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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?


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foxagency
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foxagency

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Nowadays, there are many animals facing extinction. Some people think that becoming extinct is their natural process so we should not try to stop this phenomenon. I disagree with this opinion because humans should try to keep the biodiversity and this also affects our life. On the one hand, every animal on this earth contributes to biodiversity. However, because humans are on the top of the natural food chain, biodiversity is affected the most by them. It is obvious that there is a hundred wildlife have become extinct nowadays. The major reason behind this phenomenon is human actions. For example, due to the exploitation of forests, the number of many wild animals such as elephants, tigers, bears is reducing dramatically. Because their environment is destroyed, they do not have enough food to eat. Thus, the human being has the responsibility to help endangered animals. On the other hand, if we do not try to prevent endangered animals from extinction, we may face terrible consequences soon. When there are some animals facing extinction, nature is giving some signs of dangerous things that may happen soon. Because of global warming, the average temperature in the earth is increasing so fast and the sea level continues to rise. Thus, many animal species are facing dangerous situations and they may become extinct. Consequently, the human’s future is not bright and the worst scenario is we may also become extinct because humans depend completely on nature for food and the environment. Therefore, when we try to stop wildlife extinction, we also save our life too. To sum up, we should try to prevent animal species from extinction because humans are the main cause of this phenomenon and by doing this, we also protect our life in the future
Gửi lúc: 23:51:30 ngày 05-10-2021
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2021-11-03 21:30:55

 

Nowadays, there are many animals facing extinction. Some people think that becoming extinct is their natural process so we should not try to stop this phenomenon. I disagree with this opinion because humans should try to keep the biodiversity and this also affects our life.

On the one hand, every animal on this earth contributes to biodiversity. However, because humans are on the top of the natural food chain, biodiversity is affected the most by them. It is obvious that there is a are hundreds of wildlife species have becoming extinct nowadays. The major reason behind this phenomenon is human actions. For example, due to the exploitation of forests, the number of many wild animals such as elephants, tigers, bears is reducing dramatically. Because their environment is destroyed, they do not have enough food to eat. Thus, the human beings have the responsibility to help endangered animals.

On the other hand, if we do not try to prevent endangered animals from extinction, we may face terrible consequences soon. When there are some animals facing extinction, nature is giving some signs of dangerous things that may happen soon. Because of global warming, the average temperature on the earth is increasing so fast and the sea level continues to rise. Thus, many animal species are facing dangerous situations and they may become extinct. Consequently, the human’s future is not bright and the worst scenario is we may also become extinct because humans depend completely on nature for food and the environment. Therefore, when we try to stop wildlife extinction, we also save our life too.

To sum up, we should try to prevent animal species from extinction because humans are the main cause of this phenomenon and by doing this, we also protect our life in the future

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lequangnhan

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Nowadays, more and more animal species are becoming vulnerable and susceptible to totally disappear. Some people claim that the phenomenon is a natural process and there is no point in prevent extinction from occuring. In my opinion, the extinction of animal species is not basically natural, and humanity should try their best to stop this from continuation due to the following arguments.
Beside natural factors, humanity are responsible for making animal species extinct. Throughout history, there existed a habit of hunting animals for food and other convenience. On the ground of that habit, poachers have killed many animals in the forest to provide the necessities for others. This has caused a significant decrease in the number of wild animals. Therefore, scientists have proved that those animals will soon disappear and humans are the most concerning reason for this. In addition, there are some zoos that are constructed to protect wild animals, but it is widely said that those places keep animals from their natural habitats, and if they cannot adapt to the new life, they will die immidiately. For example, some cruel zoo keepers sell animals there to the circus to entertain the citizens. This might affect harmfully to the health and adaptation of animals.
Although humans are one of the reasons for animal species to become extinct, they can preserve those species in many possible ways. I believe if the forest rangers are more strict to punish the poachers heavily by committing them or fine them a huge amount of money, the poachers may be frightened enough to stop hunting wild animals more than necessary. Besides, if the zoo keepers are friendly and care the animals honestly, they can provide them convenience and help them adapt quickly to the new situation. By this way, the animals will live satisfiedly and the population of their species will grow up afterwards. For instance, when a zoo expert understands accurately about the animal and instruct others how to take well care of it, it can give birth to its children and increase the number of species in its type.
In conclusion, I think humans must be responsible for the extinction of animal species, and they this problem can be solved by many solutions. In my opinion, the humanity need to raise their awareness about wildlife. As a result, they are willing to help wild animals to grow and develop in every habitats.
Gửi lúc: 23:49:29 ngày 05-10-2021
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2021-11-03 21:30:34

