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The photo taken at a playground of park depicts the outdoor activity of two kids playing with a scooter on a beautiful sunny day. The scenery around the scene looks quite airy and clean with lots of big green trees and bushes at the far side . I guess, the two children in this picture are twin boys. They are like two drops of water. They are about 4-5 years old. They have black hair, their faces are round with ruddy skin. They are wearing the same clothes and helmet, except the pair of sneakers are not the same. Both of them are very beautiful and their face radiant with smiles. They are using their foot to push the scooter. There is a slide mounted under a steel frame to help the kids slide from the base to the ground. Indeed, sports activity not only brings a healthy body, but also helps to increase height. In addition, the more active children often achieve higher academic results than other children. Therefore, we should encourage our children to exercise every day in order to help them maintain a healthy weight and lead a healthy lifestyle that will help prevent diseases like cancer later in life. Also, the weather is so nice. The sunshine is spreading everywhere, the air is fresh and it is a nice day to play in the park. The two children make the picture become very beautiful and impressive. How lovely and impressive picture is!
Gửi lúc: 23:34:09 ngày 06-04-2020
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Time : 2020-05-09 15:15:21

The photo taken at a playground of in a park depicts the outdoor activity of two kids playing with a riding their scooter on a beautiful sunny day. The scenery around the scene looks quite airy and clean with lots of big green trees and bushes at the far side . I guess, the two children in this picture are twin boys. They are like two drops of water. They are about 4-5 years old. They have black hair. Their faces are round with ruddy skin. They are wearing the same clothes and helmet, except the pair of sneakers are not the same. Both of them are very beautiful and their faces are radiant with smiles. They are using their foot to push the scooter. There are three wheels under a board to help the kids push the scooter on the ground.  is a slide mounted under a steel frame to help the kids slide from the base to the ground.

Indeed, sports activity not only brings a healthy body, but also helps to increase height. In addition, the more active children often achieve higher academic results than other children. Therefore, we should encourage our children to exercise every day in order to help them maintain a healthy weight and lead a healthy lifestyle that will help prevent diseases like cancer later in life. đoạn này không thức sự kết nối với đoạn trên, em nên miêu tả hết khung cảnh trong tranh đã rồi mới tìm cách nối ý đến đoạn này nhé.

Also, the weather is so nice. The sunshine is spreading everywhere, the air is fresh and it is a nice day to play in the park. The two children make the picture become very beautiful and impressive. How lovely and impressive the picture is!

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In the picture, there are two kids. They are wearing the same clothes : yellow t-shirts, red trousers, blue jackets and helmets. They are riding the scooters in a large yard and they look very happy.
Gửi lúc: 22:33:21 ngày 06-04-2020
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Time : 2020-05-09 15:24:15

In the picture, there are two kids. They are wearing the same clothes : yellow T-shirts, red trousers, blue jackets and helmets. They are riding the scooters in a large yard and they look very happy.

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The photo taken in a park capturing the moment thhe two little kids are scooting together, a boy and a girl. They are both really enjoying this activity, with their smiles on their little chubby face. They are siblings, as they wear the same clothes: a blue jacket, a dark yellow shirt inside and currant-color pants, very fashionable. The two are both wearing helmets to help them prevent from injuries. They are scooting on the path, and alongside of it are trees and trees, giving the atmosphere here a really cool and relaxed feeling. The edges of the photo are blurred, aiming to focus on these little kids and give the photo a motion effect of them speeding really fast.
Gửi lúc: 22:02:27 ngày 06-04-2020
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Time : 2020-05-09 17:00:06

The photo taken in a park captures the moment thhe two little kids, a boy and a girl, are scooting riding scooters together, a boy and a girl. They are both really enjoying this activity, with their smiles on their little chubby face. They are siblings, as they wear the same clothes: a blue jacket, a dark yellow shirt inside and currant-color reddish-purple pants, which is very fashionable. The two are both wearing helmets to help protect them prevent from injuries. They are scooting riding scooters on the path, and alongside of it are trees and along it, there many trees, giving the atmosphere here a really cool and relaxed feeling. The edges of the photo are blurred, aiming to focus on these little kids and give the photo a motion effect of them speeding really fast.

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There are two kids in the picture, one boy and one girl. They are riding the scooters. Perhaps, they are fighting who are riding faster than the orther.
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Time : 2020-05-09 15:24:42

There are two kids in the picture, one boy and one girl. They are riding the scooters. Perhaps, they are fighting competing to see who are riding faster than the orther.

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-This children are so happy! -Blue jackets they wore very beautiful.
Gửi lúc: 21:36:36 ngày 06-04-2020
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Time : 2020-04-15 19:54:35

-These children are so happy!
-Blue jackets they wore are very beautiful.

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