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Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that only small differences between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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Anyone want to live in a happy society. Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that only small differences between the rich and the poor. In my opinion, i don't totally agree this point so i will explain below. Fistly,we can encourage the poor to increase their income but it’s not necessary to make the rich to more poor. The money that people earned is the result of their attempt. So we want everyone all need work hard to increase their income and expect that no one is cut salary and bonuses. All are more and more rich than before. Secondly, the rich and the poor can use the money in the way that they want. The rich can buy anything they want to help them have comfortable life and the poor can spend money appropriately. They still feel happy if they satisfy with the thing that they have To sum up, the rich and the poor can live with each other although they have many different point.
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Everyone wants to live in a happy society. Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that only small differences between the rich and the poor. In my opinion, i don't totally agree with this point so i will explain below. Firstly, we can encourage the poor to increase their income but it’s not necessary to make the rich to more poorer. The money that people earned is the result of their attempt. So we want everyone all need to work hard to increase their income and expect that no one is cut salary and bonuses. All are more and more richer than before. Secondly, the rich and the poor can use the money in the way that they want. The rich can buy anything they want to help them have a comfortable life and the poor can spend money appropriately. They still feel happy if they satisfy with the things that they have To sum up, the rich and the poor can live with each other although they have many different points.

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Poor is having little money or few possessions. There are many people in the world don't have house. So they are homeless people. Absolutely they don't have works, nutritious food,.. But they don't have ambition like rich people.They are maybe an honest people. Rich people have 2 kinds : evil and kind. Some kind people go to charity and help poor people. But evil people don't mention poor people. They think poor people are like a thing. So if you have a family, rich or poor is not aproblem. Important is you have a peaceful life.
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Some people believe that the best way to create a happier society is to make sure that there is only a small difference between rich and poor. For me, I disagree. The first is fairness, there must be a small difference between the small difference between the rich and the poor. No, no, because the difference is the difference between the rich and the poor, the poor will not accept that and society too, we live in a peaceful world, that difference can be Cause war at any time. The second thing we need to talk about is a happy society, a happy society when everyone is happy, in general, when we sit here, eat, dress, can live thoughtfully, but every people in other places, they don't eat enough to eat, even though they have no clothes, houses do not live, everyday only hope for food, such clothes are the difference between rich and poor , So think of it as a happy society? What we need to do is share, empathize or be more open to people who have a hard life.
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Some people believe that the best way to create a happier society is to make sure that there is only a small difference between the rich and the poor. For me, I disagree. The first reason is fairness. There must be a small difference between the small difference between the rich and the poor. No, no, because the difference is the difference between the rich and the poor, the poor will not accept that and society too, we live in a peaceful world, that difference can be Cause war at any time. The second thing we need to talk about is a happy society, a happy society when everyone is happy, in general, when we sit here, eat, dress, can live thoughtfully, but every people in other places, they don't eat enough to eat, even though they have no clothes, houses do not live, everyday only hope for food, such clothes are the difference between rich and poor , So think of it as a happy society? What we need to do is share, empathize or be more open to people who have a hard life.

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"Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that only small differences between the rich and the poor". I disagree that small differences between the rich and the poor produce a happier society. I thinking between rich and poor must be balanced. The equilibrium state is the ideal state for all things. If the poor more than the rich the society arise many thieves, murders because of poverty life. If the rich more than the poor because production and business need Natual resources with a big number. they will be depleted exploitation make climate change. The climate change causing natural disasters, floods, epidemics.
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Time : 2020-08-06 14:58:50

 

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên còn mắc nhiều lỗi về ngữ pháp và diễn đạt. Em cố gắng diễn đạt mạch lạc, rõ ràng bằng những câu đơn giản trước đã nhé!

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