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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think that it is good, while others think it has some disadvantages. Discuss both views.


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Advertising by sponsoring sports is widely debated today, with some people claiming that it is indeed a good thing for donors and sports; by contract, others disagree with this. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now. On the one hand, the collaboration between companies and players or organizers gives many benefits to all of them. Firstly, The athletes would enhance their achievements, when they are paid well and use expensive training tools. Those come from the sponsorship of the advertising businesses. Secondly, a sport would become more popular and attract more players if it received huge funds from investors to organize events to promote it. Football is an example, sponsors have donated billions of dollars to arrange tournaments around the world, thus, it maintains and attracts a large number of fans every year. For companies, advertising through sports sponsorship help them reach and make good impress to the large number of fans. Thanks to that, they can sell more goods. On the other hand, there are some negative impacts of this trend on related parties. Firstly, many sports clubs or athletes have sacrificed their reputation to earn money from advertiser. this issue make fans feel that the sports are commodities, not rewarding games. An example can be seen in Vleague, a Vietnam football tournament, where the clubs change their names following the name of the companies sponsoring for them each year, such as Gach Dong Tam Long An, Bia Sai Gon. Secondly
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Advertising by sponsoring sports is widely debated today, with some people claiming that it is indeed a good thing for donors sponsors and sports; by in contrast, others disagree with this. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now.

On the one hand, the collaboration between companies and players or organizers gives many benefits to all of them. Firstly, the athletes would enhance their achievements, when they are paid well and use expensive training tools. Those come from the sponsorship of the advertising businesses. Secondly, a sport would become more popular and attract more players if it received huge funds from investors to organize events to promote it. Football is an example, sponsors have donated billions of dollars to arrange tournaments around the world, thus, it maintains and attracts a large number of fans every year. For companies, advertising through sports sponsorship helps them reach and make a good impression to the large number of fans. Thanks to that, they can sell more goods.

On the other hand, there are some negative impacts of this trend on related parties. Firstly, many sports clubs or athletes have sacrificed their reputation to earn money from sponsors advertiser. this issue makes fans feel that the sports are commodities, not rewarding games. An example which can be seen in Vleague, a Vietnamese football tournament, where the clubs change their names following the name of the companies sponsoring for them each year, such as Gach Dong Tam Long An, Bia Sai Gon. Secondly

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There is irrefutably true that some companies advertise their products by sponsor sports activities. some individuals opine that there are advantages to the public . while others think that these are disadvantages .in this essay l am going to discuss both opinions before reaching my opinion. To commence with, advantages first and foremost advantage is that these advertise to make the people aware of new companies which are newly launched in the market and they get to know about there products. Moreover, it also opens the vistas of employment for the people as these companies give employment to a large amount of population. Furthermore, it also give benefit to the government because the government will not have to spend a big chunk of money on sports equipment and dresses of sports players. last but not least, the benefit is that these companies pay a high amount of taxes to the government it will help the government to make the process in-country. On the flip side, it has disadvantages thanks to it sometime can promote the companies which have not good products. because people believe that sports person use always better things the faith in these advertisements indiscriminately which lead to they will not get satisfied with the companies products. Summing up, given the above-mentioned information, it is quite evident that there are multifarious benefits of sponsoring sports by companies.it overweight disadvantages according to my sponsoring sports by companies is beneficial for the progress of the nation.
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hello ,my name is duong .i'm ten. as the picture ,is four poster small.in the poster one ,is in t-shirt write fly emirater.it's t-shirt has three color .there are red, white and balck.in the poster two
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On the good side, we see that these companies sponsor soccer uniforms that will help them have a good business because almost people all over the world love football. This will make people pay attention to them and will trust them. As for the bad side, we see this as a football advantage, there are many companies because they want to be famous, they sponsor teams, launch bad shirt styles and change patterns regularly. shirts make viewers pay attention to the shirt patterns, not football.
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The way of advertisement has changed over time, nowadays sponsorship is common among the other ways. Some argued that there are many benefits to advertising, while other people think it has more drawbacks. Both views are valid, in my opinion, the advantages more than disadvantagesnn nOn the one hand, some people claimed that advertising is modern art and is a key part of modern business. The most obvious advantage is that companies can tell us about their product, without it we have fewer choices. For example, most of the people know Nick and Adidas brand through their advertising in the world cup of football. Also, advertising is a creative industry that employs many people, without it, there would be high unemployment.nnSome companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. On the other hand, although, there are advantages of sponsorship they are also some disadvantages. Sometimes advertisements can manipulate people, especially in cloth trends. Furthermore, as we live in consumer culture, advertisement companies persuade us to follow the latest trend and encouraged us to associate a certain brand with a higher status. Moreover, children can easily be influenced by advertisement and some of them put pressure on a parent to buy think. For instance, my smallest brother asked my father to upgrade his phone with every new series.nnTo sum-up, the benefit of sponsorships is a controversial topic, in my point of view the advantages of it overweight the disadvantages.
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