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Some people think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


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CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

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Nowadays, more and more students take part in study nature. Whereas, some people think that it is a waste time to study it. In my view of point, I don’t agree with that. I think study nature have many benefits. Fistly, study nature can help student understand more about themselves. When contact with natural environment,they can know thoroughly about their interests, they hobbies and their strength points. They can improve survival skills and get more confidence. Secondly, study nature help student reduce stress after they take many hours to study hard at school. They can breath the fresh air and explore new thing around them. As the result, they can restore enery and have many positive thinkings. Lastly, study nature make student love the world and realize the value of it. They can preserve natural sources and natural environment. So, they may have many activities to educate the others about the significant role of nature. To sum up, sudy nature have many benefit not only for the student but also for the social. I belive that it can make our life better and more meaningful.
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Time : 2021-03-27 21:10:46

Nowadays, more and more students take part in studying (VIng sau giới từ) nature. Whereas chỉ dùng whereas khi nối 2 mệnh đề chứ không đứng độc lập, some people think that it is a waste time to study it. In From my view of point, I don’t không viết tắt khi viết luận agree with that. I think studying nature have many benefits.
Fistly, studying (danh động từ làm chủ ngữ) nature can help students danh từ số nhiều understand more about themselves. When thiếu chủ ngữ ở mệnh đề trạng ngữ contact with natural environment,they can know thoroughly about their interests, they dùng tính từ sở hữu hobbies and their strength points. They can improve survival skills and get more confidence.
Secondly, studying nature helps chia động từ theo chủ ngữ ngôi thứ ba số ít students reduce stress after they take many hours to study hard at school. They can breath the fresh air and explore new things around them. As the a result, they can restore enery chính tả and have many positive thinkings thoughts.
Lastly, studying nature makes students love the world and realize the value of it. They can preserve natural sources and natural environment. So Hence, they là ai? may have many activities to educate the others about the significant role of nature.
To sum up, sudy chính tả nature have brings many benefits danh từ số nhiều sau mant not only for the students but also for the social dùng danh từ society. I belive that it can make our life better and more meaningful.

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In my opinion, I disagree with the comments above because one of the subjects that is important that the teachers should teach is study nature because it helps students more knowledge than about nature, people and plants in the world. Moreover, study nature also helps us discover a lot of new things. First of all, when the students study natural biology from the teachers, They will improve their skill know about the tree and use to, develop seeds in order to plant trees server the country. Especially, study nature biology also helps the students lovely this subject become a scientist in the future. In addition, we can study human body parts when they gradually develop at teenage, so study natural will make yourself better than. Second of all, when we are still learning at school, we will discover anything from in the book and social. A national park is a place the student needs to come to discover about the trees such as mushrooms, old trees... those are hands-on sessions that help students find information about nature. Surely it is a very interesting and rewarding subject because it sends students to immerse themselves in nature. In conclusion, for me, I feel study nature subject is so useful and good because it makes us more know the in the life.
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chưa có chủ điểm In my opinion, I disagree with the comments above đã đề cập đến đâu mà dùng above because one of the subjects that is important that the teachers should teach is study nature because it helps students more knowledge than about nature, people and plants in the world câu run-on, có quá nhiều ý, rối ý. Moreover, studying Danh động từ Ving dùng làm chủ ngữ nature also helps us discover a lot of new things.
First of all, when the students study natural biology from the teachers, They will improve their skill know about the tree and use to, develop seeds in order to plant trees server the country chưa thể hiện rõ ý. Especially, studying nature biology also helps the students lovely chú ý cấu trúc help sb (to) do sth this subject become a scientist in the future. In addition, we can study human body parts when they gradually develop at teenage, so study natural will make yourself better than.không đúng chủ đề
Second of all, when we are still learning at school, we will discover anything from in the book and social?. A national park is a place the student needs to come to discover about the trees such as mushrooms, old trees... nhắc đến park để làm gì? those are hands-on sessions that help students find information about nature. Surely it is a very interesting and rewarding subject because it sends students to immerse themselves in nature.
In conclusion, for me, I feel study nature subject is so useful and good because it makes us more know more the in the life.

