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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


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foxagency

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When kids should start their formal education has caused a heated debate. Some individuals argue that children should begin at a very early age but others believe they ought to begin after 7 years old. In my opinion, they should start their formal education after 7 years of age and study what they like before that time. On the one hand, beginning formal education at a very early age is beneficial for kids. Firstly, they can learn very fast at that time so they gain more knowledge and build good skills such as reading books, writing and so on. Secondly, they are likely to become more intelligent and confident compared to kids who go to school later because of the knowledge and skills that they learn and practice before. Thirdly, parents do not need to bother about what they should teach their kids when they are small because they can count on teachers. Thus, they can focus more on their work and other things. On the other hand, children should begin their formal education after 7 years of age because they can learn many things without classes and they feel more excited and happier to learn from whatever they experience. For example, children learn some animals and plants before going to school because they see and remember them while playing. Moreover, it is obvious that formal education can bring stress and pressures for anyone. Thus, kids under 7 years old who are so small should not face these things. Although joining classes at a very early age can bring more knowledge and skills for children earlier, they do not have time to enjoy normal childhood that is very important for their development, especially their mental health. Moreover, those kids can be successful in their education and careers later but the most important thing for them is their happiness. In the future, they may look back and feel regrettable because they do not have a happy childhood. Also, anyone can learn from formal education anytime in their life. To sum up, children should begin their formal education after 7 years of age because they can learn many things without classes and enjoy their childhood.
Gửi lúc: 23:36:44 ngày 23-11-2021
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Time : 2021-12-10 15:03:48

 

When kids should start their formal education has caused a heated debate. Some individuals argue that children should begin at a very early age but others believe they ought to begin after 7 years old. In my opinion, they should start their formal education after 7 years of age and study what they like before that time.

On the one hand, beginning formal education at a very early age is beneficial for kids. Firstly, they can learn very fast at that time so they gain more knowledge and build good skills such as reading books, writing and so on. Secondly, they are likely to become more intelligent and confident compared to kids who go to school later because of the knowledge and skills that they learn and practice before. Thirdly, parents do not need to bother about what they should teach their kids when they are small because they can count on teachers. Thus, they can focus more on their work and other things.

On the other hand, children should begin their formal education after 7 years of age because they can learn many things without classes and they feel more excited and happier to learn from whatever they experience. For example, children learn about some animals and plants before going to school because they see and remember them while playing. Moreover, it is obvious that formal education can bring stress and pressures for anyone. Thus, kids under 7 years old who are so small should not face these things.

Although joining classes at a very early age can bring more knowledge and skills for children earlier, they do not have time to enjoy normal childhood that is very important for their development, especially their mental health. Moreover, those kids can be successful in their education and careers later but the most important thing for them is their happiness. In the future, they may look back and feel regrettable because they do not have a happy childhood. Also, anyone can learn from formal education anytime in their life.

To sum up, children should begin their formal education after 7 years of age because they can learn many things without classes and enjoy their childhood.

