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Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


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Nowadays, films and video games containing violent scenes become popular. Some individuals believe that they are harmful to society and should be censored but others say that they are just a harmless entertainment. In my opinion, they have a negative effect on society and should be controlled. On the one hand, it is obvious movies and computer games containing violence bring some benefits to people. Firstly, they help people relax and reduce their stress from work or study. Due to keen competition in this fast-paced lifestyle, everyone needs some relaxation. These films and video games are designed so vivid that everyone can enjoy easily in their pastime. Secondly, when people get bored of normal movies and computer games, violent movies and computer games bring new feelings and attract people. For example, teenagers can spend hours playing violent computer games because they bring them into a new virtual world which is different from the reality. On the other hand, these things are harmful to society. Firstly, because films and video games containing violence are popular, everyone can watch or play. Thus, they make people feel negative and scary about life and the world. Consequently, they cannot live happily. Secondly, some people may learn from those violent films and video games and do horrible things. It will increase the crime rate and affect badly to society. For example, in Vietnam, after the violent movie which called “chạy án” was on air, the crime rate has been increasing. Many people learnt from its violent scenes and they applied in the real life. Thus, this kind of movies is so dangerous for society. To sum up, movies and computer games containing violence have many drawbacks, besides its benefits. Thus, the government and producers need to censor these things carefully to avoid bad things.
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Nowadays, films and video games containing violent scenes become popular. Some individuals believe that they are harmful to society and should be censored but others say that they are just a harmless entertainment. In my opinion, they have a negative effect on society and should be controlled.

On the one hand, it is obvious movies and computer games containing violence bring some benefits to people. Firstly, they help people relax and reduce their stress from work or study. Due to keen competition in this fast-paced lifestyle, everyone needs some relaxation. These films and video games are designed so vividly that everyone can enjoy easily in their pastime. Secondly, when people get bored of normal movies and computer games, violent movies and computer games bring new feelings and attract people. For example, teenagers can spend hours playing violent computer games because they bring them into a new virtual world which is different from the reality.

On the other hand, these things are harmful to society. Firstly, because films and video games containing violence are popular, everyone can watch or play. Thus, they make people feel negative and scared about of life and the world. Consequently, they cannot live happily. Secondly, some people may learn from those violent films and video games and do horrible things. It will increase the crime rate and affect badly to society. For example, in Vietnam, after the violent movie which called “chạy án” was on air, the crime rate has been increasing. Many people learnt from its violent scenes and they applied in the real life. Thus, this kind of movies is so dangerous for society.

To sum up, movies and computer games containing violence have many drawbacks, besides its benefits. Thus, the government and producers need to censor these things carefully to avoid bad things.

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Nowadays, films and computer games concluding violent scenes have become ubiquitous. While some people opine that they have an adverse impact on society and should be imposed censorship, others argue that they are just harmless types of entertainment. This essay will elaborate on these two viewpoints and argue in favor of the first. Nowadays, films and computer games concluding violent scenes have become ubiquitous. While some people opine that they have an adverse impact on society and should be imposed censorship, others argue that they are just harmless types of entertainment. This essay will elaborate on these two viewpoints and argue in favor of the first. On the one hand, there are several reasons why people believe that movies and computer games are just the way to relax, whether they contain violence or not. Firstly, today's society is more and more civilized, so they think people can differentiate between the virtual scenes and real-life situations. Therefore, they can control their behaviours and tend to have their own conscious and proper perceptions towards the violence. Secondly, playing games or watching films is a good way to relieve tension after a hard day of work. For example, in recent Covid-19 pandemic, many scientists suggested that watching movies and playing games can rejuvenate people mind and reduce the number of people who are facing serious stress. On the other hand, I believe that movie and games containing violence can lead to adverse implications to society and then should be censored. This is because they can influence people behaviours negatively to some extent when continuous exposure to such violent scenes. When they watched the violent scenes in films or games frequently, they become potentially find those violent actions like the norms in real society and then lead them to take the similar actions unconsciously or behave more aggressively. These first aggression can be leveled up to felonies such as mugging and murder. According to 2020’s reports in terms of crimes in Japan, many criminals revealed that they were influenced by violent scenes of their favourite actors in famous blockbusters. Therefore, these violent games and movies proved to be a social threat and should be censored harshly. In conclusion, although some people only perceive movies and games that have violence is an ideal choice to relax and they have a better understanding about difference between the virtual and real life, I believe that those films and games containing violence can make social problems to considerable extent and undoubtedly need to be censored strictly to develop the society.
Gửi lúc: 22:49:13 ngày 16-11-2021
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Time : 2021-12-08 17:15:04

