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Some believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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I disagree
Gửi lúc: 22:13:38 ngày 23-06-2020
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Time : 2020-07-17 08:24:32

Em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

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Spoken communication could be powerful in some situation, while written communication could also be influential in some cases. At most of the time, spoken communication could be more efficient and lively. First, oral communication could convey the message to the maximum number of people in the short period of time. When a president or politician gives a speech, they will definitely use oral communication, and broadcasted live to the citizens. In addition, spoken communication is lively and could be contagious. When people wanted to express their emotions, speaking directly to others could make people understand your words, read your body language and facial expression. They could not only get the verbal meanings but also could read between the lines and know your underlying message. On the other hand, written communication could be formal and well documented. For example, when one undergo a purchase procedure, both buyer and seller are required to keep a paper written contract. There are several reasons that written communication is powerful in this situation. First, legal evidence is available due to safekeeping the record. Second, referring the message will be easy and convincible. Finally, the chance of misinterpretation of message is very less, because the words are carefully chosen. Therefore, written communication is a formal communication, which is used in schools, college and business world. In conclusion, both method of communication are powerful in some cases, people should choose the appropriate way expressing our idea at the certain moments.
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https://essayforum.com/writing/power-spoken-communication-85217/

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I agree because it can help us more confident. We still can learn more things about our life. We will be able to have more friends. Next spoken communication is more convinient than written communication. When we write something and send to friend they still can understand a little bit. But when we tell to them about that problem and explain more they will understand better. I hope everybody will speak to each other more. If there are many mistakes in this essay I hope teacher help me fix it and if I write short, how will I be able to write longer
Gửi lúc: 21:43:47 ngày 23-06-2020
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Time : 2020-07-28 17:36:34

 

I agree because it can help us more confident. We still can learn more things about our life. We will be able to have more friends. Next spoken communication is more convenient than written communication. When we write something and send it to our friends they still can understand a little bit. But when we tell to them about that problem and explain more they will understand better. I hope everybody will speak to each other more

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

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in my opinion, I like more message to announce than meeting or spoken communication because everyone have been busy, they haven't got more free time. Nowadays most of people use internet, that can connect to around the world fastly. written communication don't take your long time (for example: you can message them anywhere, anytime) If your topic is not serious problem I think you should written communication instead spoken communication. thanks
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Time : 2020-07-28 17:35:48

 

in my opinion, I like more messages to announce more than meeting or spoken communication because everyone have been is busy, they haven't got much free time. Nowadays most of people use internet that can connect to around the world fastly. written communication doesn't take your long much time (for example: you can message them anywhere, anytime) If your topic is not serious problem I think you should use written communication instead of spoken communication. thanks

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cố gắng viết 1 bài essay (gồm 3 phần: introduction, body, conclusion) và trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài nhé!

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It is believed that verbal communication is always more effective than written communication. In my opinion, deciding which one is more powerful than the other depends on certain cases, not just depends on one side. First of all, in some situations, which require facial expressions or body language, oral communication is better than written communication. Dating and public speaking are best examples of this. Emotion icons , a photo or videos can not replace a true smile, the expression of people during a date. Public speaking also needs body language and reaction for the topic or idea, so we can't use written communication instead of using oral communication to present about our opinion. Another thing is that speaking with each other helps us to guess the real emotion of people we're talking to, then we can know more about themselves and understand them better, but can not do that by reading the message. That's why in these situations, a face-to-face conversation (verbal communication) is more powerful than written communication. However, in terms of law and business, written communication is much more important and effective than oral communication. For example, in court, your words might count for nothing if you do not have a valid evidence, like documents, texts, folders, ... to support your argument and your right. About business, it's quicker to send emails to customers, doesn't cost much time, easier to chat with customers and is much more convenient than meeting each of them. In conclusion, because of the mentioned reasons above, it seems that oral communication is better than written communication in situations that needs expressions or body language such as public speaking. Besides, written communication is better than oral communication in law or business. But, both of them have a great influence on human society.
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Time : 2020-07-28 17:36:15

 

It is believed that verbal communication is always more effective than written communication. In my opinion, deciding which one is more powerful than the other depends on certain cases, not just depends on one side.

First of all, in some situations, which require facial expressions or body language, oral communication is better than written communication. Dating and public speaking are best examples of this. Emotion icons , a photo or videos cannot replace a true smile, the expression of people during a date. Public speaking also needs body language and reaction for the topic or ideas, so we can't use written communication instead of using oral communication to present about our opinion. Another thing is that speaking with each other helps us to guess the real emotions of people we're talking to, then we can know more about themselves and understand them better, but cannot do that by reading the messages. That's why in these situations, a face-to-face conversation (verbal communication) is more powerful than written communication.

However, in terms of law and business, written communication is much more important and effective than oral communication. For example, in court, your words might count for nothing if you do not have a valid evidence, like documents, texts, folders, ... to support your argument and your right. About business, it's quicker to send emails to customers, doesn't cost take much time, easier to chat with customers and is much more convenient than meeting each of them.

In conclusion, because of the above-mentioned reasons above, it seems that oral communication is better than written communication in situations that needs expressions or body language such as public speaking. Besides, written communication is better than oral communication in law or business. But, both of them have a great influence on human society.

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