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To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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It is suggested that in order to be successful in business, a person has to possess the ability to learn mathematics excellently. In my opinion, I disagree with this view, for there are other major factors determining the success of a business that an individual should have, which I will outline now. First of all, we must consider the main factor is leadership. Organizations that take the lead to compete with others are guided by outstanding leaders. These people who are charming and persuasive could easily inspire the employees and gather their beliefs. If one lacks these characteristics, it is difficult for him to manage his people and the company hardly establishes a fine reputation on the market. For example, a boss who always reproaches his staff rather than motivating them to achieve would not earn respect from them. Therefore, the staff will not fulfill commands and always make mistakes when dealing with tasks. Whereas, a qualified boss is the one providing directions for a company and its workers, and it involves showing workers how to effectively perform their responsibilities and regularly supervising the completion of their tasks. The other factor that influences the success of a business is a great vision. An individual needs to recognize the opportunities in the market to seize them and lead the company to the top. An example of this could be seen in Apple Company Incorporated. Many years ago, laptops were heavy and bulky, which caused difficulties for users to carry them whenever they travel. Understanding this, Steve Jobs and his company came up with MacBook Air, the laptop model that was super-light and compact which brought the company considerable sales and became the standard in designing laptops that other manufacturers follow until now. In conclusion, my firm conviction is that leadership and vision are the two key traits of a person in deciding the success of a business. Without these, a corporation will not move forward in the commercial race.
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It is generally the case that mathematical skills have contributed to the success of entrepreneurs. While this notion may be reasonable for some businessmen, I opine that for many successful companies nowadays, employers do not need to do the calculations themselves.
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To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

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In my opinion, the person who want to succeed in a business, he/she must know maths. First we also know that math help us to calculate everything we need like the debt or survey a land; it's very important in our life. Let's think about when we don't know math, how can we calculate things? Because that, math is very important tools for us to succeed in a business. Second, math is very important for our brain, it helps us to improve our brain and if a person is good at maths, he or she can arrange the works very good. A large of people always say that we don't need math to succeed in a business because they can hire a person who good at math to help them in calculating. And i mean that's very wrong because if they don't know math, they can't have any degree and so that he can't out of school.
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In my opinion, the person who wants chia động từ theo chủ ngữ ngôi thứ ba số ít to succeed in a business, he/she must know maths.
First we also know that maths helps us to calculate everything we need like the debt or survey a land ví dụ không phù hợp với ý; thiếu sự chuyển ý it's very important in our life. Let's think about when we don't know maths, how can we calculate things? Because of that, maths is very important tools for us to succeed in a business.
Second, maths is very important for our brain, it helps us to improve our brain and if a person is good at maths, he or she can arrange the works very good well (trạng từ cuối câu). A large of people always say that we don't need math to succeed in a business because they can hire a person who good at math to help them in calculating thông tin không đúng. And i mean that's very wrong because if they don't know math, they can't have any degree and so that he can't out of school.chú ý diễn đạt để làm rõ ý

Bạn viết bài chưa rõ ràng 1 bài luận, bạn mới chỉ lập luận dưới dạng 1 đoạn văn. Hơn nữa, các ý bạn viết chưa diễn đạt tốt, chưa chính xác ngữ pháp và thậm chí cả thông tin. Bạn hãy cố gắng nhiều hơn nhé. Bạn cần triển khai ý và lập luận rõ ràng hơn cho 1 bài luận với bố cục 3 phần như sau:

Introduction: giới thiệu câu chủ đề, ý chính của bài (trả lời câu hỏi đề bài)

Body: các luận điểm để giải thích, chứng minh luận điểm chính ở phần giới thiệu

Conclusion: tóm tắt ý chính, trình bày quan điểm các nhân

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Many people regard math skills as a key factor to achieve success in business as it facilitates the decision making process. However, I believe it is only one out of various factors that contribute to business success and therefore non-essential. On the one hand, math enables key people to make better decisions. One application of business mathematics is to provide statistics that can predict future scenarios. These predictions might lay a firm foundation for more informed and evidence-based decisions, replacing biased ones based on managers’ gut feelings. For decades, Unilever has utilised a statistical model that can forecast the supply and demand of fast-moving consumer goods, allowing the company leaders to promptly plan production and sales of each product category. On the other hand, I believe that one can run a business successfully without excellent math skills. In fact, many entrepreneurs have built billion-dollar enterprises thanks to great personal qualities. A good example in this case is Nguyen Thanh Duc, the chairman of NTD Group. He was known to be a disruptive student that failed almost all school subjects including math, yet he rose to become an inspirational leader who could motivate his employees to strive to gain collective success for the corporation. In addition, his success is attributed to the courage to take the risks that rational calculations, such as those that guide Unilever, would rule out. As these leadership qualities concurred with a good fortune, his startup has evolved into a multinational business empire, becoming market leaders in many industries including real estate, fishery and forestry. In conclusion, although statistical math could help make better decisions, I am of the opinion that risk taking, inspirational personality traits and luck are crucial to drive an enterprise to success. That is why business schools should focus more on honoring interpersonal skills including leadership and communication.
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