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Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive.
What is the reason for this?
Is it a positive or negative development?


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A wedding is a celebration of two people's happiness with their family and friends. Nowadays, it has been noted that weddings are lavishly celebrated and that a large sum of money is spent. This is mostly a negative development in my perspective, although it does have some redeeming qualities. There are a variety of reasons why larger, more expensive weddings are detrimental to society. One of them is that a significant amount of money is spent on decorations and meal preparation. Plastic is the most commonly utilized material for wedding decorations. The decorations are discarded when the wedding is done. To clarify, in 2001, a wealthy South African family planned their son's wedding near Cape Town's beaches. This wedding produced massive amounts of trash, which resulted in the deaths of numerous aquatic creatures who mistook the waste for food. In addition, the government had to spend a significant amount of money to clear up the waste. Another disadvantage is that a lot of food is thrown away at these large events. According to data, food waste has grown by 20% since 2005, with the biggest cause being how individuals have begun to celebrate family occasions. Overall, larger and more expensive weddings, in my opinion, do not give much societal benefit. This money may be put to good use in other ways. On the other side, there are certain advantages to holding large weddings. One of them is that they can assist local companies flourish or provide jobs for local residents. Mr. Ambani, India's richest man, spent roughly $100 million on his daughter's wedding, for example. Around 20,000 employment were generated as a result of this large wedding. They also encouraged local companies to create handicrafts and ethnic attire to be handed away as gifts to the guests. As a result, hosting a large wedding event has certain advantages. To summarize, larger and more expensive weddings help the economy in some manner. However, the environmental harm they produce, in my opinion, is far too significant to be neglected, and this practice should be avoided.
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A wedding is a celebration of two people's happiness with their family and friends. Nowadays, it has been noted that weddings are lavishly celebrated and that a large sum of money is spent. This is mostly a negative development in my perspective, although it does have some redeeming qualities.

There are a variety of reasons why larger, more expensive weddings are detrimental to society. One of them is that a significant amount of money is spent on decorations and meal preparation. Plastic is the most commonly utilized material for wedding decorations. The decorations are discarded when the wedding is done. To clarify, in 2001, a wealthy South African family planned their son's wedding near Cape Town's beaches. This wedding produced massive amounts of trash, which resulted in the deaths of numerous aquatic creatures who mistook the waste for food. In addition, the government had to spend a significant amount of money to clear up the waste.

Another disadvantage is that a lot of food is thrown away at these large events. According to data (data from which source?), food waste has grown by 20% since 2005, with the biggest cause being how individuals have begun to celebrate family occasions. Overall, larger and more expensive weddings, in my opinion, do not give much societal benefit. This money may be put to good use in other ways.

On the other side, there are certain advantages to holding large weddings. One of them is that they can assist local companies to flourish or provide jobs for local residents. Mr. Ambani, India's richest man, spent roughly $100 million on his daughter's wedding, for example. Around 20,000 employments were generated as a result of this large wedding. They also encouraged local companies to create handicrafts and ethnic attire to be handed away as gifts to the guests. As a result, hosting a large wedding event has certain advantages.

To summarize, larger and more expensive weddings help the economy in some manner. However, the environmental harm they produce, in my opinion, is far too significant to be neglected, and this practice should be avoided.

