more income to better support themselves and their families. Many people have dropped out of school for various reasons, sometimes their families cannot afford to pay, sometimes they are not aware of the importance of going to school at an early age...etc. we all know that the better their family is, the better their sociaty is. Second, if they get more educated they will have knowledge and skill and of cause they will be able to teach their children. Let’s Imagine the parents don’t know how to read and write, how can they teach their kids to study. Further more, they will be able to access morden technology and learn from huge store of knowledge on the internet by them self. Third, through caring of education for educationally disavantaged adults we indicate that our community is humane, equal and democratic. Making sure that no one has been left behind we encourage people’s patriotism so that they will be ready to protect country whenever the country is invaded. Since the adults cann’t cater for a fixed timetable, So, I think the government should build up a special education system including facilities, grading system, propaganda system, especially calling for help from volunteers in the communities. In conclusion, to make our nation stronger and stronger, beside educating young generation to become a talented and capable core workforce we also need to take care the adults have difficulties in life because of their missed education.
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What would you do with a country with a high adult illiteracy rate if you were a policy maker? Is your country democratic and civilized? if so, all citizens must have equal access to education no matter their age and social position. if you are someone who has wondered about the same questions above, I'm sure you will completely vote for the idea that lacked education adults who do not have a chance to access comprehensive education should get more government support for education.

To begin with, we must determine that the education of minors youngsters is a priority for a country because the youth are at the core of the workforce. The future of a country lies in depends on young people who are in their most important mental and physical state to cultivate knowledge, learn skills and accumulate experience. Besides, we also need to consolidate other workforce like adults who need more education for several reasons below.

First, they want to get a better job or start their own business to have more income to better support themselves and their families. Many people have dropped out of school for various reasons, sometimes their families cannot afford to pay, sometimes they are not aware of the importance of going to school at an early age, etc. We all know that the better their family is, the better their society is.

Second, if they get more educated they will have knowledge and skills and of course they will be able to teach their children. Let’s Imagine if the parents don’t know how to read and write, how can they teach their kids to study? Furthermore, they will be able to access mordern technology and learn from huge store resources of knowledge on the internet by themselves.

Third, through caring of education for educationally disadvantaged adults we indicate that our community is humane, equal and democratic. Making sure that no one has been left behind we encourage people’s patriotism so that they will be ready to protect the country whenever the country is invaded.

Since the adults cann’t cater for a fixed timetable, So, I think the government should build up a special education system including facilities, grading systems, propaganda systems, especially calling for help from volunteers in the communities.

In conclusion, to make our nation stronger and stronger, besides educating young generation to become a talented and capable core workforce we also need to take care of the adults having difficulties in life because of their missed education.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

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