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oanhhoachi
Gửi lúc: 2019-07-18 10:39:50
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ĐĂNG PHẢN HỒI CỦA BẠN CHO BÀI HỌC NÀY
CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

nhattoan97

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The photo taken in a lovely room capturing a beautiful moment of a little girl playing piano with her teacher. They both look great together by the way the teacher looks at her little student and the same light blue sweater they are wearing on. The girl has long curly black hair which has been tied neatly behind her head. She is putting a gentle smile on her face, showing a feeling of relieved when practicing piano with her teacher. The lady looks gorgeous and ravishing with her wide smile and her long waving hair. The duet between them seems to be really well! The piano is black and classic, with sheets of paino on it. The room is painted with pink colour which gives it a sense of cute and innocent.
Gửi lúc: 23:12:39 ngày 22-07-2019
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2019-09-08 17:35:31

The photo taken in a lovely room captures a beautiful moment of a little girl playing the piano with her teacher. They both look great together by the way the teacher looks at her little student and the same light blue sweaters they are wearing on. The girl has long curly black hair which has been tied neatly behind her head. She is putting has a gentle smile on her face, showing a feeling of relieved feeling when practicing the piano with her teacher. The lady looks gorgeous and ravishing with her wide smile and her long wavy hair. The duet between them seems to be really well! The piano is black and classic, with music sheets of paino on it. The room is painted with pink colour which gives it brings a sense of cuteness and innocence.

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minanhcutekl

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The little girl and her mother is playing the piano.
Gửi lúc: 22:41:28 ngày 22-07-2019
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Time : 2019-08-25 09:05:54

The little girl and her mother is are playing the piano.

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What I can see first in this picture are two people: they are a woman and a little girl. I guess that the picture was taken in a bedroom. In the background there is a pink wardrobe. Next to the wardrobe is a white table which contains a vase of pink flowers. Look them very beautiful! I also see a wood door behind that table. The centre focus of the picture are two people. There is a woman who has short brown hair and she is wearing a white inner shirt and an outer bright blue jacket with a brown trousers. It suits her. Look her so pretty when wearing this set. Sitting next to her is a girl. I think she is about 9 - 10 years old. She is wearing a blue sweatshirt and a dark blue pants. Her hair is neatly tied. She also has a white skin and a fresh smile. What a lovely girl. Opposite them is a huge piano and there is a sheet music on it. In my point of view, the woman is the piano teacher and the girl is her student. The teacher is teaches her student how to play the piano. The teacher is looking her pupil very affectionate and she is smilling very freshly. I believe that her student will know how to play the piano soon. I hope that she will become a famous pianist in the future. I love this picture very much and I want to go to study piano now!
Gửi lúc: 22:11:07 ngày 22-07-2019
Điểm: 8/10
Time : 2019-09-08 17:35:21

What I can see first in this picture are two people: they are a woman and a little girl. I guess that the picture was taken in a bedroom. In the background there is a pink wardrobe. Next to the wardrobe is a white table which contains a vase of pink flowers. Look they look very beautiful! I also see a wooden door behind that table. The centre focus of the picture are two people. There is a woman who has short brown hair and she is wearing a white inner shirt and an outer bright blue jacket with a brown trousers. It suits her. She look her so pretty when wearing this set. Sitting next to her is a girl. I think she is about 9 - 10 years old. She is wearing a blue sweatshirt and a dark blue pants. Her hair is neatly tied. She also has a white skin and a fresh smile. What a lovely girl. Opposite them is a huge piano and there is a sheet music sheet on it. In my point of view, the woman is the piano teacher and the girl is her student. The teacher is teaching her student how to play the piano. The teacher is looking at her pupil very affectionately and she is smilling very freshly. I believe that her student will know how to play the piano soon. I hope that she will become a famous pianist in the future. I love this picture very much and I want to go to study the piano now!

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They are playing piano together.
Gửi lúc: 21:52:06 ngày 22-07-2019
Điểm: 1/10
Time : 2019-08-25 09:06:18

They are playing the piano together.

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A little girl is practising the piano with her mom in her room. The little girl has a black hair while her mom has a blonde hair. They look very happy
Gửi lúc: 21:55:29 ngày 22-07-2019
Điểm: 3/10
Time : 2019-09-08 17:35:10

A little girl is practising the piano with her mom in her room. The little girl has a black hair while her mom has a blonde hair. They look very happy

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