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Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?


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Researchers show that the majority of offenders who are sent to jail commit offences after being released. The reasons behind this phenomenon are the lack of education in prison and the way society treats them. Thus, jail should focus more on educating criminals and they should be treated better by society. It is obvious that most prisons in the world are mainly used to punish those who commit crimes. Although offenders should be punished, they need quality education to help them become good people. But nowadays jails just focus on forcing offenders to change their behaviours and do not care much about educating them. Obviously, this method doesn’t work. Moreover, society does not usually welcome those who were criminals before. Thus, it is very difficult for them to find jobs and live happily. It leads the majority of criminals to break the law again. To solve this problem, quality education should be one of the main purposes of jail. With quality education, criminals can gain knowledge and learn new skills that can help them change their lives later. They are more likely to become better people and find good jobs after being free. For example, in some developed countries, criminals will be reduced their punishment if they read more books. Moreover, society should change their opinions about those who committed offences before. Government should encourage their citizens to give those people other chances so that they can earn a living and have normal lives. If they are treated well, they will not commit crimes anymore. Consequently, when the crime rate is low, everyone is beneficial. To sum up, most offenders who are sent to jails commit offences after being released because the main purpose of prisons is punishing criminals and society treat them badly after being released. Thus, we need to add quality education in prisons and the government should encourage people to treat those people better. Although they made mistakes, they should be given a chance to become better people.
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Time : 2021-12-15 20:46:52

 

Researchers show that the majority of offenders who are sent to jail commit offences after being released. The reasons behind this phenomenon are the lack of education in prison and the way society treats them. Thus, jail we should focus more on educating criminals and they should be treated better by society.

It is obvious that most prisons in the world are mainly used to punish those who commit crimes. Although offenders should be punished, they need quality education to help them become good people. But nowadays jails just focus on forcing offenders to change their behaviours and do not care much about educating them. Obviously, this method doesn’t work. Moreover, society does not usually welcome those who were criminals before. Thus, it is very difficult for them to find jobs and live happily. It leads the majority of criminals to break the law again.

To solve this problem, quality education should be one of the main purposes of jail. With quality education, criminals can gain knowledge and learn new skills that can help them change their lives later. They are more likely to become better people and find good jobs after being free. For example, in some developed countries, criminals will be reduced their punishment if they read more books. Moreover, society should change their opinions about those who committed offences before. Governments should encourage their citizens to give those people other chances so that they can earn a living and have normal lives. If they are treated well, they will not commit crimes anymore. Consequently, when the crime rate is low, everyone is beneficial.

To sum up, most offenders who are sent to jails commit offences after being released because the main purpose of prisons is punishing criminals and society treats them badly after being released. Thus, we need to add quality education in prisons and the governments should encourage people to treat those people better. Although they made mistakes, they should be given a chance to become better people.

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It is true that most of wrongdoers who carried a prison sentence become re-offenders when over imprisonment. This essay would make an attempt to shed some light on the underlying factors behind this case before outlining several feasible solutions. In the first place, the fact of becoming a convict again after a rehabilitation could be attributed by two reasons. The first might be the unchangeable behaviour of lawbreakers. Being sentenced could not make them mull over their faults. Another worth mentioning rationale could be the length of imprisonment which could be too short to satisfy the crime’s defects. Undoubtedly, people will break laws again if the punishment could not be enough violent. To provide a supporting example, 90% of prisoners who were jailed for under one year would re-offend according to statistics. To combat this unfavourable ramification of involving crime again, a wide range of measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be providing a system which manages perpetrators after releasing (them) into society. This system could resist the temptation of committing crimes the second time and arrest immediately re-offenders when they commit offenses. Another viable measure could enact a tougher prison sentence which may act as a deterrence. Because of the substance of not threatening the life, the court might easily increase the period for which someone could be imprisoned or put criminals under house arrest after being free. In conclusion, it is clear that there are a variety of driving forces for this issue, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Time : 2021-12-15 20:46:21

 

It is true that most of wrongdoers who carried a prison sentence become re-offenders when over imprisonment. This essay would make an attempt to shed some light on the underlying factors behind this case before outlining several feasible solutions.

In the first place, the fact of becoming a convict again after a rehabilitation could be attributed by two reasons. The first one might be the unchangeable behaviour of lawbreakers. Being sentenced could not make them mull over their faults. Another worth mentioning rationale could be the length of imprisonment which could be too short to satisfy the crime’s defects???. Undoubtedly, people will break laws again if the punishment could not be was not strict enough violent. To provide a supporting example, 90% of prisoners who were jailed for under one year would re-offend according to statistics.

To combat this unfavourable ramification of involving crime again, a wide range of measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be providing a system which manages perpetrators after releasing (them) into society. This system could resist the temptation of committing crimes the second time and arrest immediately re-offenders when they commit offenses. Another viable measure could enact a tougher prison sentence which may act as a deterrence. Because of the substance??? of not threatening the life, the court might easily increase the period for which someone could be imprisoned or put criminals under house arrest after being free.

In conclusion, it is clear that there are a variety of driving forces for this issue, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.

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For me, all of the criminals , they don't have a good life . The environment around their house , the environment in their family it's really terrible .They alway have the negative feelings. they have no friend, hve nobody to share anything even happy things and sad things. It's also can caused by family vilolence, the broken of the parents. That make a normal person become a bad person. Nobody in this world is bad, they have a bad life - they have a bad change. Environment effect quality into the people . So that we can help they to have a good life , they will have a good change
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Recently, the number of criminal commit crimes after released is increasing incredibly. What leads to this? In my view, this happened because of the attitude of community, the job and the laws. First at all, after released, many people cannot stay at their hometown, they have to move to other place to have a new start. They go to a place that no one knows about them. Why? Community has a different viewpoint about the theft, the crime. They do not ready to make friends with the crime anymore. Secondly, The crimes don’t have a suitable job. Only few factory receive the crime, while the other factories are say no with the crime. The one who had a bad with history only have some basic jobs which have low income to cover his life. Thirdly, the law is not strict enough for them to stop do bad behavior.Someone are trying to commit crimes to have a place to stay. That sounds fun, but it’s true. It not easy to solve this problem. This need the support of the whole community, the government also. And about us, we should not laugh at the crime. After a long time in prison, let’s them have a new chance at their motherland.
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