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Violence in the media promotes violence in society. What extent do you agree or disagree?


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Violence is always banned and criticized in society. But now, there are still some group of bad people, almost are terrorists, want to benefit by teenagers and Internet to spread violence. Or maybe, they know about violence themselves, also through social media. How can social media do that? Because it contains many ways to access: Social networks, video sharing softwares, or even newspapers, etc... Another reason is from teenagers. They are still young, active and unawared. They can find that violence is something "interesting" (because it makes they feel excited, or even some think that "it is the best way to solve disagreements"). Moreover, some terrorists don't show violence directly. They demonstrate this as "religious discrimination" to trigger violence from some people who have already had "religious discrimination" thought. This caused almost shootings which always made many people who had to experience feel scared and worried. In conclusion, I strongly agree that the media is the "best" way to spread violence, from all it parts. More dangerously, it can be benefited by bad people to do it. Media is not really dangerous, but it depends on the users. So, violence contents should be removed instantly from the media.
Gửi lúc: 22:19:12 ngày 25-06-2019
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Time : 2019-08-06 10:57:02

Violence is always banned and criticized in society. But now, there are still some groups of bad people, almost are terrorists, want to benefit by teenagers and the Internet to spread violence. Or maybe, they know about violence themselves, also through social media.

How can social media do that? Because it contains many ways to access: Social networks, video sharing softwares, or even newspapers, etc... Another reason is from teenagers. They are still young, active and unawared. They can find that violence is something "interesting" (because it makes they feel excited, or even some think that "it is the best way to solve disagreements"). Moreover, some terrorists don't show violence directly. They demonstrate this as "religious discrimination" to trigger violence from some people who have already had "religious discrimination" thought. This caused almost shootings which always made many people who had to experience feel scared and worried.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that the media is the "best" way to spread violence, from all it parts. More dangerously, it can be benefited by bad people to do it. Media is not really dangerous, but it depends on the users. So, violence contents should be removed instantly from the media.

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These days, the development of technology has a big impact on our lives. There are many advantages and disadvantages to people. For example, violent situations are becoming more and more common by using the Internet or the public media. From my perspectives, I totally agree with it for some reasons. First of all, it is obvious that many children spend too much time playing video games like violent games. Therefore, it affects the development of the spirit and makes them more aggressive when they imerge the virtual world. Another one is that in fact some students tend to solve the agrument by the way of fighting or hitting each other rather than having a talk in harmony. The reason for this problem is imitating through violent videos on the Internet. Thus, it is dangerous for the youth who lose the control and seem to have the serious consequences. Last but not least, in the near future the society will become more violent without limiting the abuse of the media. There will have many young crimes who are addicted to violence on some websites. By way of conclusion, it is true that media has many benefits for human beings. On using the Internet, people should consider and have the best choice to avoid the drawbacks because violence in the media has direct effect on violence in daily lives.
Gửi lúc: 22:02:27 ngày 25-06-2019
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Time : 2019-08-06 11:16:31

These days, the development of technology has a big impact on our lives. There are many advantages and disadvantages to people. For example, violent situations are becoming more and more common by using the Internet or the public media. From my perspectives, I totally agree with it for some reasons.

First of all, it is obvious that many children spend too much time playing video games like violent games. Therefore, it affects the development of the spirit and makes them more aggressive when they are in imerge the virtual world.

Another one is that in fact some students tend to solve the argument agrument by the way of fighting or hitting each other rather than having a talk in harmony. The reason for this problem is imitating through violent videos on the Internet. Thus, it is dangerous for the youth who lose the control and seem to have the serious consequences.

Last but not least, in the near future the society will become more violent without limiting the abuse of the media. There will have many young crimes who are addicted to violence on some websites.

By way of In conclusion, it is true that media has many benefits for human beings. On using the Internet, people should consider and have the best choice to avoid the drawbacks because violence in the media has direct effect on violence in daily lives.

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Nowadays, media is an important part in human life from a small child to elderly person. People use this media to get information, knowledge and pleasure as well. Compared to traditional media such as newspapers and radio, people seem spend more time with high tech electronic media such as television, internet, video games and movies. Apart from advantages associated with media it has some drawbacks too. Due to the recent reports of mass shooting and gun violence, the question that quickly comes to mind is whether this aggressive behavior in society could a consequent of violent media. Although, some people argue that it is a controversial issue, in my opinion this has direct relationship to each other and reasons as follows. To start with, now more and more media programs use violence in their main theme. While, television programs have accelerated its’ events on action or rough behaviors including prime time programs, more movies also produced on shooting and fighting topics. On the other hand, school children spend more time with these media than with parents or school. Therefore, when they watch these programs repeatedly, children might tend to practice them their own. It is not a surprise that kid, who watches a wrestling video, may imitate a man that rewarded for aggressive behavior. Child might first do it with his toy and then do it for a friend. In addition, most media have promoted the violence as an acceptable event. Persons in society might learn this as normal, because a child who plays action video game does kicking and killing with delight and a hero in a movie use to beat or threaten to control his opponents. Then, people also use aggressive behavior to solve their day to day problems, thinking that attain violence might bring benefit some time. Another aspect associated with this trend is desensitization of the community. People may not come forward against injustice due to phobia in violence. In conclusion, media may not the sole reason for violence in society. But it plays an important role. Parents should attend more to their children to see what they do, while media authorities should have a social responsibility to inspect the social effect of their programs.THANKS YOU VERY MUCH!!
Gửi lúc: 20:53:59 ngày 25-06-2019
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Time : 2019-08-06 11:19:57

