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Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


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Nowadays, due to development of society, humans’ lifespan has significantly improved than before. Therefore, we have so many types of entertainment like movies, music, museums, art gallery and zoos… Nevertheless, the zoos are argued about whether it is good or not. To a certain extent I agree that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, I also believe that zoos are useful to protect rare animals.

On the one hand, I would agree that zoological parks are beneficial due to protecting wildlife. In other words, it is a fact that the zoos are not only keep the number of animals from harm but also places for everyone to visit in order to directly enhance knowledge of the wild nature in the world. Whereas, for the great majority of people scroll down social media on the Internet or keep their eyes on television, so there are lacks of approaching to reality. Therefore, everyone had better go to places as the zoos and the wildlife parks are essential. In addition, we cannot ignore the fact that hunting problem or threats to hunting have grown in the world. Not only does it have negative impact on the environment but also throw the ecosystems out of balance; and rare animals are in danger of becoming extinct. For example, in Vietnam, the number of elephants is more and more decreasing because of excessive hunting. As a result, the elephants is rarer than before and they are protected in the zoos. If there are no zoos, it will be difficult to persevered from hunters.

On the other hand, I also think that wildlife parks ought to be shut down because it is inhuman. First and foremost, it is true that animals are starving or losing weight because of the zoo’s revenue is not enough to fully feed them or other negative reasons. It means that some animals still are depressed in the zoological parks and encounter disease or death. Secondly, the zoos are the opportunity for a number of the bad-mannered people to have excessive action. For instance, some people throw food in other that some animals can eat in the zoo despite that is banned. The worse thing is that some people even tease animals and they become angry. Although there are bans at the zoos, that people are still rude to animals to make fun. All animals are not amusement, they should be loved and took care. Finally, they are not freedom because human put them into the wildlife parks. In particular, how are people if they are no longer free? We become tired and depressed. Freedom will bring our happiness and good life. Therefore, the animals too, they need to be free in order to grow.

In conclusion, the zoos are lots of advantages due to preserving the rare animals, the places everyone can visit to study about animals. However, they are harmful to animals in some respects as how people treat the animals, their loss of freedom and hunger. In my opinion, the animals should be treated well and carefully taken care of in the zoos. And the government had better strictly control hunting to protect rare animals from extinction. If there are no more hunters, all animals will be free without the zoos.
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Nowadays, due to development of society, humans’ lifespan has significantly improved than before. Therefore, we have so many types of entertainment like movies, music, museums, art galleries and zoos… Nevertheless, the zoos are argued about whether it is good or not. To a certain extent I agree that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, I also believe that zoos are useful to protect rare animals.

On the one hand, I would agree that zoological parks are beneficial due to for protecting wildlife. In other words, it is a fact that the zoos are not only keep protect the number of animals from harm but also are places for everyone to visit in order to directly enhance knowledge of the wild nature in the world. Whereas, for the great majority of people scroll down social media on the Internet or keep their eyes on television, so there are lacks of approaching to reality. Therefore, everyone had better go to places as the zoos and the wildlife parks are essential (off-topic sentences). In addition, we cannot ignore the fact that hunting problem or threats to hunting has grown in the world. Not only does it have negative impacts on the environment but also throws the ecosystems out of balance; and rare animals are in danger of becoming extinct. For example, in Vietnam, the number of elephants is more and more decreasing because of excessive hunting. As a result, the elephants is are rarer than before and they are protected in the zoos. If there are no zoos, it will be difficult to persevered keep them safe from hunters.

