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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?


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ngochantuananh
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nhattoan97

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Ngày tham gia: 24-07-2011

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Due to modern communication devices, people can easily get in touch with each other. One of these platforms is the short message service. Although people have welcomed this way of connecting for its promptitude, in many views it is an improper way of socializing because it will destroy the rules of grammar. First and foremost, people are sending text messages through small sentences and even eliminating the words. To exemplify, they are typing ‘LOL’ instead of laughing out loud or ‘SMS’ for short message service or ‘wud’ instead of would. This sort of typing will only save a few seconds, whereas in the long-run ‘wud’ will stick in people’s mind and ultimately will lead to destruction of words’ right dictation. Admittedly, when an individual uses short sentences gradually the person will forget the formal phrases. A clear example is, most employers are complaining that the majority of their staff are not able to send an official email or use formal words in meetings. By way of conclusion, the text messaging service provides a quick and efficient method of communicating. However,, people have forgotten how to use proper grammar and spelling. I opine that what our ancestors left behind, in other words, our language, deserves more attention to pay.
Gửi lúc: 22:43:39 ngày 30-07-2019
Điểm: 4/10
Time : 2019-09-21 17:56:22

Due to modern communication devices, people can easily get in touch with each
other. One of these platforms is the short message service. Although
people have welcomed this way of connecting for its promptitude, in many views
it is an improper way of socializing because it will destroy the rules of grammar.
First and foremost, people are sending text messages through small sentences
and even eliminating the words. To exemplify, they are typing ‘LOL’ instead of
laughing out loud or ‘SMS’ for short message service or ‘wud’ instead of would.
This sort of typing will only save a few seconds, whereas in the long-run ‘wud’ will
stick in people’s mind and ultimately will lead to destruction of words’ right
dictation.
Admittedly, when an individual uses short sentences gradually the person will
forget the formal phrases. A clear example is, most employers are complaining
that the majority of their staff are not able to send an official email or use
formal words in meetings.
By way of conclusion, the text messaging service provides a quick and efficient
method of communicating. However,, people have forgotten how to use proper
grammar and spelling. I opine that what our ancestors left behind, in other words, our language, deserves more attention to pay.

Có một số ý tốt, nhưng cách trình bày, diễn đạt còn chưa ổn. Cần trình bày rõ ràng, cụ thể hơn nữa em nhé. Hãy đọc nhiều hơn để trau dồi vốn từ, cách làm và cách diễn đạt em nhé. 

mai304

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btw- by the brb -bẻinght ttyl
Gửi lúc: 20:54:48 ngày 30-07-2019
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Time : 2019-09-21 17:57:50

btw- by the
brb -bẻinght
ttyl

Em nên đọc kỹ đề bài, trình bày quan điểm cá nhân về vấn đề. Có thể tham khảo các bài khác điểm cao để biết cách làm, chứ không nên viết những thứ không liên quan đển chủ đề vào bài.  

mailinhanhthuy

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Actually communication through text messaging and other Instant have huge impact on grammar because when people text you something but obivious they're not going to type everything and usually it will little annoying to the one who is reading the text if Message is long enough. That's why people prefer sort sentence instead of correct sentences and that's ruining the essence of grammar. Moreover people should prefer interactive communication rather than text messaging. This will not Only improve communication skills but also effective .
Gửi lúc: 20:19:19 ngày 30-07-2019
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Time : 2019-09-21 17:59:24

Actually communication through text messaging and other Instant have huge impact on grammar because when people text you something but obivious they're not going to type everything and usually it will little annoying to the one who is reading the text if Message is long enough. That's why people prefer sort sentence instead of correct sentences and that's ruining the essence of grammar. Moreover people should prefer interactive communication rather than text messaging. This will not only improve communication skills but also be effective .

Em nên đọc thêm, tham khảo các bài luận để biết cách làm cũng như cách trình bày bố cục như thế nào. Bài của em còn sơ sài, mới chỉ là một đoạn của phần thân bài, chưa đủ thuyết phục.

drpvchinh

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t is true that nowadays, thanks to the rapid development of technology, more and more people keep in touch with others via text messaging or the Internet which are brief and simple. Some people think that it can lead to the evanishment of grammar and spelling. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea. Using some facilities such as social networking sites, e-mail, or instant messaging for communication will cause the downfall of grammar. Due to the convenience and time-saving feature of these means, users tend to take up a habit of eliminating or abbreviating the complex typefaces in messages, which can affect their ability to use correct grammar. For example, some Vietnamese ignore capital letters or punctuation while texting without perceiving it as the reduction of writing and reading skills if they continue to implement wrongdoings. Indeed, if children practice more text language in reality than official language that they are carefully taught at school, their grammar structure will be ruined and thus it becomes natural when they get mature. In addition, utilizing these methods to contact with friends, customers or family members can harm not only their grammar but also their spelling. To begin with, the violations of grammar which common in digital communication are attributed to a variety of trends on social networking sites such as Facebook, Instagram. It is apparent that netizens usually create and use teen codes, new words to communicate with others to capture the public’s attention, resulting in the fact that others imitate such words, which gradually forgets their official language. For example, in Vietnamese, “thảo mai” is a popular word which is made up by unknown people on Facebook instead of “giả tạo”, leading to the fact that many people from youngsters to elderly people use this words and forget about the real one in the alphabet. In conclusion, I believe that grammar and spelling will be disappeared if residents continue to use text messaging and other instant forms of online communication.
Gửi lúc: 20:15:24 ngày 30-07-2019
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2019-09-21 18:01:33

It is true that nowadays, thanks to the rapid development of technology, more and more people keep in touch with others via text messaging or the Internet which are brief and simple. Some people think that it can lead to the evanishment of grammar and spelling. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea.

