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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?


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In the context of the fact that technology plays an umportant role in our everyday life, especially education, I think it is obvious that many students at universities study online. Also, it is such a very good and conveniemt way to learn.nnFirst and foremost, for students who do not have conditions to travel far away from there house for many reasons, e-learning is a very convenient way for then to learn more easily. You just need to have a laptop or PC, connect to the Internet and then you can learn everything about your course.nnAnother benefits of this way if learning is that you can nit only minimize the cost of your course such as traveling, ...but also te time you need to spend on course. For example, instead of having to traveling very far and spending a lot of time to go to universities to join your courses, all you need to do is just sitting at home with your laptop and finishing your courses. What will you choose?nnLast but not least, because many universities realize the benefits of doing this by offering many courses on the Internet, I think this e-learning can not only bring them advantages but also benefits much to us.nnIn contrast, despite the fact that e-learning have many advantages, it is also a way of learning having many risks. Just being alert, you can pass the university easily.nn
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In the context of the fact that technology plays an important umportant role in our everyday life, especially education, I think it is obvious that many students at universities study online. Also, it is such a very good and convenient conveniemt way to learn.nnFirst and foremost, for students who do not have conditions to travel far away from there house for many reasons, e-learning is a very convenient way for then to learn more easily. You just need to have a laptop or PC, connect to the Internet and then you can learn everything about your course.nnAnother benefits of this way if learning is that you can not nit only minimize the cost of your course such as traveling, ...but also te time you need to spend on course. For example, instead of having to traveling very far and spending a lot of time to go to universities to join your courses, all you need to do is just sitting at home with your laptop and finishing your courses. What will you choose?nnLast but not least, because many universities realize the benefits of doing this by offering many courses on the Internet, I think this e-learning can not only bring them advantages but also benefits much to us.nnIn contrast, despite the fact that e-learning have many advantages, it is also a way of learning having many risks. Just being alert, you can pass the university easily.nn

 

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HOME INTRODUCE CLASS CO-OPERATE NOTICE - NEWS REGISTRATION SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH NEU Home NEWS The most important benefits of online learning -Elearning for ... The most important benefits of online -Elearning learning for students Benefits of online learning- elearning for students. Here are 9 benefits of online learning that everyone needs to know. September 11, 20180 Share on Facebook Tweet on Twitter Today's learners want an attractive content program that can be learned anytime, anywhere, and personalized. This need is met with online learning mode; Here, students can learn according to their own comfort and requirements. Let's take a look at the advantages of online learning. Online learning meets the needs of everyone Online learning method is best suited for everyone. This digital revolution has led to significant changes in how to access, use, discuss and share content. Online education courses can be suitable for students, even office workers and housewives, at each time that suits them. Depending on their availability and comfort, many people choose to study on weekends or evenings. Lectures can be learned unlimited times Unlike classroom teaching, with online learning, you can access content unlimited times. This is especially necessary at the time of the exam when students are preparing for midterm or final exams. In the traditional form of learning, if you cannot attend a lesson, then you must prepare for that topic in your own way; In eLearning, you can attend lectures whenever you want easily.
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Today's learners want an attractive content program that can be learned anytime, anywhere, and personalized. This need is met with online learning mode; Here, students can learn according to their own comfort and requirements. Let's take a look at the advantages of online learning.

Online learning meets the needs of everyone
Online learning method is best suited for everyone. This digital revolution has led to significant changes in how to access, use, discuss and share content. Online education courses can be suitable for students, even office workers and housewives, at each time that suits them. Depending on their availability and comfort, many people choose to study on weekends or evenings.

Lectures can be learned unlimited times
Unlike classroom teaching, with online learning, you can access content unlimited times. This is especially necessary at the time of the exam when students are preparing for midterm or final exams. In the traditional form of learning, if you cannot attend a lesson, then you must prepare for that topic in your own way; In eLearning, you can attend lectures whenever you want easily.

 

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Hi ! My name is Giang . I'm elven years old. I'm from Thai Bình Viet Nam .I'm in class 6A4. My school is Thi Tran Secondary school. I like pizza and milk. In the morning , I get up a 5.00 a.m . I have breakfast is some bread and milk. I go to school a 6.30 from 10.12 I go home. At 13.30 I go to school from 4.30 I go home. I have dinner at 18.30 .I do homework at 7.00 p.m. At 9.00 p.m I watch TV with my mother and sister. I go to bed a 10.00 p.m. Now I go to school goodbye everyone. See you soon! Bye bye
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Hi ! My name is Giang . I'm eleven elven years old. I'm from Thai Bình Viet Nam .I'm in class 6A4. My school is Thi Tran Secondary school. I like pizza and milk. In the morning , I get up a 5.00 a.m . I have breakfast is some bread and milk. I go to school a 6.30 from 10.12 I go home. At 13.30 I go to school from 4.30 I go home. I have dinner at 18.30 .I do homework at 7.00 p.m. At 9.00 p.m I watch TV with my mother and sister. I go to bed a 10.00 p.m. Now I go to school goodbye everyone. See you soon! Bye bye

