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Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


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nguyenminhthoai991aa5

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Hello everyone, my name is Tom. Today, I think I would talk about the financial education. Do you think it should be a mandatory component of the school program? In my opinion, I think financial education should be teached in every school. I think it is very important. If you don't know how to control your money, You will use it a bad way. As example. The last Tet festival, I received a lot of lucky money. But I don't know how to use it exactly. So, instead of divided the money into groups to use for a specific purpose, I was spending it on the toys. But when I am older, I think they are too boring. So I throw all of it away. You see, if we don't know how to use money right way, we will waste the money. That money can do a lot of thing. Some example you can spend money the right ways are: -The first method is: You can draw a circle and draw some purposes you think you can use money on, then you show it to your parents and your parents will show you the necessary purposes and the bad one. -The second method is: Say with your parents to give your money to their bank account -The third method is: Donate it to the charity to help the poor children. So, to sum up I think financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program because it is very important for your life. How about you, tell me your opinion about this problem.
Gửi lúc: 22:57:30 ngày 02-07-2019
Điểm: 3/10
Time : 2019-08-14 10:55:51

Hello everyone, my name is Tom. Today, I think I would talk about the financial education. Do you think it should be a mandatory component of the school program? In my opinion, I think financial education should be teached in every school. I think it is very important. If you don't know how to control your money, You will use it a bad way. As example. The last Tet festival, I received a lot of lucky money. But I don't know how to use it exactly. So, instead of divided the money into groups to use for a specific purpose, I was spending it on the toys. But when I am older, I think they are too boring. So I throw all of it away. You see, if we don't know how to use money right way, we will waste the money. That money can do a lot of thing. Some example you can spend money the right ways are:

-The first method is: You can draw a circle and draw some purposes you think you can use money on, then you show it to your parents and your parents will show you the necessary purposes and the bad one.

-The second method is: Say with your parents to give your money to their bank account

-The third method is: Donate it to the charity to help the poor children.

So, to sum up I think financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program because it is very important for your life. How about you, tell me your opinion about this problem.

Em có một số ý để viết bài, tuy nhiên, cách trình bày và diễn đạt còn chưa ổn, bố cục chưa rõ ràng, giọng văn chưa đúng với một bàu luận. Em nên tham khảo các bài viết điểm cao để biết cách làm bài em nhé.

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Carrot87

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Ngày tham gia: 07-02-2019

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In Vietnam there are not many billionaire like in other country. Because almost all parents Vietnamese who protect their son everything due to children are not self- made.Beside that they don not know to manage finance, so there are ideas said that financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program and I agree with this statement.n First and foremost financial education is a subject which can teach students manage finance of themself. Beside that, people can observe see that managing finance daily will help building good habit such as: they spend in a planned way.n On the other hand, studying financial education helps people have many opportunities to develop. For example, saving money then selecting to invest somewhere they want where they can have more experiment they can help them will be success in the future.n To draw the conclusion one can say that financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program because it helps building good habit and has useful life.
Gửi lúc: 20:29:02 ngày 02-07-2019
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Time : 2019-08-13 14:58:45

In Vietnam there are not many billionaires like in other country. Because almost all Vietnamese parents Vietnamese who protect their sons everything due to children are not self- made. Beside that they don not know to manage finance, so there are ideas said that financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program and I agree with this statement.n First and foremost financial education is a subject which can teach students manage finance of themselves themself. Beside that, people can observe see that managing finance daily will help building good habit such as: they spend in a planned way.n Moreover, On the other hand, studying financial education helps people have many opportunities to develop. For example, saving money then selecting to invest somewhere they want where they can have more experiment they can help them will be success in the future.n To draw the conclusion one can say that financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program because it helps building good habit and has useful life.

Em có ý tưởng viết bài, tuy nhiên, cách trình bày và diễn đạt còn chưa ổn, em cần trình bày rõ bố cục 3 phần, cách dùng cụm “on the other hand” chưa đúng ngữ cảnh.

havanhungnga

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It is an obvious fact that financial aspects are a major part of the daily life, as an adult and even as a young individual. Each and every one of us has to make financial decisions concerning recreation, health, education and more. The question is whether to start with financial education as part of school program or to postpone it for a later stage in life. To begin with, being able to understand the value of money, the way the economic system works and to interpret financial news and its implications is a virtue. Without this virtue, an individual, even a young one, might suffer to some extent. For an example, a child who doesn’t understand the concept of money might find it more difficult to except choosing only one present out of more possible ones. In addition, many adults are lacking capability of financial analysis. Quite often, the reason can be the lack of sound foundations or insecurity when it comes to financial terms and concepts. Starting from an early age, building a strong background, can very likely prevent such situation.
Gửi lúc: 20:14:44 ngày 02-07-2019
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Time : 2019-08-13 15:25:21

It is an obvious fact that financial aspects are a major part of the daily life, as an adult and even as a young individual. Each and every one of us has to make financial decisions concerning recreation, health, education and more. The question is whether to start with financial education as part of school program or to postpone it for a later stage in life.

To begin with, being able to understand the value of money, the way the economic system works and to interpret financial news and its implications is a virtue. Without this virtue, an individual, even a young one, might suffer to some extent. For an example, a child who doesn’t understand the concept of money might find it more difficult to except choosing only one present out of more possible ones.

