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Gửi lúc: 2019-07-10 21:04:28
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hoctienganhmitu19

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Ngày tham gia: 08-07-2019

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According to this picture I see, there is a man.He is about 30 years old: green eyes,hight nose and bearded.He is holding a baby. That baby is very small,about six months old. He is very hungry so his father is giving milk to him.
Gửi lúc: 22:40:29 ngày 15-07-2019
Điểm: 3/10
Time : 2019-09-07 18:15:59

According to this picture I see, there is a man.He is about 30 years old: green eyes, a hight nose and bearded.He is holding a baby. That baby is very small,about six months old. He is very hungry so his father is giving milk to him.

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It must be tired for father to feed baby when his mother has to go out home a few days. Standing on the kitchen with baby on hand, the man looks so tired in blue wrinkled shirt matched with tangled short hair. Embracing baby with left hand while right hand carrying a bottle milk, he is feeding milk for baby. Lying peaceful on father’s hand, baby looks so chubby in while sweeter inside and red stripped bib. Keeping nipple on his mouth, baby is drinking milk with his eyes closing. Holding father’s hand, baby feel so comfortable in his father loving embrace.
Gửi lúc: 22:34:24 ngày 15-07-2019
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Time : 2019-09-07 18:15:47

It must be tired for father to feed baby when his mother has to go out home for a few days. Standing in the kitchen with baby in his arms on hand, the man looks so tired in a blue wrinkled shirt matched with tangled short hair. Embracing the baby with the left hand while the right hand carrying a bottle of milk, he is feeding milk for the baby. Lying peacefully in father’s arms hand, the baby looks so chubby in a white sweater inside and a red stripped bib. Keeping the nipple on his mouth, the baby is drinking milk with his eyes closing. Holding father’s hand, the baby feels so comfortable in his father’s loving embrace.

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The man are feeding milk bottle to his baby .
Gửi lúc: 22:33:48 ngày 15-07-2019
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Time : 2019-07-25 15:56:33

The man are is feeding milk bottle to his baby .

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The father is giving milk to his children.
Gửi lúc: 22:33:22 ngày 15-07-2019
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Time : 2019-07-25 15:55:50

The father is giving milk to his children.

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As you can see, the picture describes a father who is bottle-feeding his baby son in the room. The room looks bright and spotlessly clean. There are two big windows in the room and outside the window, we can see lots of beautiful scenery. In front of them are some esstential items which can help people a lot in their work. Between the window is a calender. It is also an useful thing that help people remember the days or month. In the middle of the room, we can see a father and his son. Maybe the mother is busy so the father has to bottle-feeding his baby. The father who has got short brown hair with a square face, a straight nose, beard, moustache and dark complexion is wearing a jean jacket and a watch. He looks so handsome and I think he is very caring. The baby looks so cute and lovely. He is wearing a white long- sleeved T-shirt and trousers. He is sucking milk very strongly. What a nice picture!
Gửi lúc: 21:29:17 ngày 15-07-2019
Điểm: 8/10
Time : 2019-09-07 18:15:32

As you can see, the picture describes a father who is bottle-feeding his baby son in the room. The room looks bright and spotlessly clean. There are two big windows in the room and outside the windows, we can see lots of beautiful sceneries. In front of them are some esstential items which can help people a lot in their work. Between the windows is a calendar. It is also an useful thing that help people remember the days or months. In the middle of the room, we can see a father and his son. Maybe the mother is busy so the father has to bottle-feeding his baby. The father who has got short brown hair with a square face, a straight nose, beard, moustache and dark complexion is wearing a jean jacket and a watch. He looks so handsome and I think he is very caring. The baby looks so cute and lovely. He is wearing a white long- sleeved T-shirt and trousers. He is sucking milk very strongly. What a nice picture!

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