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My sister and Mother are doing a charity.
Gửi lúc: 23:45:24 ngày 29-07-2019
Điểm: 1/10
Time : 2019-08-25 10:59:39

My sister and Mother are doing donating for a charity.

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Hello. Glad to see you again. As usual, I'm here to describe the picture above. Hope you will give me a good score. Thank you ! And now, let's start. There are two people in the picture: a woman and a girl. I'm sure that the woman is the daughter's mother. The mother is about 30 years old. She is wearing a light yellow shirt. She has long brown hair, a fair complexon, a tall nose, white teeth and a cheerful smile. She looks quite beautiful ! About the daughter, she is wearing a light grey jacket. She has short brown hair, a white complexion, and a lovely smile, too. Awww, she is so cute ! The mother and the daughter are very intimate. They are looking at each other with the infatuated and merry eyes. So happy ! Look at the picture, as you can see, there are some carton boxes. They record that "Donation Toys" and "Donation Clothes". Well, the "Donation Toys" box contains the toys which aren't used anymore by their owners, and the owners donate theirs to the others. In a similar way, so do the "Donation Clothes". Perhaps the mother is raising the blue T-shirt and letting her kid see it. Maybe their clothes are quite old or they can't wear them anymore, so she wants to share them to the poor people or the others,... And about the daughter, she is holding a car toy. Hmm, I like this. It looks extremely eye-catching. This toy is classical, and modern as well. I don't know how to describe my thinking, but I'm interested in it too much ! Oh, moreover, there are the other toys in this box, etc,... Generally, in my opinion, the mother is teaching her daughter how to help the poor people, or become a kind person,... It's surely a wonderful work. They arranged their old stuffs, and they'll bring theirs to the charitable organizations. Yeah, it's such a noble gesture ! And now, take a look around the picture. Maybe they are outside. The weather is great ! In general, everything is amazing ! I enjoy it so much ! Now, this is the end of my text. Those are all of my descriptions. Thank you a lot for reading it ! Goodbye and see you soon.
Gửi lúc: 23:09:33 ngày 29-07-2019
Điểm: 9/10
Time : 2019-09-12 15:44:56

Hello. Glad to see you again. As usual, I'm here to describe the picture above. Hope you will give me a good score. Thank you ! And now, let's start. There are two people in the picture: a woman and a girl. I'm sure that the woman is the daughter's mother. The mother is about 30 years old. She is wearing a light yellow shirt. She has long brown hair, a fair complexion, a tall nose, white teeth and a cheerful smile. She looks quite beautiful ! About the daughter, she is wearing a light grey jacket. She has short brown hair, a white complexion, and a lovely smile, too. Awww, she is so cute ! The mother and the daughter are very intimate. They are looking at each other with the infatuated and merry eyes. So happy ! Look at the picture, as you can see, there are some carton boxes. They record that "Donation Toys" and "Donation Clothes". Well, the "Donation Toys" box contains the toys which aren't used anymore by their owners, and the owners donate them to the others. In a similar way, so do are the "Donation Clothes". Perhaps the mother is raising the blue T-shirt and letting her kid see it. Maybe their clothes are quite old or they can't wear them anymore, so she wants to share them to the poor people or the others,... And about the daughter, she is holding a toy car toy. Hmm, I like this. It looks extremely eye-catching. This toy is classical, and modern as well. I don't know how to describe my thinking, but I'm interested in it too much ! Oh, moreover, there are the other toys in this box, etc,... Generally, in my opinion, the mother is teaching her daughter how to help the poor people, or become a kind person,... It's surely a wonderful work. They arranged their old stuffs, and they'll bring them to the charitable organizations. Yeah, it's such a noble gesture ! And now, take a look around the picture. Maybe they are outside. The weather is great ! In general, everything is amazing ! I enjoy it so much ! Now, this is the end of my text. Those are all of my descriptions. Thank you a lot for reading it ! Goodbye and see you soon.

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Hello everybody,I'm James and today I'd like to describe this picture. In this picture,I can see the mother and the girl is buy some new clothes and some new toys .Mom who is has black hair and wearing white shirt is play with the girl and she's smile. The girl who is has black hair like her mom, wearing grey T-shirt is playing her toy and she smile with her mom.Mom who is has black hair and wearing white shirt is play with the girl and she's smile. The girl who is has black hair like her mom, wearing grey T-shirt is playing her toy and she smile with her mom.Mom who is has black hair and wearing white shirt is play with the girl and she's smile. The girl who is has black hair like her mom, wearing grey T-shirt is playing her toy and she smile with her mom.
Gửi lúc: 23:08:14 ngày 29-07-2019
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Time : 2019-09-12 15:44:45

Hello everybody,I'm James and today I'd like to describe this picture. In this picture,I can see the mother and the girl is buying some new clothes and some new toys .Mom who is has black hair and wearing a white shirt is playing with the girl and she's smiling. The girl who is has black hair like her mom, wearing a grey T-shirt is playing her toy and she smiles with her mom.

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There are two people in the picture. A woman who is holding a blue T-shirt has got long black hair. In front of her is a box with a sheet of paper which is stuck at the box with title "donation clothes". Next to her is a girl who is holding a toy has got long black hair. In front of her is a box with title "donation toys". I can see another box in the picture which is full of clothes. I think they are mother and daughter. Maybe they are preparing for a charity activity. They look very happy joining the activity.
Gửi lúc: 22:35:05 ngày 29-07-2019
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2019-09-12 15:44:35

There are two people in the picture. A woman who is holding a blue T-shirt has got long black hair. In front of her is a box with a sheet of paper which is stuck at on the box with title "donation clothes". Next to her is a girl who is holding a toy and has got long black hair. In front of her is a box with title "donation toys". I can see another box in the picture which is full of clothes. I think they are mother and daughter. Maybe they are preparing for a charity activity. They look very happy joining the activity.

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The woman and her daughter are putting donation toys and clothes into different boxs. Look at the picture, I think they are very happy because they can help the poor people.
Gửi lúc: 22:30:36 ngày 29-07-2019
Điểm: 2/10
Time : 2019-08-25 12:49:36

The woman and her daughter are putting donation toys and clothes into different boxes. Look at the picture, I think they are very happy because they can help the poor people.

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