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Some people prefer to spend more time improving their careers. Others think that it’s more important to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


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My personal opinion is that if spend more time improving their careers without caring about family and friends, that's a very wrong view for me. And those who think time is important to family and friends is a pretty deep thought. I think if you have a lot of money, it's not as good as family happiness, so you need to take care of your family more.
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My personal opinion is that if spending more time improving their careers without caring about family and friends, that's a very wrong view for me. And those who think it is important to spend time is important to with family and friends is a pretty correct deep thought. I think if you have a lot of money, it's not as good as family happiness, so you need to take care of your family more.

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is a man who is the breadwinner of the family, they go out to make money, and the wife is internal
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There is a saying that "thought creates action." Actions make a habit. Habits make a personality Personality makes fate. " To achieve success, it is not a blessing from the sky, nor is it natural that it needs to start from the smallest habits in work and life. Join CareerLink.vn to learn habits that will help you navigate the path to success. Not afraid to fail One of the famous quotes of Facebook boss Mark Zuckerberg "The biggest risk is not to dare to face risks. In a world that is constantly changing, the only road to failure is to not take risks. ” You cannot create great success if you live in your own safe area. To achieve success, you are constantly challenging yourself, treating failure as an experience to develop yourself. From there, you will discover your hidden abilities. Know how to put your faith in the right place You cannot be successful without trusted friends and associates. This also makes sense in group work or in collective work. You should encourage, encourage and respect the opinions of the members, look for good points in them to put their faith in the right place. This is also the biggest motivation for the team members to promote their strengths, contribute most effectively to the common work. Positive thinking Life is never a carpet full of flowers and smooth but in it are thorns. There are times when you cannot avoid hardships and bitter failures. At such times, always know how to look at the good side of the problem, recognize your own strengths and believe in life. Only when you have confidence in yourself will you be motivated to strive and strive. Surely success is always ahead of you, go look for them if you are really passionate.Great people never walk the pre-programmed path. They are always exploring, discovering new things and asserting their own talents. Therefore, without creativity, you will not take new steps, breakthroughs on the road to success. Therefore, always train yourself to think creatively to best serve your life, your work and the whole society.Do not content with what has been achieved Achieving success is not all. With these people, they always want to reach new heights, bigger goals. Therefore, if you only know how to be satisfied with your position, you will ignore opportunities, hinder your own learning and development. Develop yourself in many areas, constantly learn to create greater success. Know the mistake: Successful people never quibble or blame their mistakes. They admit defeat, learn from mistakes and try to fix it so they never make the same thing. This also shows that they always try to improve themselves, draw lessons for future success. Non-stop learning Life is a journey with interesting lessons. Constantly learn from books, from life to improve yourself every day. According to a study, 88% of successful rich people say they read 30 minutes or more a day to improve their knowledge or skills for work; while only 2% of people who failed failed do it. Therefore, continually learning and improving yourself is a way for you to grow and be more confident. Care about people around you Successful people are never the ones who cluster in their own shells but they know create and maintain relationships. Building a network of sustainable relationships becomes one of the outstanding secrets of successful people. Thanks to that, they meet, exchange experiences and learn from many people as well as help in their work. Therefore, trying to keep your promises means that you are keeping your honor and creating trust in others. This helps you have more good relationships. Especially for successful people, they always believe that credibility is a top priority and always try their best to do that. Know how to listen Listening as if it is very simple, but many people miss success because he refused to listen to others. Always remember that when we listen and understand others, it is about starting a communication and building a relationship. This also shows that you respect the other person. This is one of the most important factors that will help you succeed in the future. Success is not everything you want to do, but it requires a process of cultivating and practicing good habits. Hope these tips can help you to be a valuable lesson when m
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I agree with both points, but I am more of a career than a family, because my career will nurture more knowledge that can take care of my family, but you shouldn't be too concerned about your career. should also have fun with family
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I agree with both points, but I am more of a career than a family, because my career will nurture more knowledge that can help to take care of my family, but you shouldn't be too concerned about your career. You should also have fun with family

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I think money, work also need to be in need. If I do it seriously, wrongly or lazily, what if I get a pay cut. To friendship, love, family also affection, joy. I can confide, cuddle, miss. Those things will never be forgotten. There is no need for anything, I just need honesty. So I think friendship, love and family will be more important.
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Time : 2020-07-31 10:56:57

 

I think money, work also need to be in need. If I do it seriously, wrongly or lazily, what if I get a pay cut. To friendship, love, family also affection, joy. I can confide, cuddle, miss. Those things will never be forgotten. There is no need for anything, I just need honesty. So I think friendship, love and family will be more important.

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