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Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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It is argued that men naturally have a higher level of competitiveness than women. I strongly disagree with this viewpoint; in my perspective women are at par with men. First and foremost, women have and are proving their fortitude in society by executing every assigned task in an excellent way. To exemplify, in the current scenario, it is a very common sight to have women as a pilot, metro train drivers, and the president of a country. Moreover, in a working environment full of both genders, women tend to perform better tasks comparing to men because they are more careful and wish to acquire a higher salary to satisfy their life. Furthermore, it is to be seen that competitiveness is based significantly on different situations and opportunities rather than based on gender. For instance, when a man needs to do the household shores when his partner works in her office, he naturally becomes experienced in these activities and often becomes more competitive than her. Similarly, when opportunities are given for women in politics, they are seen exhibiting their exceptional skills there. In conclusion, it is clear that if measured on the basis of gender, one cannot determine the level of competitiveness in an accurate way, as it depends more on other factors.
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It is argued that men naturally have a higher level of competitiveness than women. I strongly disagree with this viewpoint; in my perspective women are at par with men.

First and foremost, women have and are proving their fortitude in society by executing every assigned task in an excellent way. To exemplify, in the current scenario, it is a very common sight to have women as a pilot, metro train drivers, and the president of a country. Moreover, in a working environment full of both genders, women tend to perform better tasks comparing to men because they are more careful and wish to acquire a higher salary to satisfy their life.

Furthermore, it is to be seen that competitiveness is based significantly on different situations and opportunities rather than based on gender. For instance, when a man needs to do the household chores when his partner works in her office, he naturally becomes experienced in these activities and often becomes more competitive than her. Similarly, when opportunities are given for women in politics, they are seen exhibiting their exceptional skills there.

In conclusion, it is clear that if measuring on the basis of gender, one cannot determine the level of competitiveness in an accurate way, as it depends more on other factors.

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In now, women and men have competitive in evey field from worker to president. In my opinion, I have a little agree with above claim. There are three point of view why I think that. It is relative to strong and detail, on the time that women have baby, men have important role on the family.nAs the first reason that I recommended above, men are stronger than women in the physical. Although some field that need to about strong they want to use men more but there are many women work in other field about need to detail skills. So they equal in here.nSecond thing I want to recommend is women have to have birth. That is reason women usually don't apply in important positive. For example, time to women president is 2 years but if in this time she have baby she need to 6 month to have birth and improve her health after that. Absolutely, other women don't work in 2 years.nFinally, when men were kids, they are tought that they have to make money to feed they family. That why they need to 100 percent to competitive and make money.nConclusion, men have to competitive more than women because women have birth, have to take care baby, themselves after that and the men are tought more strong because men are gold hand in they family.
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In my opinion, it is true that men are stronger than women, more competitive than women. In feudal society, women only stay at home to take care of the family and children, while men are the breadwinners. The column can scold a woman but it is not a woman who is weak, but women also have their strong qualities, they can also be stronger than men, can also be stronger than men. in the world, there are many strong women so people don't think men are more competitive than women but women can too!
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Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. But it is only true when competing for games or jobs that require strength, such as physical games, etc. ..But if it's intellectual work that needs intelligence like office work, girls can be equal to or better than boys. So we can see that boys are better than girls, but it's only part of the game that requires health, but it is not certain that boys can be better than girls.
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