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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?


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it is a common size that film stars and celebrities offen share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. From my point of views, this may have many downsides, but overall, it is a positive thing for them to contribute their opinions. Firstly, celebrities are more known to the public than experts. That's why programs in many fields of science, health, education... all invite a famous person besides the experts of that field. Why? Because sometimes the professional comments of experts often need the comments and opinions of famous stars and actors to promote to the public. Often this leads to more traffic and online rankings. Secondly, when famous people make their comments on professional issues, they will always receive a lot of attention, so that the public will pay more attention to the authenticity of the issue. Sometimes, experts don't get as much interest as celebrities. For example, calling for charity for people in difficult circumstances, calling for epidemic prevention and vaccination... Thus, we have seen that the positive impact of celebrities is not small. This makes society continue to develop more.
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Time : 2021-12-01 17:14:24

it is a common size that film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. From my point of views, this may have many downsides, but overall, it is a positive thing for them to contribute their opinions. Firstly, celebrities are more known to the public than experts. That's why programs in many fields of science, health, education... all invite a famous person besides the experts of that field. Why? Because sometimes the professional comments of experts often need the comments and opinions of famous stars and actors to promote to the public. Often this leads to more traffic and online rankings. Secondly, when famous people make their comments on professional issues, they will always receive a lot of attention, so that the public will pay more attention to the authenticity of the issue. Sometimes, experts don't get as much interest as celebrities, for example, in events such as calling for charity for people in difficult circumstances, calling for epidemic prevention and vaccination... Thus, we have seen that the positive impact of celebrities is not small. This makes society continue to develop more.

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Whether celebrities should speak about general affairs of the public irrespective of their fields, has been developed a considerable debate. However, I am of opinion that the interference of prominent icons of the film and sports industry in public matters would be a positive development. This might support the population of any state in terms of their rights and fair decision by the government. Firstly, the expression of views on public affairs by famous people would be a positive impact on the population of any state as well as on any government. For instance, statistics showed that the government of many countries has passed such resolutions which are against the people of those nations, and people are suffering because of the wrongdoings of the government and corrupt officials. In response to this, the celebrities have come out and spoken with the general public, this somehow gives a strong message to the government to take back and resolve such laws. Hence, the support of iconic persons to the general public proves a positive development. Secondly, apart from their profession, many actors and players involved in general public affairs and express ,their concerns irrespective of the outcomes. To illustrate this, recently, there was an incident in the United States
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Nowadays, along with the development of social platforms, we can see that film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. This is a positive development, in my opinion. Firstly, all citizens in our country get involved in all matters of the nation. More people raise their voice, more pressure the related people will get. Especially the voice of the celebrities will get more attention. Secondly, the celebrities get much benefits compared to the others. They live in a way all people want to be. Rasing their voice to help the citizens is also a way to give their gratitude back. Besides, all of us have sentiments, feeling and hearts. We have to speak to build a better society as well as better world. If keeping silent, we will not know that problem is right or wrong. All people including film stars and celebrities should show their opinions on public matters since we are living in a fair, free society. The more the people discuss about something, the more values we will get.
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Nowadays, along with the development of social platforms, we can see that film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. This is a positive development, in my opinion.

Firstly, all citizens in our country get involved in all matters of the nation. More people raise their voice, more pressure the related people will get. Especially the voice of the celebrities will get more attention.

Secondly, the celebrities get much more benefits compared to the others. They live in a way all people want to be. Raising their voice to help the citizens is also a way to give their gratitude back.

Besides, all of us have sentiments, feelings and hearts. We have to speak to build a better society as well as a better world. If keeping silent, we will not know that problem is right or wrong.

All people including film stars and celebrities should show their opinions on public matters since we are living in a fair, free society. The more the people discuss about something, the more values we will get.

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Nowadays, public problems are often shared by film stars and celebrities whose professions do not relate to them. In my opinion, this trend’s advantages outweigh its disadvantages On the one hand, this trend has some obvious drawbacks. Because these well-known people do not have much knowledge and experience about public matters, their opinions are sometimes wrong. But they have many fans and followers on social media. Thus, when they share their views on public matters, many people will know and talk a lot about them. Consequently, the public matters become hot debates and their opinions may be affected badly others. Moreover, some celebrities may take advantage of this way to benefit themselves. For example, they ask people for donating money to help those who are in hard situations but after that, keep some money for themselves. On the other hand, by doing this, these famous people can contribute to the development of society. Their opinions are valued higher than normal people’s opinions so they can draw lots of attention from the public. Thus, they can force others and governments to try to handle public matters better and faster. For example, miss. Phuong Hang, who is a very famous businesswoman in Vietnam nowadays, shares her opinions on raising money for charity. Thanks to her opinions, the polices are trying to make some investigations about these things now. We can see that although film stars and celebrities can use their opinions to influence others, people will recognize whether their views are good or bad later. Thus, they should consider carefully and give suitable opinions. Otherwise, their careers will be destroyed soon. To sum up, this trend is positive because film stars and celebrities can show their social responsibilities and contribute to social development.
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Nowadays, public problems are often shared by film stars and celebrities whose professions do not relate to them. In my opinion, this trend’s advantages outweigh its disadvantages

On the one hand, this trend has some obvious drawbacks. Because these well-known people do not have much knowledge and experience about public matters, their opinions are sometimes wrong. But they have many fans and followers on social media. Thus, when they share their views on public matters, many people will know and talk a lot about them. Consequently, the public matters become hot debates and their opinions may be affected badly others. Moreover, some celebrities may take advantage of this way to benefit themselves. For example, they ask people for donating money to help those who are in hard situations but after that, keep some money for themselves.

On the other hand, by doing this, these famous people can contribute to the development of society. Their opinions are valued higher than normal people’s opinions so they can draw lots of attention from the public. Thus, they can force others and governments to try to handle public matters better and faster. For example, miss. Phuong Hang, who is a very famous businesswoman in Vietnam nowadays, shares her opinions on raising money for charity. Thanks to her opinions, the polices are trying to make some investigations about into these things now.

We can see that although film stars and celebrities can use their opinions to influence others, people will recognize whether their views are good or bad later. Thus, they should consider carefully and give suitable opinions. Otherwise, their careers will be destroyed soon.

To sum up, this trend is positive because film stars and celebrities can show their social responsibilities and contribute to social development.

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