Using some facilities such as social networking sites, e-mail, or instant messaging for communication will cause the downfall of grammar. Due to the convenience and time-saving feature of these means, users tend to take up a habit of eliminating or abbreviating the complex typefaces in messages, which can affect their ability to use correct grammar. For example, some Vietnamese ignore capital letters or punctuation while texting without perceiving it as the reduction of writing and reading skills if they continue to implement wrongdoings. Indeed, if children practice more text language in reality than official language that they are carefully taught at school, their grammar structure will be ruined and thus it becomes natural when they get mature.

In addition, utilizing these methods to contact with friends, customers or family members can harm not only their grammar but also their spelling. To begin with, the violations of grammar which common in digital communication are attributed to a variety of trends on social networking sites such as Facebook, Instagram. It is apparent that netizens usually create and use teen codes, new words to communicate with others to capture the public’s attention, resulting in the fact that others imitate such words, which gradually forgets their official language. For example, in Vietnamese, “thảo mai” is a popular word which is made up by unknown people on Facebook instead of “giả tạo”, leading to the fact that many people from youngsters to elderly people use this words and forget about the real one in the alphabet.

In conclusion, I believe that grammar and spelling will be disappeared if residents continue to use text messaging and other instant forms of online communication.

Ý tưởng viết bài tốt, trình bày rõ ràng, tuy nhiên em mắc lỗi viết quá dài, nếu chọn lựa ý và từ ngắn gọn mà súc tích thì bài sẽ đạt điểm cao hơn.

camhien9

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Now modern communication devices, people can easily get in touch with each other. one of these platforms which is the short message service. Although people have welcomed this way of connecting for its promptitude, in many views it is an improper way of socializing because it will destroy the rules of grammar. First and foremost, people are sending text messages through small sentences and even eliminating the words. To exemplify, they are typing ‘LOL’ instead of laughing out loud or ‘SMS’ for short message service or ‘wud’ instead of would. This sort of typing will only save a few seconds, whereas in the long-run ‘wud’ will stick in people’s mind and ultimately will leads to destruction of words’ right dictation. In addition, it is embarrassing that typing shorthand is becominge not only a trend, but also is being added to well-known dictionaries. For instance, the word ‘OMG’ meaning "Oh My God"oh my God is being added to the Oxford dictionary. Many argue that this is the legacy that we want to left leave behind. Admittedly, when an individual uses short sentences gradually the person will forget the formal phrases. A clear example is, most employers are complaining that the majority of their staff are not able to send an official email or using use formal words in meetings. By way of conclusion, the text messaging service provides a quick and efficient method of communicating. However,, people have forgotten how to use proper grammar and spelling. I opine that what our ancestors left behind, in other words, our language, deserves more attention to pay.
Gửi lúc: 20:10:10 ngày 30-07-2019
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2019-09-21 17:37:20

Nowadays modern communication devices, people can easily get in touch with each

other. one of these platforms which is the short message service. Although

people have welcomed this way of connecting for its promptitude, in many views

it is an improper way of socializing because it will destroy the rules of grammar.

First and foremost, people are sending text messages through small sentences

and even eliminating the words. To exemplify, they are typing ‘LOL’ instead of

laughing out loud or ‘SMS’ for short message service or ‘wud’ instead of would.

This sort of typing will only save a few seconds, whereas in the long-run ‘wud’ will

stick in people’s mind and ultimately will leads to destruction of words’ right

dictation. In addition, it is embarrassing that typing shorthand is becominge not

only a trend, but also is being added to well-known dictionaries. For instance, the

word ‘OMG’ meaning "Oh My God"oh my God is being added to the Oxford

dictionary. Many argue that this is the legacy that we want to left leave behind.

Admittedly, when an individual uses short sentences gradually the person will

forget the formal phrases. A clear example is, most employers are complaining

that the majority of their staff are not able to send an official email or using use

formal words in meetings.

By way of conclusion, the text messaging service provides a quick and efficient

method of communicating. However, people have forgotten how to use proper

grammar and spelling. I opine that what our ancestors left behind, in other words, our language, deserves more attention to pay.

Có một số ý tốt, nhưng cách trình bày, diễn đạt còn chưa ổn, em chú ý những lỗi ngữ pháp. Cần trình bày rõ ràng, cụ thể hơn nữa em nhé.

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