 

Nowadays, more and more animal species are becoming vulnerable and susceptible to extinction totally disappear. Some people claim that the phenomenon is a natural process and there is no point in preventing extinction from occurring. In my opinion, the extinction of animal species is not basically natural, and humanity should try their best to stop this from continuation continuing due to the following arguments.

Besides natural factors, humanity are responsible for making animal species extinct. Throughout history, there existed a habit of hunting animals for food and other convenience. On the ground of that habit, poachers have killed many animals in the forest to provide the necessities for others. This has caused a significant decrease in the number of wild animals. Therefore, scientists have proved that those animals will soon disappear and humans are the most concerning reason for this. In addition, there are some zoos that are constructed to protect wild animals, but it is widely said that those places keep animals from their natural habitats, and if they cannot adapt to the new life, they will die immediately. For example, some cruel zoo keepers sell animals there to the circus to entertain the citizens. This might affect harmfully to the health and adaptation of animals.

Although humans are one of the reasons for animal species to become extinct, they can preserve those species in many possible ways. I believe if the forest rangers are more stricter to and punish the poachers heavily by committing them or fining them a huge amount of money, the poachers may be frightened enough to stop hunting wild animals more than necessary. Besides, if the zoo keepers are friendly and care the animals carefully honestly, they can provide them convenience and help them adapt quickly to the new situation. By this way, the animals will live satisfiedly comfortably and the population of their species will grow up afterwards. For instance, when a zoo expert understands accurately about the animal and instructs others how to take well care of it, it can give birth to its children and increase the number of species in its type.

In conclusion, I think humans must be responsible for the extinction of animal species, and they this problem can be solved by many solutions. In my opinion, the humanity needs to raise their awareness about of wildlife. As a result, they are willing to help wild animals to grow and develop in every habitats.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

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Tuuyen1812

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I disagree with this opinion. You guys should stop this. Because why? The goal of this is to ensure that the natural world is protected to protect future generations and to help humanity realize the importance of wildlife and the wild environment to humans and animals different species on this planet. Many countries have government agencies and organizations dedicated to wildlife conservation, to support the implementation of policies designed to protect wildlife. Many independent nonprofit organizations also promote wildlife conservation. Today, wildlife conservation has become an increasingly important practice due to the negative effects of human activities on wildlife. Efforts to strengthen the protection of important species such as rhinos, elephants, tigers, and pangolins, in addition to directly contributing to the conservation of these animals, also have symbolic meaning, creating motivation for the community. the conservation of all other wildlife species, contributing to the prevention of all kinds of natural disasters, maintaining ecological services important to the life and socio-economic development of human communities people, local, national and international. Wild animals are extremely valuable natural resources, making an important contribution to creating ecological balance and ensuring a healthy living environment for humans. Therefore, the elders must be responsible for protecting wild animals, creating habitats for these animals to be preserved and developed. This will be the end of my post, please everyone preserve wildlife and have reasons to prevent this.
Gửi lúc: 20:29:59 ngày 05-10-2021
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Time : 2021-11-03 21:30:24

 

I disagree with this opinion. You guys should stop this. Because why? The goal of this is to ensure that the natural world is protected to protect for the sake of future generations and to help humanity realize the importance of wildlife and the wild environment to humans and animals different species on this planet.

Many countries have government agencies and organizations dedicated to wildlife conservation, to support the implementation of policies designed to protect wildlife. Many independent nonprofit organizations also promote wildlife conservation. Today, wildlife conservation has become an increasingly important practice due to the negative effects of human activities on wildlife.

