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tolahan
Gửi lúc: 2019-06-19 17:03:36
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nhienglish22
Gửi lúc: 2019-06-19 20:31:18
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oanhhoachi
Gửi lúc: 2019-06-24 23:44:21
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hadim_vn

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Ngày tham gia: 05-04-2018

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There are three men having a chat in a bar in this picture. On the left of the picture, the first man with a checkered shirt is sitting and his right hand is putting on the table. Sitting next to him, the second man with a beard is wearing a blue shirt and looking at the first man. The third man with a blue T-shirt is sitting opposite the first man and looking at the first man too. All of them are sitting around the table and smiling so happy. There are three glasses of beer on the table. Hence, I guess they are friends and drinking beer together. The first man is telling something that makes everyone happy. On the background, we can see a clock hanging on the wall, a big TV screen, a red sofa put against the wall. The bar looks very nice.
Gửi lúc: 23:44:57 ngày 24-06-2019
Điểm: 9/10
Time : 2019-07-27 18:20:34

There are three men having a chat in a bar in this picture. On the left of the picture, the first man with a checkered shirt is sitting and his right hand is putting on the table. Sitting next to him, the second man with a beard is wearing a blue shirt and looking at the first man. The third man with a blue T-shirt is sitting opposite the first man and looking at the first man too. All of them are sitting around the table and smiling so happily. There are three glasses of beer on the table. Hence, I guess they are friends and drinking beer together. The first man is telling something that makes everyone happy. On the background, we can see a clock hanging on the wall, a big TV screen, a red sofa put against the wall. The bar looks very nice.

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9.5/10

oanhhoachi

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Hello. Glad to see you again here. Today, I'll describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you. And now, let's start. What a cheerful picture! In the picture, there are three men. As I see, they are about 35-40 years old. Maybe they are friends or colleagues. I'll describe one by one. First, about the man who is on the left of the picture, he has short black hair, a few white hairpieces, a tall nose and a little beard. He is wearing a plaid shirt. He looks very delighted. His smile seems exciting. Next, about the man in the middle, he has short black hair, white teeth, a tall nose like the man I've just described; and he has pretty much black beard. He is wearing a light blue shirt. He looks enjoyable, too. And the last man, he looks younger than the others. He has brown hair, white teeth, a tall nose, little beard and a fair complexion. He is smiling lightly. In general, these three men are very happy. They are talking together about something. And I think the man who is on the left in the picture is the storyteller. Because of his gesture and the eyes of the others are directed at him. Hmm, these three men are in a restaurant. They are drinking beer and chatting with each other. Their cups of beer look very cool. They are conversing in the hot days or after tired-working days or in an occasion in order to relieve and relax. Well, this time, in the summer, the weather is so hot ! The highest temperature reaches 40 degrees Celsius! This is the appropriate time for the men to go outside and sip some cool drink,...etc,...For them, maybe they're the pleasures, and the men will be more relaxed. Ok, now, I'll have a look at the restaurant. Hmm, it's nice, nice,..yeah, maybe. And it's also quite classic with wooden wall... Finally, I feel this is a wonderful picture. I don't know what to say anymore. Okey, those are all of my descriptions about the picture. This is the end of my text. Thank you for reading and checking it for me. Goodbye and see you soon.
Gửi lúc: 23:44:21 ngày 24-06-2019
Điểm: 10/10
Time : 2019-07-27 18:20:21

Hello. Glad to see you again here. Today, I'll describe the picture above. Hope you'll give me a good score. Thank you. And now, let's start. What a cheerful picture! In the picture, there are three men. As I see, they are about 35-40 years old. Maybe they are friends or colleagues. I'll describe one by one. First, about the man who is on the left of the picture, he has short black hair, a few white hairpieces, a tall nose and a little beard. He is wearing a plaid shirt. He looks very delighted. His smile seems exciting. Next, about the man in the middle, he has short black hair, white teeth, a tall nose like the man I've just described; and he has pretty much black beard. He is wearing a light blue shirt. He looks enjoyable, too. And the last man, he looks younger than the others. He has brown hair, white teeth, a tall nose, little beard and a fair complexion. He is smiling lightly. In general, these three men are very happy. They are talking together about something. And I think the man who is on the left in the picture is the storyteller. Because of his gesture and the eyes of the others are directed at him. Hmm, these three men are in a restaurant. They are drinking beer and chatting with each other. Their cups glasses of beer look very cool. They are conversing in the hot days or after tired-working days or in an occasion in order to relieve and relax. Well, this time, in the summer, the weather is so hot ! The highest temperature reaches 40 degrees Celsius! This is the appropriate time for the men to go outside and sip some cool drink,...etc,...For them, maybe they're the pleasures, and the men will be more relaxed. Ok, now, I'll have a look at the restaurant. Hmm, it's nice, nice,..yeah, maybe. And it's also quite classic with wooden wall... Finally, I feel this is a wonderful picture. I don't know what to say anymore. Okey, those are all of my descriptions about the picture. This is the end of my text. Thank you for reading and checking it for me. Goodbye and see you soon.

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Ngày tham gia: 18-06-2019

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This picture has three men and the first thing I see is the cheerfulness that appears on their faces. And then the three beers were filled on the table, they didn't seem to drink at all, so I thought they were still talking about a story, it seemed that the story was very interesting. And to the right the picture is a man wearing a checkered shirt whose hand being raised, From my point of view he will tell a better story and the other two friends are fascinated by this man. After all, they are really amused because are relaxed after tired days.
Gửi lúc: 22:13:40 ngày 24-06-2019
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2019-07-27 18:20:12

This picture has three men and the first thing I see is the cheerfulness that appears on their faces. And then the three glasses of beers that were filled on the table, they didn't seem to drink at all, so I thought they were still talking about a story, it seemed that the story was very interesting. And to the right of the picture is a man wearing a checkered shirt whose hand being raised. From my point of view he will tell a better story and the other two friends are fascinated by this man. After all, they are really amused because they are relaxed after tiring days.

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hoctienganh13062013

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Ngày tham gia: 23-05-2019

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They are drinking beer in the pub and talking to each other.
Gửi lúc: 21:16:59 ngày 24-06-2019
Điểm: 1/10
Time : 2019-07-16 09:17:10

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letudong

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Ngày tham gia: 19-02-2018

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There are three people in the photo and they are drinking beer.
Gửi lúc: 20:55:31 ngày 24-06-2019
Điểm: 1/10
Time : 2019-07-16 09:17:34

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