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In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think the government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.


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It is argued that government is spending a lot of assist on the arts while opponent says that it should be spend on health and education. In this essay will discuss both sides of the essay. On one hand, art which represent the culture and society of a country in different platforms around the globe. Thus, it can be a source of peace and act as an ambassador indirectly because it will represent the country with the rhyming words. Furthermore, we can’t deny our generation talent nor we can spoil their talents just like, every other fields, art also need attention which prosper a country by attracting people to themselves. For instance, if a singer sings mesmerizingly so, a lot of fans around the world will adore to meet him which will help in the boosting of economy as well as, it will create a good impression on foreigners. In contrast, government is responsible to provide basic needs to their people like education and hospitals. They should build a hospitals which can help to overcome diseases and they should also construct a schools, colleges and universities. Additionally, they should provide free education for poor who cannot afford high fesses and provide them funds for the daily lives. If, an individual has basic needs he will have more opportunities to something for his country. In conclusion, I viewed both the opinions spending money on arts and health and education but health and education is important for a country. I feel that, different public sectors can promote arts so, government should pay much attention on health and education.
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In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think the government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
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Arts are far more appreciated nowadays than before, and that's why in some countries, the government would prefer to invest in arts. However, there formed a controversy between people who suppose the money should be spent on healthcare and education, and the people who stands by the government's decision. This requires a more detailed analysis. First, we need to explain why art would stand as a good investment. In my opinion, art is something that will tremendously support human with mental health. Khalil Gibran once said: "Of life’s two chief prizes, beauty and truth, I found the first in a loving heart and the second in a laborer’s hand", and that helps us understand more about the value of beauty. Art is beauty. Through the chronicles of humankind, we have witnessed times when people would break down, but it was a harmony of a song that kept them alive; or when a literature piece could change humanity forever. No matter how much people wants to resist the goods of art, we cannot deny the power of it towards us. Nevertheless, healthcare and education are also in calls of help. COVID-19 has shown us how unprepared we are in medical matters. Also, we must admit that education is something always in need of improvement so as to acquire a better world with better citizens. In conclusion, arts and health and education investments are all crucial, thus, all need to be taken good care of. If we are seeking for a better world, with more eligible citizens, we should give them both physical and mental care.
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In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think the government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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