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In today’s competitive world, students have to study subjects that they are not interested in at schools. Let us first examine the reasons why some people hold the opinion that students should not have to study all the subjects and should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to study. They claim that in this case, the students will probably be more studying. In conclusion, I believe that students should learn all subjects at the school level as they are not mature enough to know their real interests at that age, and broad knowledge is also needed for their career development
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Nowadays, with significant development of technology and science, many people think that educating nature for students is no longer necessary. In my opinion, I strongly do not support for this ideal with some below reasons. Firstly, in terms of individual, studying nature is the best way in order to help children develop comprehensively. It is obvious that people live inside the natural world, so studying habitat is fundamental thing to survive. When understanding natural phenomenon, people can decrease a lot of lose cause by natural disasters. Therefore, students should be touch nature as soon as possible to get useful knowledge about nature. In addition, through a wide range of lesson about nature and interacting with nature, children become more mature in physical and mental. For example, children who live in countryside have more opportunities to study nature than who live in big city, they usually are stronger and more extrovert and sociable. Secondly, natural education contributes to sustainable development of humans. It is clear that, people live on natural resources, so study habitat is very vital because it make the next generations change their perceptions about nature and must have right action to use properly and conserve natural resource. For instant, when youngters are well aware of environmental protections, they will adjust their behaviors like limiting in using plastic utensils and consuming recyclable energy. Moreover, there is a truth that, environment is becoming danger due to indiscriminate exploitation of natural resource, hence teaching students knowledge about current natural situation is very important and urgently to make sure at least that children will not follow before generations in treating with nature. In conclusion, with above-mentioned, I believe that study nature is very necessary to students in order to help students stronger and more responsibility, moreover our world also become better.
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Time : 2021-03-27 20:58:09

Nowadays, with significant development of technology and science, many people think that educating nature for students is no longer necessary. In my opinion, I strongly do not support for this ideal with some below reasons.
Firstly, in terms of individual, studying nature is the best way in order to help children develop comprehensively. It is obvious that people live inside the natural world, so studying habitat is fundamental thing to survive. When understanding natural phenomenon, people can decrease a lot of lose dùng danh từ sau a lot of  caused (rút gọn quá khứ phân từ) by natural disasters. Therefore, students should be touch không dùng tobe trước động từ thường nature as soon as possible to get useful knowledge about nature. In addition, through a wide range of lesson about nature and interacting with nature, children become more mature in physical and mental dùng danh từ sau giới từ. For example, children who live in countryside have more opportunities to study nature than who live in big city, thiếu từ nối chuyển ý they usually are stronger and more extrovert and sociable.
Secondly, natural education contributes to sustainable development of humans. It is clear that, people live on natural resources, so study habitat is very vital because it makes chia động từ theo chủ ngữ ngôi thứ ba số ít the next generations change their perceptions about nature and must have right action to use properly and conserve natural resource rối ý, không rõ đâu là nguyên nhân, đâu là kết quả. For instant dùng danh từ sau giới từ, cụm từ for instance , when youngters are well aware of environmental protections, they will adjust their behaviors like limiting in using plastic utensils and consuming recyclable energy đây không phải dạng liệt kê, so sánh nên không dùng like. Moreover, there is a truth that, environment is becoming danger dùng tính từ sau become due to indiscriminate dùng tính từ trước danh từ exploitation of natural resources, hence teaching students knowledge about current natural situation is very important and urgently to make sure at least that children will not follow before generations in treating with nature.
In conclusion, with above-mentioned, I believe that study danh động từ Ving dùng làm chủ ngữ  nature is very necessary to for students in order to help students to be stronger and more responsibility dùng tính từ, chú ý tương quan khi dùng and, tách ý để tránh câu run-on moreover our world also become better.

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nowadays, there are many parents think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature and maybe they think that their children will be better if their children learn natural subjects. according to me. i am not agree with that statement, after this i will express my opinions on the one hand, school where children can be easily to looking for and study around their life, where there are teachers who can explain everything for their curious about their life. subjects which teach your children which is chosen by experts, who have many experiment in education . So i think school where can help your children more better through useful subjects, therefore you do not worry about subjects which will be waste of your children's time on the other hand, that is the statement above, i determine that it is a meaningful subject and necessary for student. it help student know more about environment and it's value compare with human on the world to sum up, it is a great and necessary subject. it install many useful skills for children in natural
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Time : 2021-03-27 09:26:49

nowadays, there are many parents people (dùng không đúng đối tượng được nhắc đến ở yêu cầu đề bài think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature and maybe they think that their children will be better if their children learn natural subjects danh từ số ít và dùng danh từ chỉ môn học. according to me. , i am I do not agree with that statement, after this i will express my opinions
on the one hand, school where children can be easily to looking for and study around their life, where there are teachers who can explain everything for their curious about their life vừa diễn đạt không rõ ngữ pháp, vừa là câu fragment. subjects which teach your children which is chosen by experts, who have many experiment in education ?. So i think school where can help your children more better through useful subjects, therefore you do not worry about subjects which will be waste of your children's time

on the other hand, that is the statement above, i determine that it is a meaningful subject and a necessary one for students. it helps chia động từ theo chủ ngữ ngôi thứ ba số ít students know more about environment and it's value compare with human on the world ?

to sum up, it is a great and necessary subject. it install provides many useful skills for children in natural dùng tính từ

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