 

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Nowadays, online courses are becoming popular in some universities. Although there are some disadvantages when learning over the Internet. But I would argue that there are far more benefits. Some reasons that I think It is beneficial to use online courses. Firstly, If you join a online course, you can save the time for preparing clothes and moving. Example, you must wearing clothes to suitable for school then taking buses or drive to school and when you learn online courses, you do not need do these things, you can save a lot of time. Specially, you do not worry when you do not coming to class and late for school. Online course is the best choice for people in distant places. For people in the countryside, they can save their money and time for moving to school. Another great benefit of online course is that it allows us to watch the lessons many time and you can choose any courses you like. Secondly, they allow learners to study in a flexible way, meaning that can work whenever and wherever is convenient, and you can cover the material at their own pace. Moreover, the cost of a university education can be greatly reduced instead of the development of institutions and skill courses. Finally, online learning offers open access to anybody who is willing to study, regardless of age, location, ability, background. Although the merits of online course, the demerits can not be over locked. Students may not have opportunity to engage face-to-face with your teachers, and will instead have to rely on written forms of communication. Similarly students who study online do not come into direct contact with each other, and this could have a negative impact on peer support, discussion and exchange of ideas. And, the terrible thing that the Internet in your area is week, your exercises will be submitted on time, you will not fully receptive your teacher's assignments. Therefore, your learning depends in part on internet. As a result, while online courses of some universities is developing strongly and effectively. Some disadvantages we can overcome in the future. The last, I think that this is a positive development.
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Nowadays, online courses are becoming popular in some universities. Although there are some disadvantages when learning over the Internet. But I would argue that there are far more benefits.

Some reasons that I think it is beneficial to use online courses. Firstly, if you join a online course, you can save the time for preparing clothes and moving. For example, Example, you must wearing clothes to be suitable for school then take taking buses or drive to school and when you learn online courses, you do not need do these things, you can save a lot of time. Specially, you do not worry when you do not coming to class and late for school. Online course is the best choice for people in distant places. For people in the countryside, they can save their money and time for moving to school. Another great benefit of online course is that it allows us to watch the lessons many time and you can choose any courses you like. Secondly, they allow learners to study in a flexible way, meaning that can work whenever and wherever is convenient, and you can cover the material at their own pace. Moreover, the cost of a university education can be greatly reduced instead of the development of institutions and skill courses. Finally, online learning offers open access to anybody who is willing to study, regardless of age, location, ability, background. 

Although the merits of online course, the demerits can not be over locked. Students may not have opportunity to engage face-to-face with your teachers, and will instead have to rely on written forms of communication. Similarly students who study online do not come into direct contact with each other, and this could have a negative impact on peer support, discussion and exchange of ideas. And, the terrible thing that the Internet in your area is week, your exercises will be submitted on time, you will not fully receptive your teacher's assignments. Therefore, your learning depends in part on internet. 

As a result, while online courses of some universities is developing strongly and effectively. Some disadvantages we can overcome in the future. The last, I think that this is a positive development.

 

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Internet is now accessible for almost everyone. Everything now can be done with Internet, communication, entertainment and even education. Many universities have their own website and some are even giving students the possibility to study without going to classroom, which we know as online courses. Personally, I find it a huge development thanks to the new era of technology where everyone can reach education at fingertips. Not everyone can go to university, some are living so far away from it. And there comes the first and foremost reason of the appearance of studying online. With a small fee, students can learn subjects with no difference from going to the classroom as the lessons of online courses are planned by several university professors and technology experts to maintain a rigid quality. Moreover, as the lessons are displayed in videos so it is easy for learners to retake the courses over and over again and can learn in everywhere and at everytime they want, unlike traditional class. To conclude, I completely agree that online courses has brought huge benefit for humans, leading the world to a world with no illiteracy.
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Time : 2019-07-28 18:03:31

The Internet is now accessible for almost everyone. Everything now can be done with the Internet, communication, entertainment and even education. Many universities have their own website and some are even giving students the possibility to study without going to classroom, which we know as online courses. Personally, I find it a huge development thanks to the new era of technology where everyone can reach education at fingertips.


Not everyone can go to university, some are living so far away from it. And there comes the first and foremost reason of the appearance of studying online. With a small fee, students can learn subjects with no difference from going to the classroom as the lessons of online courses are planned by several university professors and technology experts to maintain a rigid quality. Moreover, as the lessons are displayed in videos so it is easy for learners to retake the courses over and over again and can learn in everywhere and at everytime they want, unlike traditional class.


To conclude, I completely agree that online courses has brought huge benefit for humans, leading the world to a world with no illiteracy.

 

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