 

Nowadays, films and computer games including violent scenes have become ubiquitous. While some people opine that they have an adverse impact on society and should be imposed censored, others argue that they are just harmless types of entertainment. This essay will elaborate on these two viewpoints and argue in favor of the first.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why people believe that movies and computer games are just the way to relax, whether they contain violence or not. Firstly, today's society is more and more civilized, so they think it is thought that people can differentiate between the virtual scenes and real-life situations. Therefore, they can control their behaviours and tend to have their own conscious and proper perceptions towards the violence. Secondly, playing games or watching films is a good way to relieve tension after a hard day of work. For example, in recent Covid-19 pandemic, many scientists suggested that watching movies and playing games can rejuvenate people’s mind and reduce the number of people who are facing serious stress.

On the other hand, I believe that movie and games containing violence can lead to adverse implications to society and then should be censored. This is because they can influence people’s behaviours can be negatively influenced to some extent when being continuously exposed to such violent scenes. When they watched the violent scenes in films or games frequently, they become potentially find those violent actions like the norms normal in real society and then this leads them to take the similar actions unconsciously or behave more aggressively. These first aggressions can be leveled up to felonies such as mugging and murder. According to 2020’s reports in terms of crimes in Japan, many criminals revealed that they were influenced by violent scenes of their favourite actors in famous blockbusters. Therefore, these violent games and movies proved to be a social threat and should be censored harshly.

In conclusion, although some people only perceive movies and games that have violence as an ideal choice to relax and they will have a better understanding about difference between the virtual and real life, I believe that those films and games containing violence can make create social problems to considerable extent and undoubtedly need to be censored strictly to develop the society.

Bài viết cơ bản có bố cục rõ ràng, đáp ứng được yêu cầu của đề bài. Tuy nhiên, em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

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lynktra2004

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As far as I know, we often watch television in our leisure time, on the day-offs, in the evening because at this time they are considered frightening, interesting, violent. Children, teenagers ussually watch cartoon to relax such as: Tom and Jerry, Oggy,... Other hand, they are addicted attracting by computer games containing violence are not strange. Fighting/ Boxing play need using force to win so children or teenagers may use her/ his brain flexibly. However, games are only games, if win,they will be joyful; if lose, they will say. These affects study results at school, cannot be as the before. Parents or adults must be responsible for growing and educating for child's not to feel alone, abondened. Some ways; watch movies together, bring the children to the cinema where they or the cupples often there, helps them acquainted with atmosphere crowded. Conclusion, Movies and computer games are not always bad for us to live in with it. My own opinion, people talk about their favorite character in the film in many different ways.
Gửi lúc: 21:20:30 ngày 16-11-2021
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Time : 2021-12-08 17:14:26

 

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên còn mắc nhiều lỗi về ngữ pháp cũng như diễn đạt. Em cố gắng diễn đạt mạch lạc, rõ ràng, đúng ngữ pháp nhé!

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Gửi lúc: 21:14:16 ngày 16-11-2021
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Time : 2021-11-28 21:24:14

Em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

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When we watch a good movie or play a violent game, it will affect us greatly. We will be distracted by them, they have unhealthy content. In the worst case, Unfortunately, there are children who watch it, and have already started to like or love that genre of film; they will follow suit which can lead to an unintended consequence. Or worst, it is that children watch this type of movie too much and it will lead to to addiction. We should not watch or play such genres. END.
Gửi lúc: 20:04:57 ngày 16-11-2021
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Time : 2021-12-08 17:13:43

 

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

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