Nowadays, media is an important part in human life from a small child to elderly person. People use this media to get information, knowledge and pleasure as well. Compared to traditional media such as newspapers and radio, people seem spend more time with high tech electronic media such as television, internet, video games and movies. Apart from advantages associated with media it has some drawbacks too. Due to the recent reports of mass shooting and gun violence, the question that quickly comes to mind is whether this aggressive behavior in society could a consequent of violent media. Although, some people argue that it is a controversial issue, in my opinion this has direct relationship to each other and reasons as follows.

To start with, now more and more media programs use violence in their main themes. While, television programs have accelerated its’ events on action or rough behaviors including prime time programs, more movies also produced on shooting and fighting topics. On the other hand, school children spend more time with these media than with parents or school. Therefore, when they watch these programs repeatedly, children might tend to practice them their own. It is not a surprise that kid, who watches a wrestling video, may imitate a man that rewarded for aggressive behavior. Child might first do it with his toy and then do it for a friend.

In addition, most media have promoted the violence as an acceptable event. Persons in society might learn this as normal, because a child who plays action video game does kicking and killing with delight and a hero in a movie use to beat or threaten to control his opponents. Then, people also use aggressive behavior to solve their day to day problems, thinking that attain violence might bring benefit some time. Another aspect associated with this trend is desensitization of the community. People may not come forward against injustice due to phobia in violence.

In conclusion, media may not the sole reason for violence in society. But it plays an important role. Parents should attend more to their children to see what they do, while media authorities should have a social responsibility to inspect the social effect of their programs. THANKS YOU VERY MUCH!!

Em có ý tưởng viết bài, nếu viết ngắn gọn súc tích hơn thì bài sẽ tốt hơn và đạt điểm cao, bài em đang viết quá dài. Bài viết dù có tốt đến đâu mà quá giới hạn từ cũng sẽ bị trừ rất nhiều điểm em nhé!

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Many people play video games on mobile phones, tablets or personal computers. People of all ages and social classes fall into the virtual world in these games. Playing video games can cause harmful psychological consequences. This addiction can easily lead to psychological disorders. When people focus on games, they don't care about relatives or friends. For children, they are easy to fall into autism,
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Time : 2019-08-05 22:53:57

Many people play video games on mobile phones, tablets or personal computers. People of all ages and social classes fall into the virtual world in these games. Playing video games can cause harmful psychological consequences. This addiction can easily lead to psychological disorders. When people focus on games, they don't care about relatives or friends. For children, they are easy to fall into autism,

 

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Nowadays, media is an important part in human life from a small child to elderly person. It is argued that violence in the media promotes violence in society. In my opinion, I quite agree with this opinion.
First and foremost, young children often spend around 5-6 hours of time watching videos over television, such as movies or cartoons, play video games. Most of the movies today have some form of physical violence, and young children who play a lot of violent video games have an aggressive behaviour. As a result, these young ones are exposed to crime and brutality at a very young age and start believing that it is alright to resort to violence.
Moreover, authorities should take some initiatives to curb this. These shows might lead to crime in our society and steps should be taken accordingly.
On the other hand, school children spend more time with these media than with parents or school. Therefore, such shows put enormous emotional and mental pressure on children like depression and anti-social behavior, children who realize this would be wary of their actions in future.
In conclusion, violence in the media not only had positive effects but also had negative effects, so the users of media should be careful.
Gửi lúc: 16:06:21 ngày 25-06-2019
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2019-08-05 22:41:01

Nowadays, media is an important part in human life from a small child to elderly person. It is argued that violence in the media promotes violence in society. In my opinion, I partially quite agree with this opinion.

First and foremost, young children often spend around 5-6 hours of time watching videos over television, such as movies or cartoons, playing video games. Most of the movies today have some forms of physical violence, and young children who play a lot of violent video games have an aggressive behaviour. As a result, these young ones are exposed to crime and brutality at a very young age and start believing that it is alright to resort to violence.

Moreover, authorities should take some initiatives to curb this. These shows might lead to crime in our society and steps should be taken accordingly. 

On the other hand, school children spend more time with these media than with parents or school. Therefore, such shows put enormous emotional and mental pressure on children like depression and anti-social behaviors, children who realize this would be wary of their actions in future. 

In conclusion, violence in the media not only had positive effects but also had negative effects, so the users of media should be careful.

 

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