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It is generally acknowledged that Marriage ceremony is becoming larger and more costly in this day and age. Regarding this, I believe that it has drawbacks. This essay will outline the certain reason why the wedding is being expensive, and suggest disadvantages that should be taken into consideration. On the one hand, broadly speaking, as marriage is one of the major events in an individual's life, community desire to have the perfect moment. Therefore, the procedure of wedding is becoming sophisticated. Not only does a wedding celebration be required special steps such as exchanging wedding bands, cutting a cake and showing performance, it may also need various disposable items such as flowers and confetti. For example, recent media in Korea reports that at least 30000 dollars is necessary to have a wedding celebration in Korea since married couples wants to have an excellent dinner. As the example clearly illustrates, a lot of money is needed to have the perfect wedding event. On the other hand, there are several drawbacks to the costly weddings. Firstly, due to the gap between the rich and the poor, while the wedding of rich public is getting bigger, poor population's burden is becoming larger. For instance, a survey conducted by the Korea Population Foundation has revealed that 5% of couples give up having wedding events as they feel miserable at their poor wedding dinner compared to rich ones. Hence, it is reasonable to point out that poor couples feel an excessive burden on the costly weddings. Secondly, an extraordinary wedding celebration causes environmental issues as an enormous amount of food and flowers are prepared for the dinner. Once they decorate with flowers for the wedding, they are abandoned, and food is getting rid of the celebration when folk left it. In terms of this, a considerable amount of food is wasted annually in Korea. In conclusion, while society desire to have the perfect wedding event, big and expensive celebration causes many disadvantages in contemporary society.
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Wedding day is the most special day for both families including bride and groom. Nowadays, people seem to spend so much money on marriage ceremonies than they used to spend in the past. However, this is clearly a negative development as it includes wastage of money and food on large scale. The First and the foremost reason behind extravagant weddings is "showoff". People want to show others, their wealth and high standard of living.For an instance, In India, gatherings of thousands of people at weddings are very common and also marriage ceremonies are celebrated for several days in hotels. Another reason could be the parents wish to give best to their children.To show their love towards their children, they organize big and pricy weddings. As people waste so much money on marriage ceremonies, this is obviously a negative development, and this money is not benefiting anyone. It has seen that tonnes of food are get wasted on big weddings. A lot of money is spent on decorations and clothes, but most of the relatives try to find flaws rather than appreciating the concerned families. Therefore this money should be utilized by donating it to charitable societies so that they can help someone who really needs it, only then it can be called positive development. In conclusion, in this modern world,most people want their weddings to be big but they are not seeing the wastage that is being attached to them.This is the time when educated people should come forward and set an example by celebrating simple wedding ceremonies of their own.
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The New York Times once stated modern days as a “boom of wedding” resulted from the frequence people witnessed a lavish wedding, which both has pros and cons depending on these reasons mentioned below. On the one hand, a huge wedding can be seen as a positive sign for it represents love position in people’s lifetime. In the past, marriage used to be a kind of political propaganda when a lady could not choose her future partner. Therefore, the celebration was not too big and the organizing progress was also not being prepared carefully. However, in this day and age, humans are putting more attention on their mental life as well as life expectation, decorating a luxurious wedding can mark a special stage in their life. On the other hand, this action can additionally be considered as a negative development. People are getting more superficial and materialistic these days. They do not care about the importance of marriage but seen it as a tool to show off their prospect and how generous they are. For instance, Bill Gates’s daughter last year wanted to rebuild an area to congratulate her wedding, which annoyed a peaceful neighborhood a lot due to the noise from her construction. To recapitulate, a great and expensive wedding is a coin of two sides standing on the purpose of the host- an increase of love in people’s mind or a way to throw money out of the window.
Gửi lúc: 17:06:39 ngày 22-03-2022
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The New York Times once stated modern days as a “boom of wedding” resulted from the frequency people witnessed a lavish weddings, which both have pros and cons depending on these reasons mentioned below.

On the one hand, a huge wedding can be seen as a positive sign for it represents love position in people’s lifetime. In the past, marriage used to be a kind of political propaganda when a lady could not choose her future partner. Therefore, the celebration was not too big and the organizing progress was also not being prepared carefully. However, in this day and age, humans are putting more attention on their mental life as well as life expectation, decorating a luxurious wedding can mark a special stage in their life.

On the other hand, this action can additionally be considered as a negative development. People are getting more superficial and materialistic these days. They do not care about the importance of marriage but seen it as a tool to show off their prospect and how generous they are. For instance, Bill Gates’s daughter last year wanted to rebuild an area to congratulate her wedding, which annoyed a peaceful neighborhood a lot due to the noise from her construction.

To recapitulate, a great and expensive wedding is a coin of two sides standing on the purpose of the host- an increase of love in people’s mind or a way to throw money out of the window.

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Wedding day is the most special day for both families including bride and groom. Nowadays, people seem to spend so much money on marriage ceremonies than they used to spend in the past. However, this is clearly a negative development as it includes wastage of money and food on large scale. The First and the foremost reason behind extravagant weddings is "showoff". People want to show others, their wealth and high standard of living.For an instance, In India, gatherings of thousands of people at weddings are very common and also marriage ceremonies are celebrated for several days in hotels. Another reason could be the parents wish to give best to their children.To show their love towards their children, they organize big and pricy weddings. As people waste so much money on marriage ceremonies, this is obviously a negative development, and this money is not benefiting anyone. It has seen that tonnes of food are get wasted on big weddings. A lot of money is spent on decorations and clothes, but most of the relatives try to find flaws rather than appreciating the concerned families. Therefore this money should be utilized by donating it to charitable societies so that they can help someone who really needs it, only then it can be called positive development. In conclusion, in this modern world,most people want their weddings to be big but they are not seeing the wastage that is being attached to them.This is the time when educated people should come forward and set an example by celebrating simple wedding ceremonies of their own.
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