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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life?


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Everybody think "Learning is the only way to success", but not so. You learn for yourself, for you in the future, for everyone to admire you... But if you do not have ability, you can not learn in University, even you can not learn in high school, you completely become a people person have position in the society.
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Time : 2019-08-19 16:30:50

Everybody think "Learning is the only way to success", but not so. You learn for yourself, for you in the future, for everyone to admire you... But if you do not have ability, you can not learn in University, even you can not learn in high school, you completely become a people person having have position in the society. 

Em cần tìm hiểu thêm về cách làm một bài luận em nhé. Bài của em còn khá sơ sài, văn phong chưa đúng, trình bày bố cục chưa rõ ràng, đủ ý.

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Hello everybody, I'm James and today I want to tell you about this essay. In many school, there are many students study very hard but some students in that school is studying very normal but their communication is very high and they success. And the most important things you know is many subject like science , math, history,... not help your future good but the important things is the communication a processing work that means they're good at : life skills, communication, leadership, teamwork, time management skills, relaxation, overcoming crisis, creativity and innovation. This essay is apply onto when you do a job or you business some thing. The fact that successful people are only 25% due to professional knowledge, the remaining 75% is determined by the soft skills they are equipped with "soft" skills are mainly personality skills people, not professional, can not be touched, are not special personality skills, they determine your ability to become a leader, a listener, a negotiator or a mediator of conflict. . "Hard" skills in the opposite sense often appear on your resume - academic ability, experience and expertise. So I write to much and do you know anything I talk. Apply them, I sure it's good or you and many people, how about you
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Time : 2019-08-19 16:22:39

Hello everybody, I'm James and today I want to tell you about this essay. In many school, there are many students study very hard but some students in that school is studying very normal but their communication is very high and they success. And the most important things you know is many subject like science , math, history,... not help your future good but the important things is the communication a processing work that means they're good at : life skills, communication, leadership, teamwork, time management skills, relaxation, overcoming crisis, creativity and innovation. This essay is appliedy onto when you do a job or you business some thing. The fact that successful people are only 25% due to professional knowledge, the remaining 75% is determined by the soft skills they are equipped with "soft" skills are mainly personality skills people, not professional, can not be touched, are not special personality skills, they determine your ability to become a leader, a listener, a negotiator or a mediator of conflict. "Hard" skills in the opposite sense often appear on your resume - academic ability, experience and expertise. So I write to too much and do you know anything I talk. Apply them, I sure it's good or you and many people, how about you

Em nên đọc kỹ đề bài vì đây là phần thi viết luận chứ không phải phần nói. Hãy tìm hiểu về cách làm một bài luận em nhé, bài của em có một số ý hay tuy nhiên cách làm và trình bày lại chưa đúng.

JAMES

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As you know there are many people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. And I think that is not the case. I think that is one part of our life. Because with me I can find there are many case to prove it. And almost people are succeed in business areas. There are many example for that :

1.Donald John Trump is the 45th President of the United States. Before that, he was known as a billionaire entrepreneur, TV show producer. He is the general manager of The Trump Organization, Trump is also the founder of Trump Entertainment Resorts.In the past, when he was a distributive student, he was about to be fired many times.But now he is the president of the United States.

2. The billionaire Jack Ma. Jack Ma always admits he is not a good learner. He said: "I failed an important test in elementary school up to twice, failed the exam in junior high school 3 times and failed the university twice". Ma had been rejected 10 times by Harvard University and had to take two tests to pass to Hangzhou University twice. And now he is one of the most famous billionaire in the world and the richest billionaire in Asia.

With these case , I can see the most important thing to succeed in life is not the knowledge we learn at school. The most important thing to succeed in life is determination, hard-working and knowledge about your jobs.Learning is not the only way to succeed,it is only the best way to succeed. If you don't learn well, you can still have many different ways.
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Time : 2019-08-19 16:57:33

As you know there are many people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. And I think that is not the case. I think that is one part of our life. Because with me I can find there are many case to prove it. And almost people are succeed in business areas. There are many example for that :

1.Donald John Trump is the 45th President of the United States. Before that, he was known as a billionaire entrepreneur, TV show producer. He is the general manager of The Trump Organization, Trump is also the founder of Trump Entertainment Resorts.In the past, when he was a distributive student, he was about to be fired many times.But now he is the president of the United States.