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People have different views on whether children should start formal education as soon as possible or delay it until they are at least 7 years old.Personally, I believe that it is much more beneficial to start learning early than to start later. First, starting school at an early age will produce some positive outcomes.Undeniably, the younger an individual is, the easier it is to absorb new knowledge and information.As a result, these children will have a better start than their peers pursuing higher education.Besides, they will have the opportunity to discover their natural talent. For example, most Vietnamese children are sent to kindergartens at the age of 3 or 4 to learn some basic skills such as addition and subtraction.After a few months, potential children will be taken care of by teachers with the aim of training them to become specialized students in the future. However, several individuals advocate a later start to formal schooling due to a number of reasons. It is believed that commencing school at a later age will offer kids more time to learn many things via their parents at home. As a result, these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years. In addition, it might also be more beneficial for children to have a childhood in which they can cultivate their own skills and interests through normal activities at home. To conclude, despite being safe with their parents at home, the children would have fewer chances to engage in extracurricular activities which would equip them with vital soft skills including teamwork and communication skills. Not to mention, while not at school, many children tend to lead an unhealthy lifestyle as their free time is devoted to online games, which gradually isolate them from society. Therefore, I believe that it would be well-advised that parents send their children to school at an early age.
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People have different views about whether children should start their formal education as early as possible or delay it until they are at least 7 years old. Personally, I believe an early commencement of study would be far more beneficial than a later start. Firstly, starting school at a young age would generate a number of positive outcomes. Undeniably, the younger an individual is, the easier it is for them to acquire new knowledge and information. As a result, these children would have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education. Besides this, they would have opportunities to figure out their natural talents. Most Vietnamese children, for example, are sent to kindergarten at the age of 3 or 4 to learn some basic skills such as addition and subtraction. After a couple of months, those showing potential will be cared for by teachers with an aim to train them to become specialized students in the future. However, several individuals advocate a later start to formal schooling due to a number of reasons. It is believed that commencing school at a later age will offer kids more time to learn many things via their parents at home. As a result, these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years. In addition, it might also be more beneficial for children to have a childhood in which they can cultivate their own skills and interests through normal activities at home. To conclude, despite being safe with their parents at home, children would have fewer chances to engage in extracurricular activities which would equip them with vital soft skills including teamwork and communication skills. Not to mention, while not at school, many children tend to lead an unhealthy lifestyle as their free time is devoted to online games, which gradually isolate them from society. Therefore, I believe that it would be well-advised that parents send their children to school at an early age.
Gửi lúc: 22:15:46 ngày 23-11-2021
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Time : 2021-11-29 17:02:52

https://zim.vn/bai-mau-ielts-writing-tu-vung-chu-de-education

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Education plays the first fiddle in the society and every family. Education for little children is still an arguable problem not only of individuals but also of all countries. Some people agree that children should start their formal education at a very a early age, but others prove that the schooling should be carried out when the children reach 7 years old. Firstly, the formal education at a very early age brings some advantages in some fields such as sports and languages and especially music. Playing well any musical instruments helps educators, parents and adults can discover the talent, orient and develop the gifted children. Mozart set a good example for this. He played music when he was five years old and became a prominent figure and well- known all over the world. Besides, formal education at kindergarten age may distract kids from watching TV, playing games so much and especially it is favorable for enhancing and stimulating brain. On the other hand, for others, schooling should commence after 7 years of age. They claim that it is an appropriate age as the children can meet the physical and mental requirements. In addition, to their best of their knowledge, kindergarten and nursery age is a period for extracurricular and outdoor activities. To sum up, we ought to lend a sympathetic ear to our children. If they grow up well when being taught at an early age, it is beneficial for our children and society. In case our children are reluctant to take part in schooling at early age , we had better give it up as soon as possible.
Gửi lúc: 20:34:41 ngày 23-11-2021
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Time : 2021-12-10 15:03:20

 

Education plays the first fiddle in the society and every family. Education for little children is still an arguable problem not only of individuals but also of all countries. Some people agree that children should start their formal education at a very a early age, but others prove that the schooling should be carried out when the children reach 7 years old.

Firstly, the formal education at a very early age brings some advantages in some fields such as sports and languages and especially music. Playing well any musical instruments Letting children be exposed to formal education from an early age helps educators, parents and adults can discover the talent, orient and develop the gifted children. Mozart set a good example for this. He played music when he was five years old and became a prominent figure and well- known figure all over the world. Besides, formal education at kindergarten age may distract kids from watching TV, playing games so much and especially it is favorable for enhancing and stimulating brain.

On the other hand, for others, schooling should commence after 7 years of age. They claim that it is an appropriate age as the children can meet the physical and mental requirements. In addition, to their best of their knowledge, kindergarten and nursery age is a period for extracurricular and outdoor activities.

To sum up, we ought to lend a sympathetic ear to our children. If they grow up well when being taught at an early age, it is beneficial for our children and society. In case our children are reluctant to take part in schooling at an early age , we had better give it up as soon as possible.

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I think it's good to go to school early
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Time : 2021-11-29 15:59:52

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