Efforts to strengthen the protection of important species such as rhinos, elephants, tigers, and pangolins, in addition to directly contributing to the conservation of these animals, also have a symbolic meaning, creating motivation for the community. the conservation of all other wildlife species, contributing to the prevention of all kinds of natural disasters, maintaining ecological services important to the life and socio-economic development of human communities people, local, national and international (diễn đạt).

Wild animals are extremely valuable natural resources, making an important contribution to creating ecological balance and ensuring a healthy living environment for humans. Therefore, the elders human beings must be responsible for protecting wild animals, creating habitats for these animals to be preserved and developed.

This will be the end of my post, please everyone preserve wildlife and have reasons to prevent this.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

Nguyễn Tú Uyên

minhtui

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It is contended by many that the extermination of certain wildlife species is an inevitable part of natural selection and occurs even in the absence of human interference. I completely disagree with this judgement. Firstly, human influence has been proven to be responsible for the extinction of certain species. For hundreds of years, the progressive expansion of humans territory, especially for cultivation and habitation has resulted in the loss of animal habitat. Hunting is driving numerous species to mass extinction or to the degree they are gravely threatened. Therefore, it is imperative humans assume the responsibility for reversing the situation and overcome the consequences. Secondly, animals play a significant role in maintaining the biodiversity. In other words, different species are mutually reliant on each other in the food chain, and their roles are equally indispensable. Considering this, the demise of a certain species from the chain can result in the widespread disruption of ecosystems. For example, if there were no mosquitoes, many lizards or other insect eating animals would be in the situation where there are lack of food and they could starve and die. Finally, the efforts expended to save animal species act as an educational tool, which may somehow change the course of nature. For example, keeping animals in zoos can shelter them against possible threats such as scarcity of foods or other predators which they are likely to confront in the wilderness. With better protection and more zoo-based awareness raising activities, the public can be aware of the gravity of the situation and together join hands to preserve animal species, especially rare and endangered ones. In conclusion, due to the unparalleled functions and merits of wildlife protection mentioned above, I believe that making efforts to save wildlife from extinction is worthwhile.
Gửi lúc: 17:45:49 ngày 05-10-2021
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Time : 2021-10-15 09:56:53

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I agree because this is a natural process that can't be interfered with. Such laws are governed and managed very strictly in the universe. For example, the formation of the earth, no one knows for sure that the earth is true. how and from what was the earth formed by no one there them because time goes by so fast. In short, this is a natural condition. Whether they go extinct or not is due to humans, if you hunt and kill them, the consequences will be that all species will become extinct. And if people protect them, If they don't hunt, they won't go extinct.The initial step can be said to be slow because people are not aware of the extinction of animals, for example elephants, many hunters just because of the desire for money, carry a gun to kill elephants. innocent people to get ivory and other parts and sell them to the rich, so they will benefit, but will the animals benefit, of course not. In life there must be a balance, people If one benefits, the other also needs to benefit. Life must have a balance in order to survive and develop for a long time. In short, whether animals become extinct or not depends on the consciousness of people.
Gửi lúc: 15:47:56 ngày 05-10-2021
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Time : 2021-11-03 21:29:48

 

I agree because this is a natural process that can't be interfered with. Such laws are governed and managed very strictly in the universe. For example, the formation of the earth, no one knows for sure that the earth is true. how and from what was the earth formed by no one there them because time goes by so fast???. In short, this is a natural condition. Whether they go extinct or not is due to humans, if you hunt and kill them, the consequences will be that all species will become extinct. And if people protect them, If they don't hunt, they won't go extinct. The initial step extinction can be said to be slow because people are not aware of the extinction of animals. For example, elephants, many hunters kill elephants just because of the desire for money, so they carry a gun to kill elephants. innocent people to get ivory and other parts and sell them to the rich, so they will benefit, but will the animals benefit? of course not. In life there must be a balance, people If one benefits, the other also needs to benefit. Life must have a balance in order to survive and develop for a long time. In short, whether animals become extinct or not depends on the consciousness of people.

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