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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?


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ĐĂNG PHẢN HỒI CỦA BẠN CHO BÀI HỌC NÀY
CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

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Nowadays, there are many countries and their governments in the world. Some people believe that only one government is more beneficial to human beings than many governments. But I think its drawbacks outweigh the benefits. On the one hand, only one government can bring many benefits. Firstly, wars or conflicts between countries will not happen anymore. Thus, people can live a peaceful life and do not have to join wars and face death or injury. Secondly, authorities can support those who live in poor areas more because they can allocate the budget easier to build schools, hospitals, factories and so on. Therefore, more people can improve their quality of life. For example, during the covid-19 pandemic, many people in developing countries died because they could not get treatment in hospitals. If these countries had more hospitals, they would not face death. Thus, having only one government in the world can solve this problem easily. On the other hand, this suggestion also has a lot of disadvantages. Since there is only one government, corruption will be more serious. Officers may try to take as much money as they can and do not care about their citizens. Because they are the only leaders in the world, they can do whatever they want. Moreover, there are many different cultures and religions in the world, so it is impossible to have the same laws for everyone. For example, Muslims want the government to prohibit pork in the world but other people want to eat this food. Thus, many people may not feel happy and satisfied with their government when they enact a new law. It may lead to many protests or conflicts. Therefore, wars will happen everywhere. Although this suggestion has some advantages, its disadvantages outweigh them. Because of the corruption and the difference between cultures and religions which will happen when we have only one government in the world can make people suffer more than now.
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Time : 2021-12-06 21:45:17

 

Nowadays, there are many countries and their governments in the world. Some people believe that only one government is more beneficial to human beings than many governments. But I think its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

On the one hand, only one government can bring many benefits. Firstly, wars or conflicts between countries will not happen anymore. Thus, people can live a peaceful life and do not have to join wars and face death or injury. Secondly, authorities can support those who live in poor areas more because they can allocate the budget easier to build schools, hospitals, factories and so on. Therefore, more people can improve their quality of life. For example, during the covid-19 pandemic, many people in developing countries died because they could not get treatment in hospitals. If these countries had more hospitals, they would not face death. Thus, having only one government in the world can solve this problem easily.

On the other hand, this suggestion also has a lot of disadvantages. Since there is only one government, corruption will be more serious. Officers may try to take as much money as they can and do not care about their citizens. Because they are the only leaders in the world, they can do whatever they want. Moreover, there are many different cultures and religions in the world, so it is impossible to have the same laws for everyone. For example, Muslims want the government to prohibit pork in the world but other people want to eat this food. Thus, many people may not feel happy and satisfied with their government when they enact a new law. It may lead to many protests or conflicts. Therefore, wars will happen everywhere.

Although this suggestion has some advantages, its disadvantages outweigh them. Because of the corruption and the difference between cultures and religions which will happen when we have only one government in the world, can make people suffer more than now.

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Now we realize that there is one national governement for each country and each government have a lot of the management way different. I have a little excited with the idea that there is just one government for the world. There are many benifit if this idea become the truth. nAbout the help each other, the renew will be apply larger. If one area is develop further other area, it share another area to easier. And the world will all greater. nAlthough data system of the world will really huge but it need too many space cloud to save. And we just one system for each field. Easier to how to use it, saver the time to how to learn it, saver to money and energy. nOne government mean one set of law. Everyone don't need to learn, use many law of many national.nScientists and researcher around the world study together. The best brain around the world create new great thing.nThe idea of creating a national government is really tough. But if we became it truth I think it was so great and fantastic world.
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Now we realize that there is one national governement for each country and each government have a lot of the management way different. I have a little excited with the idea that there is just one government for the world. There are many benifit if this idea become the truth. nAbout the help each other, the renew will be apply larger. If one area is develop further other area, it share another area to easier. And the world will all greater. nAlthough data system of the world will really huge but it need too many space cloud to save. And we just one system for each field. Easier to how to use it, saver the time to how to learn it, saver to money and energy. nOne government mean one set of law. Everyone don't need to learn, use many law of many national.nScientists and researcher around the world study together. The best brain around the world create new great thing.nThe idea of creating a national government is really tough. But if we became it truth I think it was so great and fantastic world.

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Lately, some have voiced support for a single united government to rule over mankind, supplanting the traditional model of each country having a national government. As lofty as this idea sounds, whether its advantages outweigh its disadvantages would only be clear following careful examination. Being unified under a one-world government produces several benefits, chief among them the unification of systems that people rely on in daily life. Because one government would mean uniform units of measurement, there would be no need to convert between miles and kilometers or pounds and kilograms; as a result, life would become much more convenient. The same is especially true for money when a single currency used by all would expedite every transaction under the sun. In addition, having a one-world government would make national borders redundant, and the freedom of transportation that arises will relieve humanity of the constraints of physical distance. Flying to an exotic or cosmopolitan destination every weekend for vacation, for instance, would be a lot more viable. To sum up, life’s comforts will improve thanks to the one world-state. However, this scenario might also present more drawbacks than expected. A major point to keep in mind is that as the concept of nations ceases to exist, so will the need to defend from external threats. Hence, the military would be used to police the vast global population, endangering personal liberty in the name of enforcing peace. Furthermore, since a world government’s power has to be physically concentrated at a location, the further away people are, the more likely they would be disaffected by the bureaucrats’ decisions. Conflicts would undoubtedly arise, especially considering how culturally and historically diverse mankind is, yet to address them at the root would more often than not require repressive measures. In the end, the benefits associated with a world-state would come at the expense of more fundamental matters. To conclude, having a single ruling government on Earth would do more harm than good. People deserve to be governed by themselves, or at least by those close to them physically and culturally; to support a global state would be a dishonest sacrifice of individual agency for comfort.
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DON'T UNDERSTAND THE SUBJECT TOPIC
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In a world where if there are many presidents, it will not be in the general interest of the community because countries will compete with each other to benefit their own countries. If the earth had a single government, the people would benefit together
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Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

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