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Many young people today know more about international pop or movie stars than about famous people in the history of their own country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?


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These days, young people tend to have more interest in international celebrities than historical figures in their country. This essay will present possible causes of this trend as well as the appropriate solutions to improve the situation. There are several reasons why the young nowadays know more about famous movie and music stars instead of having knowledge of the history in their country. To begin with, social media contributes to the increasing interest of young people in celebrities. It is common to notice that famous people’s lives are grabbing the headlines of the majority of newspapers, especially the online ones. Since teenagers now spend most of their spare time surfing the Internet, they are likely to be exposed to ubiquitous posts or articles about actors or singers more frequently, thus becoming more fascinated about such topics. In addition, another cause of this trend is the tedious teaching method of history at high school. It seems that history itself is not attractive, leading to the fact that students will suffer from utter boredom if their teachers fail to make history lessons more interesting. Various solutions can be adopted to make young people more interested in history and historical people. First of all, filmmakers should be encouraged to produce movies based on key historical events. Young people will be eager to watch such movies, especially when their idols are chosen for the starring role. As a result, they will gain more knowledge about a particular historical period by watching those films. Second, the teaching method in history classroom should be tailored in order to arouse students’ interests. Instead of teaching merely a long list of names and dates in textbooks, teachers can add motion images and vivid sound effects to create more appealing lessons. In conclusion, although young people these days do not pay as much attention to history as they do to celebrities, this problem can be dealt with by several suggested solutions.
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Nowadays, young people spend more time staying in front of the screen, staying in their cyber world, so they know lots of international pop or movie stars. also, make them spend less time to learn about the history, the famous people in the past of their country. And today I'll discuss this problem. The movies now are more entertaining than before, because the movies now are looking up to the younger people, but the movies before often tell about current affairs. That makes the young people boring. That's why they don't look up to the actors or actresses before. To solve this problem, the elders and the teachers need to let them know the interests of their country's movies in the past. They can react to the movie for the student to make them curious about them. And then, they will look up for the famous people in the history of their country. Young people are forgetting and forget more about why have the past, they need to learn them to know why they have a life like now and the interest before. Learning about famous people in the history of their country is one of the ways to solve this problem.
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Nowadays, young people spend more time staying in front of the screen, staying in their cyber world, so they know lots of international pop or movie stars. This also makes them spend less time to learn about the history, the famous people in the past of their country. And today I'll discuss this problem. The movies now are more entertaining than before, because the movies now are looking up to the about younger people, but the movies before often tell about current affairs in the past. That makes the young people bored. That's why they don't look up to the actors or actresses before. To solve this problem, the elderly and the teachers need to let them know the interests of their country's movies in the past. They can react to the movie for the student to make them curious about them???. And then, they will look up for the to famous people in the history of their country. Young people are forgetting and forget more about why they have the past, they need to learn them to know why they have a life like now and the interest before. Learning about famous people in the history of their country is one of the ways to solve this problem.

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Many young people today know more about international pop or movie stars than about famous people in the history of their own country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country
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These days, young people tend to have more interests in international celebrities than historical figures in their country. This essay will present possible causes of this trend as well as the appropriate solutions to improve the situation. There are several reasons why the young nowadays know more about famous movie and music stars instead of having knowledge of the history in their country. To begin with, social media contributes to the increasing interest of young people in celebrities. It is common to notice that famous people’s lives are grabbing the headlines of the majority of newspapers, especially the online ones. Since teenagers now spend most of their spare time surfing the Internet, they are likely to be exposed to ubiquitous posts or articles about actors or singers more frequently, thus becoming more fascinated about such topics. In addition, another cause of this trend is the tedious teaching method of history at high school. It seems that history itself is not attractive, leading to the fact that students will suffer from utter boredom if their teachers fail to make history lessons more interesting. Various solutions can be adopted to make young people more interested in history and historical people. First of all, film makers should be encouraged to produce movies based on key historical events. Young people will be eager to watch such movies, especially when their idols are chosen for the starring role. As a result, they will gain more knowledge about a particular historical period by watching those films. Second, the teaching method in history classroom should be tailored in order to arouse students’ interests. Instead of teaching merely a long list of names and dates in textbooks, teachers can add motion images and vivid sound effects to create more appealing lessons. In conclusion, although young people these days do not pay as much attention to history as they do to celebrities, this problem can be dealt with by several suggested solutions.
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International pop or movie star is very famous all over the world with some faces like: Son Tung MTP, Tieu Chien, Vuong Nhat Bac,... so all people like them because they talented and handsome. But I can say: A lot of people don't know about the famous people in the history of their country.
I don't know about them because they don't pay attention of this because some of reasons like: They don't talented like international pop or movie star in the world, they aren't handsome like them but all people like this just forget: They are Vietnamese and they want to make movies or music for Vietnamese people to help them relax and smile more. They try their best to do all things. They didn't do it because money, they do it because they love country, love their job so you should to notice about their songs and films because it can makes them feel happy and they will have effort to make more songs and films. I don't that you mustn't watch international pop or films. You can spend a little time on it.

To make young people's interested in their famous people in the history of their country, you should to make some of history short movie about the heroes like: Hai Ba Trung, Ly Thuong Kiet,... or have more advertisements in the internet or on the web to see movie. It doesn't easy right? But I belief that actors or singers who loves their job can make this.

That's all my thinking and idea about this topic. Do you agree with me? Thanks for reading. Goodbye and see you in the next essay.
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