In addition, many adults are lacking capability of financial analysis. Quite often, the reason can be the lack of sound foundations or insecurity when it comes to financial terms and concepts. Starting from an early age, building a strong background, can very likely prevent such situation.

Bài viết của em sẽ tốt hơn nhiều nếu có đầy đủ các phần, cô chưa thấy có phần kết luận.

Buitiencuong6a1

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Recently, there was an argument about school program which involved financial education as a mandatory component. In my opinion,I agree with this point of view. Contrary comments say that school program should still keep history and art beacause they want student remember country's history or improve art talent. Actually, I partly agree with that contrary comments. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. The main reason make me prefer financial education because if someone want to success, they have to manage their money first. Study financial education can help student make a great invest choice in the future. Warren Buffet is a great example, he chose to study financial education and have a lot of great investment make him become the third richest person in the world now. To compared with global, Viet Nam is considered a small country so we need to help our country par with strong economies like China and US. After this essay, you can see there are a lot of advantages about financial education. So why goverment don't make financial education become a mandatory component of the school program?
Gửi lúc: 17:38:06 ngày 02-07-2019
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Time : 2019-08-14 11:39:21

Recently, there was an argument about school program which involved financial education as a mandatory component. In my opinion, I agree with this point of view.

Contrary comments say that school program should still keep history and art because beacause they want student remember country's history or improve art talent. Actually, I partly agree with that those contrary comments. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view.

The main reason makes me prefer financial education because if someone wants to success, they have to manage their money first. Studying financial education can help student make a great invest choice in the future. Warren Buffet is a great example, he chose to study financial education and have having a lot of great investment makes him become the third richest person in the world now. To compared with global, Viet Nam is considered a small country so we need to help our country par with strong economies like China and US.

After this essay, you can see there are a lot of advantages about financial education. So why don't governments don't make financial education become a mandatory component of the school program?

Em có một số ý tưởng viết bài, tuy nhiên, bài còn khá sơ sài, chưa đủ thuyết phục. Em chú ý một số lỗi ngữ pháp và chính tả trong bài. Hãy đọc thêm để trau dồi vốn từ, cách diễn đạt em nhé!

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From my perspective , i agree with the statement ''Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program'' and i think it should be taught as soon as children can be cognitive . You are certainly correct to say that students need to know how to manage their finance when they are old enough to discern what should be done by themselves .People think '' Children shouldn't know about the finance , it is their parents's onus . They only should study about the finance when they are adults.''. But apparently , people whom say like that are ultra when they talk about this problem . They don't know financial education has a great influence on the subconscious and personality of young children .If children know how to manage and control their finance , they will be able to have independence and creative brains .They don't need to depend on their parents . Schools teach finance , it is beneficial to students . They can study how to earn money , control their revenues , and usage of their money correctly . ''A mandatory component of the school program. '' means all students need to study this subject as a rule ,and as i have said before : Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. If students study finance well , they will be greatly successful people in the future , but it will happen if provided that goverment accept finance will be taught at schools .If you compare Viet nam with USA , you will find out the difference of education .American students are educated when they are small , they has freedom of finance , it means that they have been become heir to modern education , which include financial education. In Viet nam , students have to be under the control of their parents What they like but their parents don't like won't be bought and if they want to buy anything , they must be allowed by their parents , children have no private finance since they are in hight schools .And the result is USA become the greatest country and Viet nam are facing to face the difficulty of finance . This example show the benefits of put financial education into the school program . To draw to a close , i 'd like to say ''Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. '' . It is needful to make a good education.
Gửi lúc: 17:04:37 ngày 02-07-2019
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2019-08-14 16:55:59

From my perspective, I agree with the statement ''Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program'' and I think it should be taught as soon as children can be cognitive.

You are certainly correct to say that students need to know how to manage their finance when they are old enough to discern what should be done by themselves .People think '' Children shouldn't know about the finance , it is their parents's onus . They only should study about the finance when they are adults.''. But apparently, people whom say like that are ultra when they talk about this problem. They don't know financial education has a great influence on the subconscious and personality of young children .If children know how to manage and control their finance , they will be able to have independence and creative brains .They don't need to depend on their parents . Schools teach finance, it is beneficial to students. They can study how to earn money, control their revenues, and usage of their money correctly. ''A mandatory component of the school program. '' means all students need to study this subject as a rule, and as I have said before: Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. If students study finance well , they will be greatly successful people in the future , but it will happen if provided that government accept finance will be taught at schools .If you compare Viet nam with USA , you will find out the difference of education .American students are educated when they are small , they has freedom of finance , it means that they have been become heir to modern education , which include financial education. In Viet nam , students have to be under the control of their parents What they like but their parents don't like won't be bought and if they want to buy anything , they must be allowed by their parents , children have no private finance since they are in hight schools .And the result is USA become the greatest country and Viet nam are facing to face the difficulty of finance . This example show the benefits of put financial education into the school program . To draw to a close , i 'd like to say ''Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. '' . It is needful to make a good education.

 

Em có một số ý tưởng viết bài, tuy nhiên, cách trình bày và diễn đạt còn chưa ổn, bố cục chưa rõ ràng, em nên tham khảo các bài viết điểm cao để biết cách làm bài em nhé.

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