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Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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There are those who have suggested the possibility of totally banning all advertising. In my opinion, though this would seemingly improve society, the actual impact would be to imperil the global economy. Supporters of a prohibition argue the injurious impact of advertising on human society and health. On the most superficial level, advertising is distracting. Individuals must strive to avoid ads on television, online, on billboards, and in magazines. All this can contribute to the anxiety and declining mental health that characterizes modern man. Beyond this, advertising has a pernicious impact on how the world operates. Corporations and entire national economies are structured around an ideal of continual consumption that not only harms the environment but also transforms individuals into a means for a financial end. Nonetheless, actually banning advertising would disrupt the global financial system. Nearly every nation and economy depends on advertising as the foundation of a capitalist system. Some of the largest companies in the world, including Facebook and Google, generate the vast majority of their revenue from targeted marketing and their dissolution would have ramifications across a range of industries. The implications could also become deeper. If individuals and companies no longer had the ability to advertise products and services, they would likely lose the motivation to innovate. Over time, this could result in stifling progress in major fields ranging from medicine and internet technology to entertainment and the sciences more generally. In conclusion, despite the negative effects of advertising on human society, it is an important catalyst for growth in the modern world. Advertisements should be regulated but not eliminated entirely.
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In my opinion, we don't need to outright ban any form of such advertising. Advertising also helps us to order online, shop, ... and many other pleasures. But ads are sometimes untrue, deceiving viewers as well as users, so I think there is no need to ban all such ads, just ban and penalize those that deceive viewers and users.
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In my opinion, we don't need to outright ban any all forms of such advertising. Advertising also helps us to order online, shop, ... and provides many other pleasures. But ads are sometimes untrue, deceiving viewers as well as users, so I think there is no need to ban all such ads, just ban and penalize those that deceive viewers and users.

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Nowadays, adverts have become so popular that make people feel annoyed sometimes. Thus, some individuals argue that all kinds of advertising should be banned completely. In my opinion, this proposal is impossible because advertisements are important for both firms and customers. On the one hand, ads help companies increase awareness, interest and desire from potential and current customers to their products or services, especially new ones. In order to boost their sales and profit, companies must use advertising to introduce their products or services to enormous people by TV and radio ads, outdoor billboards, printed ads or digital online ads. Otherwise, fewer people know about them so they do not have many customers. Thus, their companies cannot develop and they may face bankrupt later. On the other hand, thanks to ads, customers know about the right products or services that they are looking for. Advertising provides the basic information of the products or services such as function, ingredients, origin and so on for customers. Therefore, they can consider whether they should buy it or not. For example, Vietnamese people prefer Japanese bicycle rather than Chinese bicycle so when they see ads about imported bicycles they know where it comes from before the buying decision. However, there are too many ads everywhere nowadays that make people feel tired and boring. Moreover, many ads provide fake information and function that is harmful to customers. Thus, the government should impose laws to protect people and customers. To sum up, advertising is important for both firms and customers so it should not be banned completely. But the government should enact laws about advertisements to avoid their drawbacks.
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Time : 2021-11-02 10:41:21

 

Nowadays, adverts have become so popular that they make people feel annoyed sometimes. Thus, some individuals argue that all kinds of advertising should be banned completely. In my opinion, this proposal is impossible because advertisements are important for both firms and customers.

On the one hand, ads help companies increase awareness, interest and desire from potential and current customers to their products or services, especially new ones. In order to boost their sales and profit, companies must use advertising to introduce their products or services to enormous people by TV and radio ads, outdoor billboards, printed ads or digital online ads. Otherwise, fewer people know about them so they do not have many customers. Thus, their companies cannot develop and they may face bankruptcy later.

On the other hand, thanks to ads, customers know about the right products or services that they are looking for. Advertising provides the basic information of the products or services such as functions, ingredients, origin and so on for customers. Therefore, they can consider whether they should buy it or not. For example, Vietnamese people prefer Japanese bicycles rather than Chinese bicycles so when they see ads about imported bicycles they know where it comes from before deciding to buy one the buying decision.

However, there are too many ads everywhere nowadays that make people feel tired and bored. Moreover, many ads provide fake information and function that is harmful to customers. Thus, the governments should impose laws to protect people and customers.

To sum up, advertising is important for both firms and customers so it should not be banned completely. But the governments should enact laws about advertisements to avoid their drawbacks.

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I disagree, because without advertising, the economy will crash.
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