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Many students take part-time jobs while studying at university. Is this a bad or good idea?

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Many students work part-time while studying at university, neither good nor bad. When working part-time jobs, you will have to organize and manage your own time effectively so that you can complete your studies at school as well as part-time jobs. You will become more busy but you will learn how to cherish time.When writing your part-time job in your CV, you will definitely get more attention from employers especially when you have to compete with many. But because the law in our country does not have specific regulations, it is only when students are cheated by job recommendation centers or money taken by job-accepting agencies.
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In free time, I often play soccer, swimming,
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I think their activities are really good because if they do that, they can save their part-time job's money and use them for their hobbies like shopping, buy some books about technology or go date with their darling,etc...and more than, that make these people can be proactive in life, they don;t need money from their parents, they can work to earn money by themself. But, if you asked me that all about of these actives are good, i would say "No" because although they can earn money but they are still students, they can't working so hard, they have to spend their time for study or read books about their lesson, if they don't do that, they will fail at university, they can't take the good point to make their CV more beautiful. So this topic is advantage but also disadvantage with the students are studying at university.
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That's good because college students also need to take care of the future, not relying on their parents, they need taking care of themselves. But they also need learn, they need review for the lesson, they can find a works when they finishing college. They don't need hurry for works, but it is also a good idea, because when they found a job, maybe robots were made to help people. they will do not have a works, they will unemployment and don't have a good works, they will have to go to work for a certain store, their wages will not be enough for their lives. So I throught that is good idea, they will have a good works, their wages will enough for their lives.
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I think it's a good idea, because it can help stundents practice better and improve their future job. And it also help they find money.
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