2. The billionaire Jack Ma.

Jack Ma always admits he is not a good learner. He said: "I failed an important test in elementary school up to twice, failed the exam in junior high school 3 times and failed the university twice". Ma had been rejected 10 times by Harvard University and had to take two tests to pass to Hangzhou University twice. And now he is one of the most famous billionaire in the world and the richest billionaire in Asia.

With these case , I can see the most important thing to succeed in life is not the knowledge we learn at school. The most important thing to succeed in life is determination, hard-working and knowledge about your jobs.Learning is not the only way to succeed,it is only the best way to succeed. If you don't learn well, you can still have many different ways.

Em nên đọc kỹ đề bài, đây là phần thi viết luận nên cách trình bày cần rõ ràng, chia thành các đoạn chứ không phải ở dạng liệt kê, nêu ví dụ là tốt nhưng không nên quá tập trung  vào ví dụ, viết quá nhiều.

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It is commonly believed that just anyone who get good grade and do well in school would be successful in future life. However, it does not have a pivotal role in everyone's success. Some who usually failed in school still can be successful in life. In this essay I will dicuss the reasons behind this case and the crucial factors for achieving success in life.

The first point to consider is that some children do not take their academic work seriously during young age. However, when something happens to them, such as tragedy, or an encouragement that impacts strongly on their mind. It helps them awake and change their thought completely. Adam Khoo, a successful entrepreneur, is an example for it.

Furthermore, not all children are born to have the ability to study in school, some have talent in sports, arts, etc. Hence, they cannot focus on their work in school. Grades in school cannot judge a person, as I have mentioned, it does not have a potival role that can dominate everyone's life. Many always failed in school, but later in life, he or she can be a famous artist or athelete, like Michael Oher.

Factors that help to achieve success in life are many. I elieve hard work is the key to all the success. Path to success is always challenging, and it is fair for people to gain it after a long time of hard work on it. In addition, there is no doubt that encouragement and motivation from parents and friends are the most important one. Without them, one can hardly do anything and more likely to give up.


To conclude, good academic work during school age is just a factor to success in life and it cannot be an only key leading to success in life. Everyone should understand oneself of which I want to do. From that, we can have a clear goal and strive it. Hence, hard work is one of the most important thing to succeed in life.
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Time : 2019-08-19 16:23:53

It is commonly believed that just anyone who get good grade and do well in school would be successful in future life. However, it does not have a pivotal role in everyone's success. Some who usually failed in school still can be successful in life. In this essay I will dicuss the reasons behind this case and the crucial factors for achieving success in life.

The first point to consider is that some children do not take their academic work seriously during young age. However, when something happens to them, such as tragedy, or an encouragement that impacts strongly on their mind. It helps them awake and change their thought completely. Adam Khoo, a successful entrepreneur, is an example for it.

Furthermore, not all children are born to have the ability to study in school, some have talent in sports, arts, etc. Hence, they cannot focus on their work in school. Grades in school cannot judge a person, as I have mentioned, it does not have a potival role that can dominate everyone's life. Many always failed in school, but later in life, he or she can be a famous artist or athelete, like Michael Oher.

Factors that help to achieve success in life are many. I elieve hard work is the key to all the success. Path to success is always challenging, and it is fair for people to gain it after a long time of hard work on it. In addition, there is no doubt that encouragement and motivation from parents and friends are the most important one. Without them, one can hardly do anything and more likely to give up.

To conclude, good academic work during school age is just a factor to success in life and it cannot be an only key leading to success in life. Everyone should understand oneself of which I want to do. From that, we can have a clear goal and strive it. Hence, hard work is one of the most important thing to succeed in life.

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