On the other hand, I also think that wildlife parks ought to be shut down because it is inhumane. First and foremost, it is true that animals are starving or losing weight because of the zoos revenue is not enough to fully feed them or due to other negative reasons. It means that some animals still are depressed in the zoological parks and encounter diseases or death. Secondly, the zoos are the opportunity for a number of the bad-mannered people to have excessive actions. For instance, some people throw food in other that? some animals can eat in the zoo despite that is banned (grammatical error). The worse thing is that some people even tease animals and they become angry. Although there are bans at the zoos, that people are still rude to animals to make fun (grammatical error). All animals are not amusement, they should be loved and took taken care. Finally, they are do not have freedom because human put them into the wildlife parks. In particular, how are people if they are no longer free? We become tired and depressed. Freedom will bring our us happiness and good life. Therefore, the animals too, they need to be free in order to grow.

In conclusion, the zoos are have lots of advantages due to such as preserving the rare animals, being the places everyone can visit to study about animals. However, they are harmful to animals in some respects such as how the way people treat the animals, their loss of freedom and hunger. In my opinion, the animals should be treated well and carefully taken care of in the zoos. And the government had better strictly control hunting to protect rare animals from extinction. If there are no more hunters, all animals will be free without the zoos.

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Nowadays almost every city has a zoo, keeping and displaying various wild animals. However, there is a dispute on whether zoos are cruel or not. I will examine both sides and then give my own opinion. Some argue zoos are cruel, largely because they believe animals may suffer from living in zoos, where wild animals are caged These creatures do not have enough space to move around and are separated from their family and friends. Zoos are especially cruel for animals that are born in the wild but forced out of their natural habitat. For them, the new environment in zoos could be hard to adjust to. Depression and physical problems may therefore emerge and damage the life quality of wild animals. In some cases, keepers mistreating animals adds to the cruelty of zoos. For example, animals may suffer from not having enough food and water. There are two main reasons why some people believe zoos can good for wild animal protection. First, zoos protect endangered species by offering them much-needed shelter. Having lost their natural habitat, some animals have to rely on zoos for space and food. In this sense, zoos are vital for them to survive and multiply. If all zoos were closed down, these creatures, with no natural habitats left, would have nowhere to seek refuge. Second, zoos raise people's awareness of wildlife protection. Zoos enable people to get close to wild animals and to know how they live. In this way, visitors would develop an affection for wild creatures. As far as I am concerned, zoos, with their facilities and expertise in keeping animals, could be helpful in protecting endangered species from extinction.
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I think, useful to protect rare animals is right!
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lmost every city has their own zoo. But some people argue that zoos are merciless and governments should close them. Others, however, believe that zoos can protect endangered animals. In this essay, both views will be discussed. There are many rare animals that could get proper care in the zoo, such as golden monkeys, red-crowned cranes and pandas. Because most zookeepers receive professional training before they work in the zoo, they know the life styles and diets of the animals they look after. Besides, If animals have diseases, zoos have veterinarians to treat them. As a result, rare animals can be protected by the zoo. Furthermore, some endangered animals live in forests or other places outside of the zoo, so it could accelerate their extinction rates because of the many dangers. For example, environmental degradation could contribute to the destruction of natural habitats, such as deforestation, acid rain and aridity. Moreover, hunters also pose a threat to rare animals. In contrast, some animals really died in the zoo because of inappropriate living environments. According to a report, there was a polar bear named ‘Winner’ that died in the zoo in Buenos Aires in 2012 because of the high temperature. Consequently, some animals should live in a special environment, such as polar bears and penguins. Even though some bad things happen in the zoo, we cannot ignore the professional zookeepers and veterinarians that provide a good life for animals. In my opinion, zoos should not be closed by the local governments because they can protect endangered animals. However, I think that zookeepers should give them more realistic living environments, similar to the environments of their natural habitats.
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I think the zoos is a one of the way to see the rare animals.I don't want the zoos closed because in my country everyone like go to the zoo.The zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed is wrong.You can go to the zoo to see animals and learn about it.
Gửi lúc: 18:14:29 ngày 21-04-2020
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I think the zoos is a one of the way to see the rare animals.I don't want the zoos closed because in my country everyone like go to the zoo.The zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed is wrong.You can go to the zoo to see animals and learn about it.

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